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Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 10:56 PM · On: Halloway

elevenses.....LOVE that, great update Rae and I look forward to more - K

Author's Response: Heard that one from Lord of the Rings :D Thanks so much for reading!!!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 11:24 AM · On: Halloway

Very, very interesting! You're a master of flashbacks :D

And great banner!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :D I love writing flashbacks... they're fun.

And thanks - was really pleased with how the banner turned out :) 

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 09:39 AM · On: Halloway

Ooooh...cliffie!!! Yaaay! Or...not yay. Cliffhanger!!! Angry!!!! Goodness...yes, love it, Rae...flashbacks are fun! And this Holloway...hmmm...curiouser and curiouser...can't wait for more! (Oh yeah...I love your banner!!!!!!) 
3 days till season 2...24 days till season 3....can't wait...

Author's Response:

Hey Shiny! I love doing flashbacks, so I'm glad you like them :D And Halloway - yeah, we'll find out the truth about him... well I won't say when 'cause whenever I say the story end up taking another turn and it gets delayed... so I won't say... 

Thank you loads!!!! :D Glad you like the banner too and WOO!!! I so can't wait til season 3!

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 06:49 AM · On: Back in the Picture

Hey great opening chapter-you've definately got me interested! I love the fact you are including something from a past hunt-cool idea.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you keep reading :) I love past hunts, means a chance for memories to haunt people.

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 07:48 AM · On: Halloway

Hanger!  Waiting for your next post!

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response: Thanks :D Glad to have you reading!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 06:33 AM · On: Halloway

Great new chapter!  Boy, when Dean's not eating, you KNOW something's terribly wrong.  Love it!

And I just want to say that your banner here is awesome.  I admire your graphics work very much.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love the Dean and food thing they have in the show (and I feel sorry for Jensen, bless him) but it's funny...

And the banner - I was really pleased with how this one turned out so I'm glad you like it. :D Thank you!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 05:46 AM · On: Halloway

Great update. You got me intrigued Rae. Loved the flashbacks. Why Halloway wanted so much that John's sons were there too for the hunt. Dean said the Halloway was a sick guy, can't wait to learn more about him and that hunt.  

Author's Response:

Thanks! :D Glad you liked the flashbacks... it's always fun playing with two timelines. And Halloway... I'm trying to think of how to say something without giving too much away - all I can think of is he knows more than he's letting on. 

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 01:46 AM · On: Halloway

I really love this. it's very well thought through and - a flashback within a flashback!  Also love the 'half asleep Dean', and the dialogue is spot on. Update very soon, I'll be looking for it!

Author's Response:

Thanks again! It's probably the more thought through of any of my stories, he he. And the flashback within a flashback... I wasn't sure if that would work, lol. 

He he - thanks loads!!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 01:34 AM · On: Back in the Picture

Wow How did I miss this? I'm a sucker for a great plot and this has me hooked straight away! Cant wait to see how the amulet figures. Great start.

Author's Response: Thank you! Considering how much I love your story that means loads :D So thank you!!

Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 01:12 AM · On: Halloway

You've got me hooked! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to have you reading! :D

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 06:14 PM · On: Back in the Picture

It's nice to get a new story from you Rae, especially when the end of Death Markers is coming.

Dean's amulet... It's been disturbing me too. I can't wait to see what's gonna be your version of its meaning. So, I'm liking the idea :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! It'll be good working on something new... I hope it turns out good and I hope you enjoy it :D

I'm glad I'm not the only one that the evil Amulet has been disturbing... he he, makes me feel less crazy. So thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 08:33 AM · On: Back in the Picture

I love that amulet and I'm torn between wanting the show to deal with it and keeping the mystery.. So I'm going to sit back and enjoy your tale.  Thanks for the read - K



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm the same way... I can't wait to find out what the writers have to say about the amulet and at the same time, I like my mind spinning off lots of different tales. He he. So thank you for reading :D Hope you like where I take this.

Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 03:14 AM · On: Back in the Picture

i can tell this is gonna b another awsome story! yay im curious already cant wait for more :):):):):)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so :) Hope I keep your curiousity.

Reviewer: iluvsprntrl (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 12:06 AM · On: Back in the Picture

i can't wait!  that was so good! i really lie the way you did the flashbacks.  the guy asking for john's help sounds creepy.

Author's Response: Thank you :D I love doing flashbacks... and the guy asking for John's help, glad he sounds creepy - 'cause there's more to him asking for John's help.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 10:06 PM · On: Back in the Picture

Likin' this, Rae! Y'know, that amulet is curious...I think it's going to be explained on the show, but until then, fire away!!!! I'd love to read about your ideas on the subject...especially in the form of one lovely Dean Winchester. And his amulet. 'Cause, the amulet's important too. Right.
Keep going! The flashbacks are drawin' me in!!!!! And the one-year-left-to-live-'cause-I-sold-my-soul Dean. I like that Dean.

Author's Response:

Thanks Shiny! Yeah - I heard about them trying to fit the amulet into season 3 so I wanted to get this up (the idea's been bugging me for aaaagggges now ) before they started explaining. 

And the lovely Dean Winchester - he is absolutely lovely isn't he? - and his amulet, such big plans for them :D

When I thought up the idea, it was a toss up between doing it all in the past or include flashbacks from the present... but I love present Dean so much... :D

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 09:34 PM · On: Back in the Picture

Terrific teaser Rae, I'm very intrigued. Great idea to write about Dean's amulet, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! The idea's been in my head a few months now but I knew I'd end up getting lost writing too many stories at the same time so now Death Markers is just about finished, I'll be able to dedicate some time to his amulet. :D 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 08:44 PM · On: Back in the Picture

Good job Rae!  I really liked how their vacation goes from one week to half a week to a couple of days.  Then, of coarse, they lose it all together. 

I also loved the referrence to "Bloody Mary." 

You really have my curiosity peaked!  What could possibly be such a precise killer and take three men to hunt it...hmmm?

I love reading stories fresh off the press, but hate having to wait for the next chapter!  :-(



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks! I had the first chapter wrote but went over it again last night and ended up adding the vacation gettin smaller and smaller before I posted it - and since you mentioned it, I'm glad I did now :D

And Bloody Mary, lol - no one can get away with breaking that many mirrors, surely?

Glad I have your attention, he he - so hopefully I can get some writing done so you don't have to wait for ages.

Thanks so much for reading! 

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 08:42 PM · On: Back in the Picture

His amulet bugs you?  That's interesting.  How so?

I like the story so far.



Author's Response:

The amulet drives me crazy trying to think what's so important about it... lol - so I can't wait to find out what the writers of the show do end up doing.

Thanks for reading. :D

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