Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 05:00 PM · On: Awareness Returns

AMAZING, V! Simply love what's happening here...well, it's creepy, but I love it...man, that humming at the end gave me the chills...I could soooo see this as an episode! Please continue soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I promise to update soon.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 04:29 PM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

nice chappy, vanessa.........hate Avin immensely already!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, hun.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 12:24 PM · On: Awareness Returns

Brilliant! Saw you'd updated this so I thought I better read it now before I end up doing something else and getting busy. But seriously, awesome chapter! Loving this story, you've got me really intrigued and I can't wait to find out what's going on. 

Author's Response: Thanks, Rae.  Your kind words mean a lot to me and I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 12:01 PM · On: Awareness Returns

Nice start to my Tuesday!!! Hurt!Dean, barfy!Dean, and handcuffs - really nothing missing from this chapter - and Bobby coming!!!! Hell, if your Kazcon winner doesn't feel like she won - I sure do!!!!

Author's Response:

Ahhh, thank you, lam.  What a lovely compliment you pay me.

I can't tell you how glad I am that you're enjoying this story.

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 11:12 AM · On: Awareness Returns

Good story so far.

Author's Response: Thank you, bayre.

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 05:45 AM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

Hey! It's taken me awhile to read this 'cause I've really fallen behind in reading and writing (so many great stories to catch up on) - Anyway, fantastic chapter and awesome fight scene, it was absolutely brilliant and I can't wait to find out what else you have in store for us :D

Author's Response: I'm so very glad you found the fight scene awesome.  That really means a lot to me.  Good to know you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:28 PM · On: Avin Calling

Building the suspense really well Vanessa! Sorry I'm late to this, trying hard to catch up. I'm reading straight on now!


Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying it, ciel4.

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 07:01 PM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

poor sam had to knock out dean now both of them are going to have to apologize..cant wait to see what comes next

Author's Response: Thank you, zero.  Hopefully, I won't disappoint.  :-)

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 03:08 PM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

That was a great chapter Vanessa, you did a terrific work with the fight scene. Avin is behind this, she controlled him in some way. Dean is waking up, I'm wondering if he'll be himself. I hope that Bobby'll find what to do to fix this. Riveting story, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Oceane.  It's very good to know that you enjoyed Chapter 3 so much.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 02:07 PM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

Very good!  Lots of action---good thing Sam has such quick reflexes.  I wonder what's interrrupting the smooth flow of their lives?

Author's Response: Glad you liked this addition.  :-)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 04:26 PM · On: Avin Calling

Shower scenes, Vanessa !!!! come on now....give Tammy her money's worth.....!!!!!!!    we'll live vicariously hanging onto her shirt tails......

 

Author's Response: Hmm, was it too much or not enough??  :-)

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 08:30 PM · On: Avin Calling

Awesome start to the story Vanessa. I cant wait to see whats up with that 'scratch' but it dont look good for any brotherly bonding- or at least not as long as Dean has that knife in his hand.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tree.  I'm very happy to hear that you're liking this effort so far.

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 04:41 PM · On: Avin Calling

Straight in there with buckets of tension, breath-taking scenery (Dean - shower scene mm-mmm), then awesome cliffie!!  Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm happy to know you're liking this so far.  More to come soon.