Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm hooked on this story its ridiculous I just love everything about it. I thinks its because Dean is young and that terrible fangirl in me loves the fact that he is a teenager lol..but ah lets not go spreading that around huh :) Anywho great job as usual..and update is eagerly awaited! -Bex
Author's Response: Oh, please as if we're not all fangirls at heart. As for Dean what's not to love at any age, but as a teen, hm.. just nice.. Update'll happen soon, and thanks so much for the review - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
This has got to be one of my favourite stories out there. I just simply adore it! I can't work out if its your writing style or the interesting storyline...I'm going for a little bit of both! Great job. -Bex
Author's Response: Hey I'll take a little bit of both.. thanks for the review and the stars, that's too sweet. - K
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 7
it is slow, but not overly. and i really hope that dean can kill whatever is tormenting beth coz it's creepy! I am enjoying this story. I like the Lizzy Borden thing, I like that you had John just rush off ignoring Dean and I like the reason you give for Dean sleeping with a knife under his pillow. Also i forgot to mention before, but John's little sex talk... the plow and the corn... HI-freakin-larious! totally can see dean reacting that way coz i was laughin pretty hard myself. I'm curious to see what the next chapter will bring.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the slower pace, I really think things will begin to pick up from here on out. And thanks for mentioning the Plow and corn, I laughed like crazy over it..I'll update soon - K
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
interesting. i have to say i didn't get the whole "why they call me lizzie" thing when she was saying it to the bully and then with the teacher was just creepy and i was like maybe she has mind control abilities but then when she was talking to her aunt and said the kid called her lizzie i was like what like lizzie borden and then i gasped coz i was right. this is kinda cool so far and i'm curious how beth's gonna help dean. and ur totally right about his eyes.
Author's Response: lol, glad you liked, and as for his eyes.. hm.... yum. - thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great update k , so this was why Dean started sleeping with a knife under hid pillow. Lorraine
Author's Response: One theory of many Lorraine..lol. thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot - K
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 7
So maybe not the thing to read on my way to bed, hmmm? Enjoying this, hoping Caro isn't headed the Lizzie route. I like the insight into Dean, so not too slow in action as far as I'm concerned
Author's Response: Glad to know it's not dragging, things ought to pick up from here on out..lol At least that's the plan.. thanks for reading and the reivews it means a lot - K
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 7
Kel, absolutely love this story!! great job, love the foreshadow of the future with the knife under the pillow and sleeping near the door to protect Sam. Look forward to the rest. Bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks Bambers... I so appreciate your help and support on this story - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love the Lizzie Borden stroy---so glad you incorportated it more in the story! Now we know why and when dean began sleeping closest to the door and with the knife under his pillow. Cool!
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, glad you're enjoying. Hope to post again soon - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wonderful! You made me even more curious! The more I know about Beth's predicament, the more I want to find out.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed and I hope to keep you hooked..lol. Thanks for the R&R
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
Cool chapter Kel! Love that you explain where the knife under the pillow comes from....
Author's Response: Thanks so much Lisa glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the stars... - K
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hi Kwater, Am enjoying this story way more than I expected to. In the previous chapter I love the line "though for the most part the girls that cornered her in various parts of the school wanted nothing more than details on Dean. " I can so see that happening. However, this last chapter felt disappointing but I can't work out why. It's probably nothing more than it's quite short and I'm impatient for more. I hope the fact that it is short just means the next chapter will be here so much sooner.
Author's Response: Glad you've enjoyed the story up till this point, sorry the last chapter didn't get it done for you, but it was a setup for the next couple... hopefully the rest of the story will be more to your liking - I'll update soon - K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great update! Love how Beth confides in Dean. But the poor guy has to take all the burden again, being there for Beth, taking care of Sammy. And John is leaving once again and the boys are short of money. Awww, damn. Hope Dean figures out a way to deal with all this soon. Very good read so far - thank you :)
Author's Response: Things are gonna pick up now, Dagmar. So glad you enjoyed and did I mention I missed the reviews...lol. Thanks for reading and I'll catch up with you soon - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is just an awesome story!!!! Love it. Just know Dean is about to get in all kinds of trouble. He's got to get money for Sammy somehow, he's going after Beth's monster on his own, and Caro is going to be breathing down his neck..... Damn girl - now I don't know which story to beg for first!!!!!
