Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/10/07 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

wow, awesome!! Could have been even longer,no problem. Great chapter. Did i tell you i love this story? Did I? Cause, really, I LOVE IT. Amazing description of all the characters, and of their relations. Next chappy only next week?...

Author's Response: Thanks Fredo, so glad you're enjoying, I know it hasn't been action packed, things are beginning to pick up though.  Next chapters done and will be posted soon - K

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 5

awesom chapter, Kel!! love the sex talk John gave Dean...that still has me laughing!! love how you show the relationship between Sam and Dean...also love Dean's realationship with Beth!! awesome job, kel!!

Author's Response: Bambers, you're too damn sweet, first you beta and then you review.. Thanks ;) K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was great. Poor Beth, must be terrible for her to be treated like an outcast. Dean is trying to be a friend of her and he doesn't care what the others can think of that. Still, there're something strange about Beth. Captivating story K, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed.  Leave it to Dean to watch out for the outcast. Thanks so much as always for reading and reviewing, it means the world - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh yes... those EYES.... Love how they come to realize they've both met Dean. Really curious to see how Beth is going to help....

Author's Response:

Yeah, can't help but love those eyes..hm...huh, where was I?  Oh, did I thank you for the R & R- if not thanks ;)

 

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

great job, kel!! i just love this story!! love the whole lizzie borden thing!! can't wait to see what happens next!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks Bambers and I really appreciate your Beta work. Yeah, you have to love Lizzie...lol - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love that you made Dean intelligent!  He would have to be smart to engineer the equipment he rigs for their hunts.

Author's Response: Glad you liked Shannon, Always prefer to think of Dean as choosing what he learns rather than being incapable of learning.  Hate a dumb Dean...lol.  Thanks as always for taking the time to R&R - K

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

So i've decided that Beth is good..and I'm very interested in what's going to happen next.

This is really good, I love the realistic dialogue it helps make the characters much more relatable! I want more!

Author's Response: Thanks for checking it out Impala and more is on the way..lol.  I'm nearly ready to post.  Thanks for taking the time to read and review I'm sure you know how much it means..  - K

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

"I call shot gun" haha cracks me up, I could just envision that and also relate, being the older sibling and having my younger sister rat on me because i'm not "sharing":) I really am liking it so far..glad there's more for me to read.

Author's Response: Thanks Impala, glad you liked, As a younger sister.. I was always the one getting picked on...of course it was always my older sisters fault...lol  thanks for taking the time to review it means a lot - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

How sad that food is an emergency.  I'm glad that Sam is sticking up for his brother!

Whatever Beth has inmind to help Dean out I know I'm going to like it!

Author's Response: Thanks as always for reading and reviewing Shannon, it means a lot that you take the time. - K

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

So you spoiled us with another update :) Whoa, I'm curious to see what's up with Beth. And my heart goes out to Dean - pretending he had breakfast already so Sam can have the lucky charms, and then pizza for the next morning as he can't afford to buy anything else? Aw, how bad is that. But gotta love his protective attidue. I guess I will have to do a whole lot of reading when I come back - lol. Looking forward to it!!! Thanks Kell and take care :)

Author's Response: That's the goal, to leave you tons of updates for when you return..lol.  You have the end of snowbound and plenty of the others, now the kids are back in school.  I hope you have a terrific time in the states, though and I'll look forward to hearing all about it when you return.. - K

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

hey great update

i like it!!!!  and really like this girl!!!

 

so ,, waiting for more!!  :):)

Author's Response:

Thanks Rebecca, glad to know you're enjoying the story.. I'll get an update going soon - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

Okay, now I'm curious!  What power does this girl have over the school?  I got the Lizzie part, but I still don't have a clear idea.  I'm sure that was intended.  Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yeah, can't make things too clear can I...lol.  Gotta keep you all waiting for more.. I'll update soon, thanks as always for taking the time to let me know what you thought - K

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

I too am really enjoying this story. Reading about young Dean and Sam is refreshing. 

My only gripe has nothing to do with this story but is about the fact that I keep finding fascinating stories on this forum that I fall in love with only to discover that they are still works in progress. It would be sooooo good if all the talented writers out there could give us some idea when the next chapter will be posted.

I don't want to sound cross I'm just a frustrated reader that hates waiting for the next installment of anything especially great stories like this one.

I'm beggng here please tell me when I can come back and read the rest. Thank you.

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying Midge.  As far updating I can only promise that I'll do my best. 

I've got four stories going and I try and take turns posting, that said, I'm about to wrap up my Snowbound soooo.. I'm thinking I'll update this middle of next week.  Hope you stick around and wait for it.. Just a suggestion, tons of the writers on the site already have completed works ( myself included) it's always fun to read a finished story..thanks for the review and I'll update as soon as possible. - K