Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 05:06 PM · On: Black Sunshine
Awesome update. I like how this story is really 2 stories in 1. Can't wait to read how they both play out. Holloway using Dean as bait again..that can't be good for Dean. Please update soon..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's fun to write the story from the past and present, fills the chapters out a little more too :D Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 08:56 AM · On: The Song Remains the Same
Rae, Such a different Dean was reflected in the Past - a vulnerable Dean, one not comfortable to be around Halloway, allowing Halloway to taunt him with not a move from Dean to defend himself. It is certainly a far different Dean that Halloway encounters in the Present! Carry on talented author - love the Pharoah's Son twist too. Pook
Author's Response: Thank you so much once more. he he. Halloway is set on using Dean, in the past and in the present but in the present it's gonna be under Dean's condition.. :) And Pharoah's Son, finally had to give the thing some sort of name, lol. So I chose that. Thanks again!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 08:22 AM · On: Slow Ride
Rae, What I love about this story is your wonderful ability to show the reader how the Dean of the Past evolved into the Dean of Today. Even when Dean is eighteen his thoughts were always on Sam - when waking from a fitful sleep his thoughts were "where's Sam?" And true to form, the eighteen year old Dean still was pontificating - "you better have left some hot water!". But as much as Dean has stayed the same over the years, he definitely has changed, evolved - his dealing with Halloway has definitely stepped up a peg from his earlier dealings with him. Dean is taking no prisoners nor crap when it comes to the older hunter, who is definitely giving Gordon Walker a run for his money as "king of the dirt bags!. Love your writing and carry on, Pook
Author's Response: Thank you so much yet again. I always love reading your indepth reviews, they mean so much to me. It's a great opportuinity being able to write Dean at a young age whilst also following a similar storyline with the present older Dean. So I'm really glad you like it so far. And Halloway, it's fun writing him as the bad guy. Thanks again!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:23 AM · On: Next Contestant
Rae, I love the similiarities between John and Dean, John seems to have the same self hatred and anger that Dean seems to carry with him in so many ways. But one theme seems to come to the forefront - Dean will not make the same mistakes that his father did - he will stop Halloway and will not allow Stuart to be used as he was. As usual, great parallels between past and present. Carry On, Pook
Author's Response: Thank you again! :D Dean definately doesn't want to make the same mistakes and will go to great lengths to avoid it happening. I keep worrying about being too consumed in either the past or the present, so thanks!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 08:17 AM · On: Retreat
Rae, I see this chapter as a "coming of age" for Dean. One can see so many similiarities between John of days past and of Dean of today. The deep sense of duty to save others, self - deprecation and sense of guilt. Your words truly give the reader insight into Dean's psyche. Great, Pook
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Your reviews means a lot :D It's fun getting the chance to write John as well and devling into his character further.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 10:09 AM · On: The Song Remains the Same
“This guy you’ve been working with… Patrick Halloway, right? I did some checking and, well…” He hesitated for moment, taking a breath before continuing, “You know how much you wanna kill that thing that killed Mary? Well, that’s how badly Halloway wants to see this thing dead. It killed his brother, tore him apart right in front of him.” Maybe that's why John doesn't like him, since they are like pretty similar and all, although John's not really using other people as bait...at least, i don't think so..
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :D Yeah, he's pretty similar in the obsession department but he hasn't got two young sons to keep a semi-leash on him and bring him back when he gets too far. :D
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 08:50 AM · On: The Song Remains the Same
Great story so far. Can't wait to read more. Very interesting how Dean gets the amulet. Halloway is a jerk..lol..Thanks so much for writing. I love all of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D So glad you think Halloway's a jerk, he's really fun to write that way.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 06:17 PM · On: The Song Remains the Same
Boo freakin' hoo! I don't care if it killed Halloway's pregnant dog, I still hate him. Pharoah's Son is an ingenious idea for a spook! I'm cheering for something new and different. I've read enough about wendigoes, werewolves, and vampires.
Author's Response: LMAO! Yep, I'm glad you still hate Halloway... he's not very likeable. :D I finally gave the creep a name! lol... if there's no real lore about it, I hate coming up with names but finally! I like trying out different monsters... different from what's appeared in the episodes, so thank you! I'm glad you like!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 06:09 PM · On: Slow Ride
You actually had me gasping at the end. I can't believe he took the amulet off Stuart. I'm hurrying off to read more....
Author's Response: Thanks for reading... yeah, nasty little thing for me to do >:)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 06:08 PM · On: The Song Remains the Same
Terrific chapter Rae. I hate Halloway more and more. The guy kidnapped Stuart only to force Dean and Sam to help him killing that creepy thing. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D Yeah, Halloway is one nasty SOB... I shouldn't enjoy writing nasty characters as much as I do, he he >:)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 06:02 PM · On: Next Contestant
so glad to see another chapter! I guess I'm as slow in reading as you are in posting so that's okay. Halloway! The guy couldn't have died slowly and painfully on a hunt? He had to turn back up and use another poor sucker for bait.
