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Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 9

Dun dun duhh!!!!

What will happen if magaret spills the beans!?!?!

Loving the story so far, keep up the excellent work!!!!

Bxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 8

VEry nice.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is really good.
I like the way this ch was written.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 8

Thanks for the fast update. I love how John is reading the journal, how Dean put Tabbi in her place, and Sam telling Frannie to call him Sam not Sammy (That line cracked me up. That was great!). Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm glad Dean found one person who was normal at the auction. I'm even happier that he put Tabbi in her place.
You had me fooled about the cars. Although I've heard of all those you've mentioned all I know about the prices is that I couldn't afford them even in my dreams.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

Awww, what a sweet memory of Mary.
I'm glad you had Dean in the Batman tie---that's definitely a Dean thing to do. It was neat that Frank also wore a character tie.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Nice visit. At least Dean and his grandfather have some things in common. Peculiar that those commonalities never breached the gap between Frank and John. People are just wierd.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

It's nice that you made Frank a misguided man instead of a pompous ass.
I like that Dean also had a scholarship to a well-respected college since he also an intelligent person. MIT was a good choice given his aptitude for tinkering with electronics.
Love the oohhs and aahhhs when Dean walks into a room!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like your explanation why the grandfather is a stranger to the boys. Great storytelling!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like that John is still alive and looking out for his sons. I guess I'm reading this backward (I'll have to read "I'm Proud of You Son next"). Oh well, dessert is always better than the entree!
Having Mary's father be a stranger to the boys is going to make for some interesting scenes.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

"I want an oompa loompa now!" oh my god how much is tabitha like veruca salt from willy wonka? Honestly when she said she wanted to meet meet dean the picture of veruca whining about getting an oompa loompa just popped into my head. Tabitha was hilarious and the fact that Dean shot her down was just priceless. I'm really liking this story and i can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 5

Thanks for the new update! Interesting turn of events. Frank's old company being involved in the Winchester's investigation. I love the way you portray Dean opening up to his Grandfather and John's and Sam's thoughts and feelings about the situation. I am so hoping that Frank stays the nice person he is and Dean won't be disappointed. I really think there is a need for "Happy-end Winchester stories" out there!

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great Chapter! I would have thought that Sam would have broke and met with Frank. Will Dean ever find out what Frank said and how will he deal with it. Time will Tell.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 5

really sweet. i hope frank keeps being nice like this and doesn't turn into an ass but only time will tell... definately looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

i love it!!
i love the the conection of dean & grandfather!!!
great story!!!
hope they have a good time in the event and maybe frank introduce him to the people like his grandson!!??
waiting for more!!!

Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hey. I definitly love your stories. I started this one and I am as hooked as with Westcott prepatory...
I hope to read the next chapters very very soon.
You always do a great jog with dean feelings and thoughts. i love it

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

loved it ,I just don't trust the .grandfather, something is'nt rigth with him , or maybe its just me , Ha HA, can't wait for the nexts chapters, Judy , keep writting . regards Diane.........

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great update - I really like the story. Yes, sometimes you have to give people a second chance. I am glad John and Frank are getting along now. I am curious where you will take us next. Thanks for the good read.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great start to the story! I like the addition of the grandfather and can't wait to read where you are going to take it. Off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this story so far! Can't wait to see where you are heading to from now on. You mentioned the other story "I'm proud of you son". Where can we read it? It seems it is not posted on this site? Looking forward to more. Thanks, Dagmar

Author's Response: It's not posted on this site because its not beta read. I haven't had a chance to send it to my beta reader. If your are interested in reading it ,it is on ff.net or on the SN.tv main site, under missing scenes.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

ooo...I really like the way you explained why the grandfather wasn't in thier lives and it's sweet that he wants to see them. I totally can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so curious.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is good. Keeping with character identity is good.
Next......

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is a real touching story. looking forward, to the next chapter, regards Di..........

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