Damn you I hate when a good fugli story like this has to end, but there where moments that besides scaring SAM it scared the liveing piss out of me. Thank YOu for the good story I'll be looking for more of your stories kid. GRACIAS.

Author's Response: I hope you've had a chance to read more of my stories and have found them equally enjoyable.  Thanks for all of the reviews.

This ride of yours is pertty frisky, but can be controlled to rank this numbered story to a 300+

What a sneak little B****, I'm so enjoying this now not before. Ha ... Ha . . . HA!

 HA . . . . HA . . . . HA . . . HA I really don't think enjoyable, although its not the first time the boys act that way, but for the fact that Dean is being controll by an evil witch. I will forgive him for running out.

I think that bright light image is probably an entity that got in to DEAN. Ether that or this demon has a way to control any being. I do hope that bobby has something.

Something is seriously wrong and its starting to scare me, but its getting good.

Arg! Scary! Some kind of woodoo, maybe? Very cool :)

cheers yt 

Author's Response: Thank you, youthere, for taking the time to read and leave a review.  It's very much appreciated and I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story.

I love this story! It has the right amount od Dean and Sam angst, and i always like stories that have Sam taking care of Dean for a change. Although the drops of blood in water thingy is kinda ewwww, but maybe it's just me. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

What a story, you had me seriously worried for a while there. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Please keep writing. Have I said I LOVED IT!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  Your kind words mean so much to me!  Oh, I definitely will be continuing to write.  :-)

Loved the story all the way through!  Sorry I didn't comment after each chapter, but each one was still as great as the last, and great way to end it I think!  Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you liked the story from start to finish.  It really puts a smile on my face.  Thank you so much!

Awesome finale!  "Blood from a loved one', a perfect antidote to a blood curse. Clever! And stirred with the ritual knife, of course! Very original and a perfect fit to your story and villain.

The anxiety Sam felt with the idea of Dean drinking his blood (disgusting by the way, right up there with the whole 'Avin disgusting thing'!!!) was a great link with the series so it adds to the credibility of your plot. Loved the memory where Sam realised his blood was the key, a detail I missed in your previous chapter, affirming for Sam that he was making the right decision.

Loved Sam's assertiveness to get the job done: the knuckle in Dean's sternum, using a John voice "...Dean, drink-NOW!" Sammy ramping it up, he is afterall, a Winchester and a hunter! Very cool!

Your scene of Dean suffering the after-effects made my heart ache, for both boys, but especially for Sam. "Sam watched in horror... felt his own eyes grow moist at this torture he'd inflicted..." The tears from an unconscious brother matched by the tears of conscious brother, each from different pain yet similar in depth was beautifully written. Just a tasty amount of angst and whump to give us the Winchester connection with being too over the top *applause*

Your two scenes where Dean waited, in limbo, was outstanding - your description was precise in creating an absolute void. A place of nothing. Emptiness, loneliness, eternity just screamed at me.  The jolt Dean felt that let him know he had somewhere else to be, that he didn't belong here because he belonged somewhere else, was the absolute pinnacle of this chapter, because that place was Sam. The warmth from Sammy's touch as the trigger for Dean to return and your incredible words "...the sensation completely surrounded him and his shuddering came to an abrupt and welcome halt" was A.W.E.S.O.M.E. Your blew me out of the water with that whole concept not just the words. Sam is home.

Bobby has been integral to your fic because he is integral to the boys lives. His love for them and his shared history with their family make him welcome in any story and I'm glad you used him. He 'gets' the brothers bond so knew to give Sam the heads up "...before you start...he might...find this painful..." As a surrogate dad and friend he is just the best and you wrote him perfectly to reflect this.

Another rivetting fic from you, thanks for a thrilling ride!

 

Author's Response:

Petra, your reviews are always amazing.  Thank you for paying attention to this chapter with such great detail.  I was so determined for this story to be special and I had that whole blood thing planned from the very beginning.  I'm just pleased to know that it actually worked and came together like I'd hoped.

I hope you continue to enjoy my other story efforts.

really good chapter Vanessa, the blood thing was truly disgusting. I wish I'd thought of it!

Author's Response:

Terry, I can't even begin to tell you how much your comment means to me!  LOL  I know I did well on the digusting part now.  :-)

I really, really, really wanted this story to be special as it was my KazCon auction effort.