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Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 05:49 PM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

nice.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 05:39 PM · On: Avin Calling

not bad....i like it

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 05:19 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Vanessa you mean thing . I was enjoying this chapter and then , " give me ten minuets and i`ll call you back."  Love me some hurt Dean. well done more please. thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 08:50 AM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Aha- hopefullly now we'll get to the bottom of whatever's messing with Dean. You had me cringing with the knife-slashing though- had to hand it to you there. Nice chapter though!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 12:01 AM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Cool update! And Bobby's coming!!! Love me some Bobby....Can't wait to hear what Bobby had to say about Avin...

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 11:55 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Bobby to the rescue, gotta love it man.  Great update Vanessa and I can't wait for more.  If I don't catch you in the shout before Friday, Good luck and I'm sure all will be well, take care - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 09:00 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Incredible chapter! 

Thanks for the description of the secespita and for informing me of the difference between that and other sacrificial knives.  I appreciate the education!

Geez!  Poor Dean!  He's going to be a tenderized pork roast by the time you finish with him.

A gray wound---definitely wasn't expecting that!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 08:38 PM · On: Awareness Returns

Love the angst!  Slather it on till I need Prozac. 

I like Sam's wariness when Dean regains consciousness.  You did and excellent job protraying that.

I'll be all your readers want to assist with handcuffing Dean.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 05:46 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Eeeek! She is soooo creepy, Vanessa! Wowwwww...amazing chapter! Unbeta'd? Doesn't seem like it! Awesomeawesomeawesome!!!!! Yaaaay....can't wait for another...this is one of my favorite chapter stories from you....!!!!

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:31 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

great update-cant wait to see where it goes next!

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:31 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

great update-cant wait to see where it goes next!

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:16 PM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

hey great chapter-love bobby's grumbled responses giving way to his obvious affection for the boys-you really did his character justice! and yeh the fight sequence worked well-i have dabbled a bit in karate and it seems pretty logical to me so good job on that too vanessa! -Aliyssa x

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:10 PM · On: Avin Calling

ooooo i was really intruiged to see where this was going but wow that was unexpected! god! nice!! reading swiftly on...

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 03:50 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

great chapter and poor sam constantly having to fight off dean and sew him up

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 03:46 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Hey! Great update - at least it looks like Bobby's gonna be able to help our boys, YEY! Awesome work - looking forward to more!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 03:27 PM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Great chapter V. Glad to see Bobby getting involved and your description of Avin and her ritual was chilling. great work!

Reviewer: Meadows (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 01:24 AM · On: Awareness Returns

Gotta keep reading now. Thanks

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 11:13 AM · On: Awareness Returns

Great chapter V, as always. Love where this is going as I am a huge Bobby fan. Update soon mate!

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 10:24 PM · On: Awareness Returns

You´re mean, this is the worst thing that can happen to Dean, almost killing Sammy. I feel so sorry for him. Please update soon it's an excellent story.

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 03:48 PM · On: Awareness Returns

great chappy and poor dean not knowing whats going on

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 09:55 AM · On: Awareness Returns

Great job with this Vanessa, really great.  Can't wait to see what's got Dean and I always love any story with Bobby to the rescue. - K

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm having a really good time writing this one.  Ah, heck, I have a good time writing all of them.

:-)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 09:51 AM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

Great update Vanessa, and you have to love Bobby.  Moving on..K

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 12:24 AM · On: Awareness Returns

Always too big and bad to admit to anything, huh?

That line is spot on Vanessa - it sums Dean up perfectly. Another great chapter, see you soon!



Author's Response: Thank you, ciel4.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 08:11 PM · On: Awareness Returns

Great update and the end of it, suspenseful. Hope that Sam'll have time to handcuff Dean before he attacks him. Riveting story Vanessa, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response: Thank you, Oceane.  I'm so glad your enjoying this effort of mine.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 07:41 PM · On: Awareness Returns

Well, on one hand- handcuffed Dean could be quite interesting, but unfortunately in the context of your story I dont think its gonna be a positive experience for either one of them. Kinda glad you got Bobby coming to the rescue. You certainly have me on the edge of my seat trying to figure out whats going on! great job!

Author's Response:

MMMMMMMMM, handcuffed Dean has lots of potential.  Was ALMOST gonna do that to him in my other story Kissing Chaos.  (((sigh)))

Glad you're enjoying this write.

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