Reviews For It's Just A Scratch!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 06:51 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
and here i thought it was over... hehehe! great update! looking for more soon
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 06:00 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
Very tense chapter! and evil cliffie- of course! Nice job Vaness! Sorry I dont get/take the chance to review often- but I've been addicted to this story!
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 05:18 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 04:35 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 03:15 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 03:13 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
Another chapter packing a punch. A common element to this fic has been that intense, sharp intro with its dense description that sets the atmosphere with precision. This atmosphere reeks of evil that is disturbing and repulsive. Excellent job, I was freaked within that first painful wrack and scream. These words of yours escalated Avin’s evil to an all time high– “He watched as her head tilted forward once more and her tongue, acting quite like a proboscis, pushed deep into the widening silver-gray wound” *gross* And your description of Dean’s scream subsiding to a moan to a whisper was shattering. Avin screeching out, “You! The dawl’s damnable anchor” blew me away, so strong, she could feel it. Loved Sam and Bobby working as a team. The way you wrote Sam seamlessly continuing the incantation and Bobby locating his weapon on auto pilot amongst Avin’s unleashed fury was awesome. Gotta love hunters! Your battle scene was outstanding. The action was non stop and Avin’s strikes were original and believable to your story. “A puff of air from her lungs turned into a full force gale, dispersing the caustic, gritty mist throughout the room. Other debris, strewn about throughout the cavernous space, was lifted and tossed about, pinging and bouncing off the walls” added to baddies coming out of a mirror was one powerful confrontation. Well written, I’m exhausted!! I so loved the casual way the brothers interacted, belying yet emphasising Sam’s fear and worry and Dean’s pain and exhaustion. For me, it’s always all about the boy’s connection and you wrote it beautifully. Jokes with the physical support, as much as a crux for Sam as it was for Dean - here is that anchor. Sam carrying it brother, Sam in the car already revving with barely concealed patience. *sigh* I loved every second of it. Fantastic work, no wonder it is a featured story.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 03:07 PM · On: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 02:21 PM · On: Battling Benjamin Booker
If I send you some peanut M&M's M&M's can I have another chapter please (lip quivers in a desperate fashion) Birdie x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 06:42 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 01:32 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Great story! I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Meadows (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 07:18 AM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Poor Dean but love the story it would be just how Dean would have played it - Thanks
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 12:05 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Great story!! I'm loving every minute
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 10:42 AM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 11:28 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 10:01 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Eeeeew. Great description Vanessa! See you again soon.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 07:32 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
That was a riveting chapter and what a cliffhanger, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Reviewer: KimTuohy (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 07:23 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 03:43 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
It ended so soon. How sad. Well, i'm waiting on edge for the next chapter!
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 03:34 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 03:15 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
OMG I held my breath all the way! This whole chapter was non-stop anticipation. Your into was spectacular, gripping, her evilness screaming out the page .Your first paragraph in particular was a masterpiece in description. This sentence freaked me out – “she could feel him - his energy like a static buzz - drawing closer. Hell, she could practically taste him” coz you targeted that intense evilness straight onto Dean in one fell swoop. The drive following Dean was a torturous for me as it was for Sam and Bobby. We felt every inch of that frustration. That truck blocked more than our view of the road, it blocked our damn view of your story and it was all I could do not to skip past it. The pinnacle of this ch was Avin’s meeting with Dean. I wanted her just to get her filthy mitts OFF him, so intense was your description it felt abusive, invasive, soo wrong. Referring to Dean as “the dawl” you made it crystal clear that Dean was her property, not a person at all. Brilliant! This whole story has been an exhilarating ride, but this chapter is a work of genius in writing style and creativity. *standing ovation*
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 01:50 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 01:48 PM · On: Where the Hell Did He Go?
AhhhhhhhhhHhhhHhhhHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOREE!!!!!! Vanessa...the creepiness in which your portray Avin is terrifying. Poor Dean...some creepy, creepy, Creepything getting...um...happy...from his blood....eeeeeewwwwwwwwwww....Dean caaaaaan't get his soul sucked out by THAT thing...it's time for rescuemode in Sam and Bobby...and I sense a LOT of angst after this...pooor pooor Dean...not being able to control his own body? That's gotta be the worst thing that's ever happened to him. Besides Sam dying, anyway. I mean, seriously, not being able to control yourself...Dean's gonna be messed up after this, ain't he? I caaaaan tellllllll.....write more, V, please. I will give you frostinged pastries...that is SO not a verb...frostinged...dang it...now I'm hungry...
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 07:52 PM · On: The One with a Gratuitous Shower Scene
I really loved the focus on Sammy in this chapter. The way you had him surge from his usual gentle, reflective nature to anger, violence - "Sam’s voice rose...In his state of agitation and frustration, Sam was barely able to control himself and not lunge at Bobby...Sam’s tight face and clenched fists" was sensational. His passionate nature ignited by his frustration and fear for his brother. And then you had him regain that control just as quickly - "shutting the door softly instead of giving in to the urge to slam it shut.”Bobby's calm and understanding response to Sam's flair was awesome. My understanding of his response was made clear by your words - Bobby gazed sympathetically at the tall hunter, who, at that exact moment, looked far younger than his years" and I just KNEW where he was coming from when he then called Sam “son" *sigh* I miss John.And that brings us to your shower scene. The reader in me feels Sam's need for solitude here, to calm and regain control because planning requires action not reaction. But the secret side of me noticed "With strong, slender fingers Sam massaged his scalp" so yep, that scene worked for me!!!!Loved Dean's reaction to the "lamb to slaughter" comment and his helpful hint about the handcuffs - you showed us Dean's mind is never still.For me the highlight of this chapter, the part I really want to congratulate you on, is the interchange between our brothers and your clarification at the end of it:- "You sure about this, Dean.” - “Quit worrying, Sam. I . . . I know you guys got my back.”- "Sam would worry every second Dean was in danger. However, he wouldn’t let it interfere with protecting Dean in every way imaginable. After all, he, too, was his father’s son—a hunter—and had learned his lessons well."Just the best.
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 01:37 PM · On: The One with a Gratuitous Shower Scene
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 01:21 PM · On: Salt Circles and Comfort Food
Bobby DOESN'T KNOW?!!!!!!! Great Cliff-hanger in a really well researched story. I am liking proactive Sam looking out for big brother Dean and have always seen Bobby in a mentor role to have that played out in your story is kind of interesting too. Really enjoying your work.
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