Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 18/11/08 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 17
Awesome. Absolutely amazing. I loved every inch of this story. And I'm so glad I discovered it after it was done so I didn't have to WAIT for any installments. :P
Author's Response: Thanks so much, it is always nice to read a complete. Glad you dug this one. - Kel ;)
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 17/11/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
I read this line and had to stifle the howl of laughter that struggled to burst forth, I swear!: "Just remember it may be fun to plow the field, but I will personally kill you, if you plant any corn." Seriously -- I won't be sparing in my compliments! Your stuff is just AWESOME!
Author's Response: LOL, Ah....John's birds and the bees huh, you can't imagine the images I tossed around looking for just the right one ;) Kel
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
I really liked the story! I hope you write a lot more!
Author's Response: LOL, so glad you enjoyed Tucker...as for writing more, I've got thirty stories to my name posted here and I've got about three more I'm working on. Thanks so much for the review, its always nice to find that people liked. Catch you later - kel ;)
Reviewer: beth9874 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
i cheated, rather than wait for you to update on FFN i read the rest over here. “Thank you, Dean. I won’t ever forget you,” Beth whispered I wont ever forget Dean not never, lolz. Anyway good story, and i liked it.
Author's Response: Ah....Beth, you're bad....lol. Can't say as I blame you though ;) Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the stars - Kel
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great job K!!!! I can see why your story was a big favorite. I just love wee!chester stories....and yours was fantastic. I look forward to more fun tales from you!!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 17
What a finale, loved it, that was sweet and emotional. I enjoyed Fall River indeed, start to end. You did an amazing work Kel with young Sam and Dean's characterization. I'll miss Beth, Caroline and Fall River.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Oceane. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I'm a bit partial to Fall River myself so I was happy with the response it got. Thanks as always for the support, it's appreciated ;) See you at the next story, Kel
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wow.........are you going to do a sequel featuring Beth? It would be interesting to see how they interact as adults...this story is addictive...can't believe it ended....
Author's Response: Nope no sequel with Beth. though I did enjoy her. I am however considering doing the same type of story only featuring Sam at 15.. we'll have to see - Thanks Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
Nicely wrapped up! Nice to see John taking care of his kids! Sad to see this one end, I really lilked Beth and her aunt...but all good things... Anywho, great job hon!
Author's Response: Thanks Gen, your opinion always means a lot. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for taking the time - Kel
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 16
Very intense chappy! Oh No! that ghost stabbed Dean, so not good! Boy am I happy that I didn't get a chance to read this before you posted the last chapter! Great job!
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 17
This was a great story. I always like to wait and review at the end and this story was worth the wait. You did a great job portraying Sam and Dean as they are now. Sometimes I had to remind myself that they were only 11 and 15 in this story. Great job!!! Keep writing. I always enjoy your stories.
Author's Response: thanks much how sweet to know you thought I did the boys justice. Thanks for taking the time to review it's always appreciated. - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh Kelly, what an awesome chapter! I LOVED it! Way to bring this story home! This one was so full of emotions, brother love, longing for John and being glad he was there although he was tough on the boys again.... I loved how Beth said good-bye, loved how Caro got in the way of John, loved how Sammy stood up for himself.... I realized that I wanted to quote some lines and huh.... exactly the ones Fredo quoted. But also so many other outstanding lines in this chapter! Dean’s eyes fluttered open and John found himself looking down into his wife’s bright green gaze. As he began to drift off, the faint sound of the engine a lullaby in his ears, he realized that at this moment, he felt more at home than he ever had in the tiny apartment in Fall River. With a last glance at his family, Dean settled more deeply on the black leather seat and sighed in contentment. Wonderful read! Thanks fpor sharing this with us Kel! I am looking forward to your next story.... hm... I might have an idea what's it about - lol!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed Dagmar and yeah not hard to guess what's next,. all the e-mails threatening and begging me for Sara are starting to worry me..lol. Thanks for all your support - Kel
Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love the way Dean's perspective on hunting changes during this story. It really shows how Dean got his point of view of the family business. It's always been different than his brother's or father's.
Author's Response: well that's the way I see it at least. Glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for the review it means a lot to know that people are reading - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 17
I'm so sad that it's over! But at least it ended with a warm, fuzzy feeling. Love Sammy comforting Dean with "at least I didn't tell him we skipped school." Ooops!
