Reviewer: minimi19 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great update! I am really enjoying this story, so please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you're liking it, and thanks for letting me know.. I always appreciate hearing from readers it lets me know the story is working (or not...lol) - K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww Man you really have been hanging around B too much! Evil cliffies abide! Ok maybe it's an Amazon thing since I love the cliffy too lol! Poor Dean, yet again this chapter! Worried sick about Sam! But ooooh Sam figured something out and I think I may have too...Books huh? What a coincidence that Beth's father owned a bookstore that her aunt has now taken over....And that mysterious box of books from the old house that her aunt has brought into the new house....Ooooh the intrigue!!!
Please update soon! I anxiously await your next installment of this wonderful tale!!
Author's Response: OOOOh... the intrigue..lol. Well not so much intrigue now as everyone's figured it out...lol. I'll be updating soon no worries, I just have to catch up on my reading ;)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww...Poor Sammy, he did all this for Dean but what he did was dangerous. Maybe when Dean'll know what Sam found, he'll understand. The connection between Lizzie Borden and Beth're the books, very interesting. Terrific chapter Kel, so a captivating story, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane, glad you're enjoying and I'm gonna get an update going soon - Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh No! Dean's heart broken!!! Poor baby Beth pushing Dean away SO not a good plan! *crosses fingers* hopefully Sam can find something to convince Dean that Beth didn't just blow him off! Great update Kel! I'm anxious to read the next chappy!
Author's Response: Thanks Gen, glad you enjoyed...I'll catch you on the next chappy....lol
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
great update! Love that Sam tries to figure things out. This, "At last Dean's voice raised, his face only a hairsbreadth from Sam's. "I couldn't even call the cops. My baby brother goes missing and I can't call the cops. Can you even begin to imagine." Dean backed off, his struggle to re-gain control was obvious." super, shows all fears Dean has about losing his family. And a bit of humor too, "Sam reached Dean's side a lot quicker than he'd have liked. In fact, as he drew close enough to read Dean's expression he considered using his knowledge of the bus lines to simply hightail it out of Fall River.", lol...
Author's Response: Thanks Fredo, glad you liked. My favorite part of writing is when the boys are together, especially when they're in conflict, glad it shows....K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 9
Those poor boys! I feel sorry for them both. Sam was so excited and now that's been dashed and Dean has every right to be angry and frightened. What a wonderful addition to this chapter! It would have been so easy for you to have Sam back in time to meet Dean, but writing it the way you did makes it so much better!
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, well you know how it is, the boys can't have anything easy.
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh no, last chapter, this is so good! I so hope you post soon... LOL DIx
Author's Response: I'm working on it..lol. Thanks so much for reading, I feel like you must have read nearly everything of mine over the last weekend.. lol. Thanks - K
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 9
awesome chapter! looking forward to more updates :)
Author's Response: Updates on the way... glad you're enjoying - K
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved the scene in the kitchen, Sam getting all confrontational, John, too tired, too busy, too distracted and poor Dean trying to keep it all together. Great dialogue. Beth and Caro are really coming alive now. I thought it was wonderful the way they'd both noticed Dean at different times, I must agree, I do think he would stand out in any crowd!! I'm intrigued as to what Beth's going to do to help Dean... On to the next one. J
Author's Response: Yeah I have to admit I can't imagine any red-blooded woman passing on Dean...lol. - K
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well, I can understand Sam's excitement at the thought of the book shop, I feel exactly the same way myself. Mind you, I feel the same way about pizza too!! I love Dean in full-on, big brother mode, making sure Sam doesn't go without. Looks like he might be about to get distracted a bit by Beth, who suddenly seems a little more sinister than last time we met her!! Great chapter. J
Author's Response: Yeah I have to say it's a toss up between pizza and books for me.. Hey we need a bookstore with a pizza parlor, instead of a coffee shop...lol - K
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Beth, it's not a wonder she's not herself!! It's interesting to see a slightly resentful Dean who's not yet addicted to hunting. Love the arguement and the 11 year old Sams' logic....lol. Off to the next one. Thanks J
Author's Response: Yeah I can testify that a lack of sleep is enough to kill ya...Glad you're enjoying... Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
great story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks synera, glad you enjoyed the update. I've been away for the last week, so I'm struggling to get caught up. I'll try and update soon - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 8
Dean, go back there right now! Don't be an ass, don't you realize why she did that?! Grrr. Luckily Sam's gonna do something, right... Great update Kel, love this story. Poor broken Beth...
