Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
I really enjoy this story. Good work so far. I like that Sam is taking care of Dean (or at least trying) but it sure scares the hell out of him. Uh, and what's up with John? Not a grizzly after all? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: *grins* Yep, there's definitely something up with the grizzly. Can't tell you any more than that, though! :-D Probably shouldn't have even told you THAT! Thanks for the review - I really appreciate it!! Megan
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great Story! I can't wait for more but no rush on it as I've read you are busy.
Author's Response: Thanks - glad you like it!! I'm trying really hard to crank some more out, because you all are REALLY motivating me with the reviews. Plus, it's something that's FUN to do! So, Sunday evening at the very latest I will have chapter 4 up. Thanks again! Megan
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
great, great chapter. i am so curious as to why john is banged up but not injured.. what a great twist. is it possible that the bear isnt a normal bear??? i really liked this, and i liked all the first aid description. i love when the facts in stories are accurate. keep up the good work cant wait for me.
Author's Response: Hold on while I deflate my bloated head - WOW! Thank you!! I will tell you that the bear ISN'T a normal bear, but anything more than that will spoil it! :-D I'm glad you liked the first aid - I wasn't sure if I was going into too much detail or not, so I'm happy to know it worked out! Hope chapter 4 lives up to your expectations! Thanks again, Megan
Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
Excellent new chapter! I love your story! I hope John will find his boys very soon, I'm so worried about Dean.
Author's Response: Hi Sateen, Thanks a bunch for reviewing! I'm so happy you are liking the story so far. I can't tell you if John finds them soon, because I can't ruin the surprise - you didn't REALLY wanna know anyway, right? LOL Thanks again, and I'll try to have the next chapter up soon! Megan
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
I thoroughly enjoyed this, a really exciting start. I loved the petulant 13 year old Sam and Dean as trustworthy and reliable as ever. Spot on with the characterisation and humour. Looking forward to reading more. Jane
Author's Response: Hi Janger, Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you approve of how I'm portraying the boys. I am trying to stick with how Kripke has written them! I just posted Chapter 3 - hope you enjoy it! Megan
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 2
That was an excellent start. Forget about it being your first time you are clearly a natural. You have me on the edge of my seat waiting for an update!!!!
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bxxxx
Author's Response: Hi Buttercup, WOW, I am FLATTERED!! Thanks so much for the kind words!! I am so happy you are enjoying it so far. Let me know what you think of Chapter 3! Thanks again, Megan
Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
hey great story, it sounds good and the swearing isnt that bad :D
Author's Response: Hi Emma, Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad to hear you don't think I took the swearing too far! :-D I was worried! I'm glad you like it so far. Please let me know what you think of chapter 3! Megan
Reviewer: NovemberSN (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story line and nice lead-in. Dean in bad shape and Sammy dragging him through the woods to find shelter.....You really know how to start a story with suspense. Good job keeping all three Winchesters in character. Sammy trying to study and Dean throwing M&Ms at him.....(LOL) Yeah, that's definitely Sam and Dean. "Dean would walk on two broken legs to get Sam out of trouble" You really hit the 'bulls-eye' with this line. Dean would do anything to protect his family, especially Sam. Good use of humor and well written. Nice detail and descriptions. I could easily picture the scene in my mind. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Hi November! WOW - thanks for the awesome review! I am so happy you approve! I was really nervous about posting! I hope you like chapter 3! Please let me know what you think! Again, thanks so much for the great feedback - I love it!! Megan
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great start. It's always nice to see a new take on the boys. Curious to know where the heck John is. Poor Sammy if he has to look after two injuried family members....
Author's Response: Hi Iam, Glad you're enjoying the story! Chapter 3 has John in it, but there's still a bit of mystery... ;-) Will Sam be caring for two family members? We will see! LOL Thanks for reviewing! Megan
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
really good start, cant wait to see more.
Author's Response: Hi Devonshire, Thanks for reviewing! I'm a HUGE fan of yours, by the way! :-D Please let me know what you think of chapter 3! It really gave me the runaround! Thanks again! Megan
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