Author's Response: lol, yeah baby brother's never know when to be quiet. Glad you enjoyed Shannon and hey I figure even the Winchesters are due a warm and fuzzy every now and again - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
great ending Kel! Loved how Sam handled the situation while alone, but become a kid again once John arrived. Loved Beth reawakening to life. Loved Caro snapping at John! And loved this, "It was in that moment that Dean understood just what it meant to be a hunter. He had done this. He’d given this girl her life back. Suddenly, he found it didn’t matter what she thought of him or his family. Hell, it didn’t matter that tomorrow he’d be back in the Impala heading for the next nameless town. All that mattered was he had the power to help people, to make their lives better, to keep them safe. What more could anyone ask for, his own family might be broken but that didn’t mean anyone else’s had to be." thanks for a great read my friend...
Author's Response: Finally, Finally I got that line in...lol. So glad you liked and thanks for all your support :) Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 17
What a finish! and I'm so glad it was as happy as it could have been keeping in mind they HAD to leave. I loved John turning up and actually acting like a dad, I always love seeing him in that roll. And it's a tribute to your writing that even though the editing got mushed towards the end, I couldn't stop reading...I would rather get a headache than miss out on the end!!! Great and professional job, Kel. I'm sad to see this over, but glad to know you have something new in the pipe line.
Author's Response: Tell you what never had that happen before :( I'm just thankful that everyone flagged me down so quick to let me know. Glad you enjoyed this one and you know me, good or bad something's always in the pipline...lol.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 17
Guess we had to come around to ride off into the sunset time sooner or later. I have enjoyed this story immensely, thanks for sharing it with us. Nice little insight there into Dean understanding what being a hunter means for the people on the other end.
Author's Response: thanks Angela, I'm thrilled you enjoyed and thanks for letting me know. It's always nice to hear that people get where you were going...lol. Thanks Kel
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great ending to a great story. I was so glad to see Beth realize that she had to let him go instead of sobbing. Wonderful way to handle and very much like the show. Thanks for a great read!
Author's Response: Glad you liked, I figure Beth was never really the point of the story anyway, though I did enjoy writing her. Glad you liked the story and thanks for sticking with it - Kel
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
That was a great update - loved the way we see Dean start to keep a knife under his pillow, and why the habit got started. AND a really creepy mini-cliffie to drag me kickin' and screamin' to the next chapter... Fab!
Author's Response: Thanks Cal, so glad you liked. And thanks for checking out the story - kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 16
That was an intense and suspenseful chapter. Thank goodness, they finally found the right book to burn or Dean would die. Terrific work with this chapter Kel, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Oceane so glad you're enjoying and thanks as always for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed - kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter, Kel; no one's gonna mind a little more of this. I'm finding myself fond of staying a spell in Fall River, too... Angela
Author's Response: Yeah that's always a danger, Angela, not knowing when to get out of town...lol. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 16
Excellent! So much action I found myself breathing harder by the time I was finished.
Author's Response: Good then I did my job...So glad you're enjoying the story - kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 16
so finally you broke the chapter... I could have read a lot more in one sitting, but well, you're the author, you're the boss! Anyway, great chapter, loved the different POVs, but damn you hurt Dean! and my favorite lines are still the same than when you give it to me to read yesterday, "His entire body moved as if it were on autopilot. He never once misstepped and he seemed constantly aware of how the others were positioned. If Sam lagged even a step, Dean would slow and wait until his brother fell back into formation." "If he was following his father it would have made him panic, but behind his brother he knew he didn't have to worry. Dean would never allow him to fall too far behind." Well, waiting for final chapter now...
Author's Response: Yeah I broke it, but now looking back I'm thinking it was a mistake...lol. So next time I decide that shorter is better you need to knock me up the head and remind me that you're always right...lol. Any way so glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh boy, you certainly know how to racket up the tension! Excellent writing, well done.
Author's Response: So glad you liked thanks so much for sticking with the story - Kel
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 16
I missed the last few chapters somehow so I'm glad that caught this most recent posting. Well written story. Your character perspectives stay spot on. The lack of action (your words not mine) isn't noticed at all since the story is constatly developing toward the climax. Loved this final chapter and watching each individual react to the ghost - Dean realizing he had the necessary skills to handle it, Caroline realizing it was all true, Sam realizing he trusts Dean implicitly (and would've had a harder time if John were there) only missing was Beth's point of view but I suspect that is coming. Chapters do have to end somewhere after all. Anyway. great read, well written and I enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to the conclusion.
Author's Response: Not surprising you missed them...lol. I seem to have the unfortunate habit of posting just before the admins post the unvalidated stories..lol. I always get buried. - Glad you found it finally and enjoyed - Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oooh...Dean's hurt!!!!!!!! Damn....
Author's Response: Hey we can't make it through an entire story and not bang Dean up in some manor can we now...lol. - Thanks for reading - Kel
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