Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 04:27 PM · On: Salt Circles and Comfort Food

the THREE WORDS you NEVER want to hear from Bobby.... " I don't know "

usually Mr Igotahandleonthis!!! ....he did say he brought lots of books ...so at least there's some hope.....RIGHT?? Vanessa ?????

Author's Response: Yep, those are definitely three words you never like to hear from Bobby Singer.  But, yes, there is hope, Jude.  :-) 

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 04:55 AM · On: Two Bloody Blades

Thanks for your heads-up re the secespita, it read like a text book definition…and then I got to the word ‘fiendish’ and the part “encrusted with luscious dreied blood” – Dean’s blood! – and I remembered where I was: smack in the middle of a Vanessa–flick, and boy was it gunna get messy. Your resident evil is one major sicko: “Avin pursed her lips and kissed the dagger before darting her tongue out to moisten and lick away a tiny portion of bodily fluid.” I so didn’t want to live that, but of course we do coz you’re the queen of sucking us into the front seat. 

Dean self-mutilating was horrible and very sad. Some major angst!boys was the result and we’re here for the long haul!  Gawd girl…towel, handcuffs, now buck naked except for navy boxers…you’re killing us in slow motion!!!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 03:23 AM · On: Dodging, Weaving, and Disarming

This was an awesome chapter – in story line, excitement and writing style. You’re well and truly into your groove here. Your intro was just the best. “As Sam hit the floor, finely tuned hunter’s instinct took over, and he smoothly regained his feet, settling instantly into a fighting stance. It took him a second longer to overcome the shock that it was his own brother attacking him.” I loved this - you situated us perfectly to feel Sam’s panic and utter confusion. Not to mention Sam in awesome hunter mode. The contrast of Sam as confused, unsure and indecisive after his fright made the fight scene even more powerful. Chalk and cheese. We love the complexities of Sammy - the gentle, passive soul at odds, conflicting with the fully trained, reactive hunter. That fight scene WAS spectacular; you nailed it, your high point for sure.  Outstanding chapter!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 02:24 AM · On: Battling Benjamin Booker

Ominous?! I’m also sus about all that yawning, or am I just being paranoid. Definitely a sign of things to come, intrigue established early…

 

Your description of the flash of pain Dean experienced was excruciating, very graphic that I actually winced.

 How unlike Dean to brush anything off as a crazed notion. He must be too tired to have that hunter radar on alert…

 

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 02:54 AM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

This was soooo worth the wait. Great Chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Hopefully more soon :}

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 03:54 AM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

'..a thousand tendrils of fiendish ebony mist...' poetry.

V. this is an awesome update - well done! Loving it.

Author's Response: You pay me a great compliment, Louy.  Thank you so very much for such sweet words about this chapter.  You've put a smile on my face.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 01:37 AM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

oh yeah, V, 2:30 in the morning....mottled, maggoty face....know i will sleep well after reading this chapter.....yummy

Author's Response:

LOL  You didn't have nightmares, did you?  That little bit was a last minute addition to the chapter.  I somehow couldn't resist.

Reviewer: DEANFAN (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:54 PM · On: Battling Benjamin Booker

Just like all the other chapters, brilliant. Amazing. Poor Dean! Can't wait to find out what happens!

Author's Response: Gosh, everyone's making me blush with all these awesome reviews.  Thank you, DEANFAN.  Your kind words are much appreciated.

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:45 PM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

Definitely worth the wait! Thanks for the new chap, enjoying this one

Author's Response: Thank you, danrac1066.  It's always good to know a chapter was worth the wait.  :-)

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:02 PM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

Ok it is your fault if I fail at school, i've just been sitting here pretending to be 'researching' history but instead I've been reading this story through to the chapter 7..I'm completely hooked..so amazing!!!!!

 -Bex

Author's Response:

Uh oh---I'm a baaad influence.  Eeek.

But I'm glad you enjoyed Chapters 1-7.  More to come soon I hope.  :-)

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 07:45 PM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

very good! i'm ALWAYS anxious for the next chapter...so post soon! :)

Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much.  I promise to keep writing and will post again soon.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 07:35 PM · On: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

Very nice, Vanessa, great action.  Can't wait to read more -thanks for the read - K

Author's Response: It makes me happy to know you're liking my efforts so far.  Thank you so very much.