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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Middle Again

Thank you for allowing Dean to find his brother. In Dean's mind both of us are going to kick her sorry demon ass. It's funny how most writers have the capability to allow a read view the hole transition of a character and see through their eyes what is happening. Thank You!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 5 Road Trip

That being is not a vampire for they would not be able to handle the weather. Its funny how you play all four characters. How she tease's the situation with sam, and the way bobby plays along with this situation. This is trully becoming another of my favorites.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 4 First Date

She is a clever and unwanting high B****. She may have put a sleeping spell on SAM, but ? is what does the she devil want with him. Or either one? This is getting a bit personal for the brotherly pack they make. I did say that I'm loving this story.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 Ho Hum Hum Drum

This spirit is a one true B****. Its funny of the statment reply that the ever so gently Dean gives to Sam "I d-don't think heaven has much to do with Dean Winchester, Sammy, " now that is a bit hillerious especaily when it comes out of the bold man himself. I like the story. Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 And This Is The Start, Sleepy Head

This is funny, but yet very somber for poor SAM. With him looking for away to keep Dean alive and try to kill that deal Dean mad e is not going to be easy. Thank you for your literature. I like it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 - So This Is The Middle

First, opening sounds great, but where is this happening and whom are they helping?

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

really really good

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

Oh I think you should definitely keep writing. Your stories are way too good to keep to yourself.
The 'Nick' twist at the end was a mega surprise, even if I never did believe the Nick Bobby met was the same Nick Dean had been working with.
Enjoyed this story enough to have read in one day, naughtily ignoring the beta-ing I should be doing.

Author's Response: Maybe the same Nick, maybe not - but if she is Dean needs to keep one eye firmly over his shoulder! When I get a few other stories under my belt I have feeling the ah, charming, ladies from this one will make a reappearance. So glad you enjoyed this and thanks for the read and review! Angela

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 7 Accused

Am sitting here with my mouth open! What the frell is going on?
What is Gabriella and who do they really think Sam and Dean are?
Still haven't closed my mouth and now I need to leave the computer and go make dinner. Frell frell frell.

Author's Response: Gabriella and Sam have a bit in common if they could get past that wee little no trusting hunters issue - ha!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 5 Road Trip

Oh boy. I was totally wrong expecting romance from this story! Kerry is one nasty piece of work.

Author's Response: It is so nice to see a new review on this ol' thing - lol - and you're right, Kerry isn't going to be prom queen anytime soon - Angela

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

Ooh, shivers down me spine... hell of an ending! hell of a story! Can't believe it's taken me this long to find it on the site!

Author's Response: I tend to write stories in pairs, and I've been toying with revisting Kerry once I tie off some other tales, I'm really glad you enjoyed this! - Angela

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 5 Road Trip

Quick review 'cause i wanna get on to the next chappie! Fantastic!

Author's Response: I was so excited to see another review up on this today! This was my first fanfic, so it sort of snuck under the radar a bit. I had a great time writing it and I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks again! - Angela

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

So so cool, really well written, i was so hooked!
Dix

Author's Response: Thank you so much - this was my first supernatural story and first fanfic, so I was very curious to see what reaction it would get. Great to see a new name suffering through my junk -lol!

Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

I was wondering if that was how Bobby got the new hairline. Well done.

Author's Response: Afraid that is the source of the new 'do! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate the input.

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

DAN,
WOW! THIS WAS ONE DARK WARPED LITTLE STORY. SLIGHTLY EROTIC IN A DEMONIC FASHION, BRUTALLY HARSH, TOUCHING AND SAD ALL AT THE SAME TIME!
LOVE HOW SAM EXPLORES AND DEALS WITH HIS FEELINGS IN THIS ONE AND HOW DEAN NEVER FALTERS IN HIS TRUST OF SAMMY.
GREAT ENDING - I NEVER DID TRUST NICK FROM THE START.
CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR,
POOK

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Amazing home much a theoretically grown adult can act like Christmas morning when checking review box. Back to the drawing board, erg, ah type writer as they say. (Cuz ya'll really REALLY don't want to see me draw!!!!)

Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

WOW. This story is great! Please, write more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, means the world to me! Already typing on new stuff..

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

definately start on something else coz this story rocked! and although it was predictable that it was nick from the time bobby showed up, i still hate that part and the ending was just cruel...like wicked cruel. damn kerry! but you should totally keep writing coz you're definately good at it.

Author's Response:
I hate that it was Nick, too - just seemed like it had to be. Besides, she spent so much time picking on Sam that I had to let her get her hooks in Dean somehow. Guessing she's not really done with that....
Thanks so much for the review - this is my first fanfic

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading your story, looking forward to your nexts, so keep writting , regards Di...........

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - hadn't heard anything from the last few chapters, thought I might have gone too far round the bend. What am working on now is a bit more cheerful

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 Memory Lane

good chapter...a little confusing i thought, but good. anxious to see this upcoming battle. this has been a wicked good story so far and i'm sure the end won't disappoint.

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 9 Work-a-day Dean

DANRAC.
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT.
WHAT A BRUTAL LITTLE BEDTIME STORY. YOUR WRITING FLOWS SO EASLIY BETWEEN THE SIMPLE-DAY -TO DAY WINCHESTER ACTIVITIES TO FULL OUT SUPERNATURAL HORROR.
OOPS....DO I DETECT TESTOSTERONE LEVELS RISING IN CHAPTER 10?
CARRY ON NEWBEE AUTHOR!
POOKEE

Author's Response: I think we have time for a testosterone detour! Thank you so much for the review, these lst 2 chapters were by far the hardest for me

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 7 Accused

The story got better and better at each chapter!!!
More please!

Author's Response: Glad the medical mumbo didn't ruin it - havea little of that in chap 8 so I can get Sam functional again

Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Middle Again

this story is awesome. great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! It will take a couple a chapters more to get to Sam well enough to settle this up

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 5 Road Trip

What did she do with Sam? I hope Bobby finds out who she is soon!
~Kayla

Author's Response: She'll leave a calling card with or without Bobby I think

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 5 Road Trip

awesome. this story is getting better and better with each chapter. anxious for the next one just to see what dean'll do.

Author's Response: It's going to take a while for Dean to get the chance, but he'll get it, promise.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 4 First Date

Wow! I am completely and totally hooked! I am so ready for more. you're doing such a great job with this!
~Kayla

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