Author's Response: Ah, Lam, you're a boost for my vanity..lol. I'll get you some of each if that works..lol. Thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter Kel!! You are doing a beautiful job with Dean in this one. And I love what you are doing with John. He did try, but was just so broken himself... Plowing for corn - OMG - parents are lame.... Loved John seeing Mary in Dean. Loved the handkerchief and Dean's reason for having it.....
Author's Response: LAM..I'm missing you girl.. Glad you enjoyed and got a laugh over John's "talk". K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Beth, she was right to tell her story to Dean, he's a great listener and he's a very compassionate young man. Dean knows that it's not a person who killed Beth's parents, it must be something supernatural. Now John is gone for a hunt and Dean didn't have a chance to talk to him about that. Once again Dean is alone taking care of Sam, with not much money. Awesome work K, keep the parts coming, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know Oceane, poor kid can't catch a break, he is Dean though so I'm sure he'll manage..lol. Glad you liked and Ill update soon - K
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
awesome job, kel!! love that beth confided in Dean, and he senses something wrong in what she said!! very cool story so far!! can't wait to read the rest!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks bambers, you're too sweet to take the time to leave a review..lol. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for letting me bounce ideas off of you..K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
Sometimes it seemss all Dean does is give and everyone else takes. really good update Lorraine
Author's Response: Yeah, makes you sad, huh. I guess it's why we all love him so much. Glad you enjoyed and I'll get the next chapter up soon. - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
This a really beautiful story kelly. The bieds and bees talk really funny . Many thanks Lorraine
Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate that Lorraine, so glad you enjoyed the birds and bees I almost took it out. Thanks as always for taking the time to review - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ah Dean has a thing for beth really enjoying this story kelly thanks lorraine
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying. - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ah poor dean too much weight on his young shoulders. Great up date kelly
Author's Response: Thanks yeah, this started out as a ghost story and has become a character study into why Dean's like he is..lol. At least that's the direction it seems to be taking.. we'll see ;) thanks K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Realy god start love the brothers fighting over the front seat and as usual dean giving in. Lorraine
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Dean always seems as if he's giving something up. So glad you enjoyed and thanks as always for reviewing - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
waking up my day off and see you updated that story, what a nice way to start. But, there's something i really didn't like: too short! When i see the Chapter End Notes coming it's just no no no, not yet! I could read ten thousand words chapters from this story. Because it's really a great one, love Beth and Dean, curious to know more about her parents, too bad John has to leave just when his son needs him. Kel... next one, asap!!
Author's Response: Longer, Longer huh.. well we'll see what we can do..lol. So glad you enjoyed Fredo, makes my day to see you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 5
Ah so AMAZING! I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for an update :) -Bex
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying Bex.. It's always great to hear what people think. For me posting will always be a bit nerve wracking...lol. Thanks K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
That was a wonderful chapter. John's talk about plowing field and planting corn, cracked me the hell out, lol. Loved the scene of Dean comforting Beth. Can't wait to know what happened to Beth's parents. Awesome story and work K.
Author's Response: Ah, Beth's chapters up next so your curiosity will soon be appeased. I'm so glad you liked John's analogy..lol. I worked it a lot trying to get a bit of a laugh out of the whole idea of big bad John, talking to Dean about the birds and the bees.. thanks as always for the review - K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 04/10/07 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hi Kel, I am reading fast here trying to catch up with all the updates after a long break :) - just finished Snowbound, now on to this. I like the tension that is buildíng up. Good job as always!! Looking forward to more :) Thanks!
Author's Response: Yeah, well three weeks away I can only imagine the amount of updates to read from me and bambers alone..lol. Let alone all the other great stories you're reading. Glad you enjoyed and I'll update soon. - K
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