Author's Response: Lol! I really am slow at posting, especially this one... Halloway'll get his... I hope, at least I have semi-plans for him but the best laid plans of mice and men. :D
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 04:06 PM · On: The Song Remains the Same
eeek! demented hunter, really scary sounding monster... great! and loved '"you can kill him after we find Stuart," Sam reasoned.' Some reasoning!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D Lol, and I was totally with Sam on that reasoning though so tempted to just let Dean keep pummeling. :D
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/08 09:50 AM · On: Back in the Picture
Interesting start...will try to get back to this soon...But you know I'm trying to keep up with B for my new story...so I may not get back for a little bit!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Lol, I know, she's a speed writer ain't she? he he.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 02:57 AM · On: Slow Ride
Okay, that Halloway is an evil SOB!!! hopefully Stuart would be okay, even though the amulet was taken off him!!!! Dammit! Can you sacrifice him along with the creature?? i won't think you are a bad person at all!!!! :)
Author's Response: Mwuahaha, he is, isn't he? I have semi-plans for Halloway, >:) though if you wanted to offer up any means of torture I'm sure Dean would gladly try it out, he he.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 09:07 PM · On: Slow Ride
Rae, Halloway has the amulet i hope Dean kicks his ass....................poor Stuart. great chapter Renee
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! There will be some definate ass kicking coming up :D He he!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 09:05 PM · On: Slow Ride
Young Dean teasing Sammy about his singing made me smile.OMG!Halloway has Dean's amulet, what he did with Stuart. I so hate the guy. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I love the idea of Dean teasing Sam when they were younger... it's whats older siblings so, whilst younger siblings try awkwardly to think of a come back (I say this because I'm a younger sibling :( lol) I'm glad you hate Halloway! :D I have a little twist down the line about him but it won't make you hate him any less... Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 06:00 PM · On: Slow Ride
I just spent the last couple hours catching up and I just wanted to say this story is fantastic. I can't wait to read the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you like it!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 12:48 AM · On: Next Contestant
Rae M, Great Story so far. i got so wrapped in that i didn't realize i was on the last chapter until i saw the Previous word. hope chapter 11 will be soon. like how you keep going from present to past. Halloway needs his ass kicked. Renee
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! :) I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. I'm about to start some writing so hopefully this one will fall on the list too! Jumping from past to present is really fun to write, I love doing it that way. Again, thank you!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 10:12 PM · On: Next Contestant
WooHoo!Rae, I'm so glad that you updated this story, it was worth the wait. Halloway is using Stuart as bait like he did with Dean in the past. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought it was worth the wait :D Yep, Halloway is back and using more bait... I've got the next bit planned so hopefully I can get some writing done soon.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 06:58 AM · On: Retreat
Intriguing....can't wait for the next chapter.... Happy New Year!!
Author's Response: Thank you! A belated one to you too! :)
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 05:48 AM · On: Retreat
This's really good, I can't wait for more... Your chapter end notes sound menacing, or should I say promising ;)
Author's Response: Menacing... promising...he he - I'll try and get it to you either way. Thank you loads!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 04:19 PM · On: Retreat
This is great!!!!! I love the past/present back and forth. AWESOME work!!!! You have nailed the Dean/Sammy exchange-words , actions, glances-it's perfect Winchester. OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!! That this demon came back after the gate was opened-that this demon is still attacking Dean -you have woven a tangled web that is beyond great!!!! EXCELLENT JOB!!!! The amulet- it has the answer to many puzzles that are Winchester-totally engrossing and well done on all levels. Bravo!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm really glad you're enjoying. I love working with the Winchesters in writing, they're great inspiration and their characters are so indepth and I'm pleased that you think I'm doing a good job with them :D Tangled web, yep! I've a bad habit of doing that, let's hope you'll enjoy the rest when it comes!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 02:43 PM · On: Retreat
RAE, MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! LOVE THE LITTLE TWIST AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER. THANKS FOR ALL THE WONDERFUL READING YOU HAVE GIVEN ME THROUGHOUT THIS PAST YEAR. GOD BLESS AND CARRYON, POOK
Author's Response: Hey! And a belated one to you too! :D Sorry for the late reply but thank you so much for reading and I hope I get some updates done soon!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/12/07 02:03 PM · On: Retreat
The nasty thing found his way out when the hell gate opened and it must be after Dean now. Great chapter Rae, can't wait for more. Merry Christmas.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Sorry for the late reply. I'm gonna start working on updates for these stories pretty soon so thanks for hanging in there!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 12:55 PM · On: Retreat
Cool! Now we know where it came from and how to kill it. Time to get to work! I can feel the fun already!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Sorry for the late reply - been held up lately... I feel guilty but I promise I'm gonna start getting work done on these updates! :)
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