Author's Response: You do know yelling at Dean's not actually going to help right...lol. Glad you enjoyed the update, and I'm glad I got it posted before I left, beta or no beta at least you got to read it...lol. thanks as always for the support - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
Why can't people be selfish and cling to the people they love even though they are crazy murderers? Great chapter. I feel so sorry for Beth and Dean.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Shannon, glad you're enjoying the story... Update's on it's way - k
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 8
great chapter. i do hope you'll update soon :)
Author's Response: Oh, I will...lol. Sorry for the delay was on vaca all last week, am working now to get an update going. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for taking the time to review - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter Kel. Poor Beth, she's emotionally broken, so vulnerable. Sam read her well, if only Dean could listen to him, Beth need help. I'm looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane glad you're enjoying, next chapter is gonna be nearly all Sam....he's going to get Beth that help.. :) - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh and the mystery builds! Another amazing chapter Kel, very well written, and I find myself growing very fond of this little wee! Sam, even at a young age he can't help but do all the researching and what not, brings a smile to my face :) -Bex
Author's Response: Gotta love the Weechesters...lol. Glad you're enjoying Bex, Next chapter is gonna be a bit more Sam centered so I hope you like... thanks as always for taking the time and sorry to reply so late, was gone for the past week.. eek..so much to catch up on....
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh NO! I just realized this was the last update lol! Okay I'll try to be patient waiting for your next update. *suits on hands*
Author's Response: he he he, good for you it's my next update Gen...lol. So glad you enjoyed and I appreciate you catching up with this one. - THanks as always K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oooh nice tie in with Lizzie Borden... Didn't know the Fall River tidbit...Oh no! the dreams are back! So not good! I'm finding myself happy that I forgot I was reading this! Lucky for you too! I might have been very obsessed...
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 6
If anyone could chase away her demons, it would be the boy that held her so carefully in his arms. She doesn't know the half of it! OOOH! It was a demon...I knew it! Of course...and she mentioned the smell was how she knew before seeing that something was wrong...Obviously not rotting corpses smell it was probably sulfur. And I could jusr clock John! So single minded! So Dean's probably gonna have to figure this one out alone! Great chpater! moving on to the next!
Author's Response: You're right she doesn't know the half of it, now I just have to decide if she's going to find out or not??? hm.. As for John, don't blame him too much, after all what fun would the story be if papa winchester saved the day..lol. Thanks for the marathon read. K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMFG this one had me choking on my cheese and crackers! "Just remember it may be fun to plow the field, but I will personally kill you, if you plant any corn." PRICELESS! Very nice chapter! I love the interaction between Dean and Beth...Lines like: Dean pulled her against his chest, he enjoyed the way she fit against him, her head just resting under his chin. Beutiful...So well written Kel...and I love your descriptions probably because I suck so bad at them but I am always in awe...like in an earlier chapter when you described Mr. Jensen...superb.. Again I'm loving the vulnerable Dean how he knows he's getting too attached to Beth...Great job! Keep it up Kel!
Author's Response: Please you are an author about to finish your first story, and a VERY fine story at that. No more of this I suck bit, I know the truth..lol. As for descriptions, It's really just the fact that the subject matter is soooooo fascinating I don't mind taking the time to describ. hehe - K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 4
Okay so Brittany is such a little bitch! Poor Beth! Though lucky girl with Dean's arm around her! Enjoying this very much...I love how you have Dean wondering about his dad: Dean often wondered if Mary had died in some random way, if John would have been altogether different. Or if without revenge fueling his fire he would have simply disappeared under the weight of his grief. and I like the vulnerability you give Dean how he's strong in the moment when he needs to be and then feels like he may crumble when things are under control. Okay there's my babble for this chappy onward to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Gen, this started as a weechester hunt and has become a kinda 'why dean is the way he is story' Glad you're liking it - K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
very intriguing and three-dimensional charcter in Beth...Lizzie huh? must be hard being called Lizzie Borden...and I loved the aunt's line: "I knew it. I knew if you had any of my blood in you, you'd notice this kid..." Hehehe nice job sorry I got sidetracked and forgot that I had started this on! Happy to have stumbled upon it again! Gret job Kel!
Author's Response: Please is it any wonder you got sidetracked on one of my stories..lol. I've got too damn many. he. Glad you're back now, and thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 7
Awww...Sammy's blanket story, so cute. Now, we know when Dean started to sleep with a knife under his pillow, great idea you got here Kel. Poor Beth, she got nightmares again with the feeling that someone is in her bedroom, got me the chills. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Well I'm thinking it can't be good...lol. So glad I creeped you out, that's always a bonus.. thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
oh man, was creepy the first time i read it, and still is! Why did i keep this for bedtime, gonna blame you if i have a nightmare! As always i just love all the background you describe, that's really something you excel at. Like Sammy, already the best on research, and well, teen Dean, just...*sighing and going to dream about him*...
Author's Response: Ah, no worries if you wake up just come chat..lol. Thanks for appreciating the buildup, i just really wanted to take my time with this one. And honestly I'm loving molding Dean into what he becomes. As for teen Dean, call me a dirty old lady but YUM.... I think I'm going to go dream about him.... ;)
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