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Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

awww! I really loved that flasback! really good :)

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

I wonder if its because I am an older sibling, but I just really love how Dean takes care of Sam..this really captured that, and I liked the use of flashback :) lol glad I don't have to wait for a next chapter!
-Bex

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 8

I liked Chapter 8. Sam finally got released from the hospital. I am curious about how you are going to end this story. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 8

Funny that Sam's the one who always wanted normal and now that he has a perfectly good excuse to take a hiatus from hunting he's fighting it.
Glad you used Dean to explain exactly how serious Sam's condition was.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

Vrey nice - and I agree - John's an ass.

Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

i really like this story especially the flashbacks it really tells how close the brothers are and how much Dean loves Sam

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm loving the whole story so far, it's nice for the boys to stop and rest once in a while. The flashbacks are great with some lovely touches - so pleased John came back for the Pageant. Any chance of getting Dean a more comfy chair - my back is feeling some serious sympathy for him!
Looking forward to the next one. Thanks J.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

This chapter featured another good flashback. You really have a really good grasp on Sam and Dean's relationship.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good chapter. Once again the Winchester boys fight the evil that is a father's wrath.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

The soothing motion of Dean's hand on Sam's forehead is a nice touch! Everyone has either done that or had it done to them.
Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

Gotta love the protective big brother - K

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 6

A sweet surprise for Sam, discovering his Dad watched him in the Xmas pageant.
Good one.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

I liked Chapter 6. I liked that Sam found out that his father had come to his Christmas pageant.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

I loved the Christmas pageant flashback. It was so touching. I loved that both Dean and John stayed to see Sam perform. I am really liking this story. I like the darker font too. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is very good.

Author's Response:
Thanks, keep reading and reviewing. I am fairly new to fan fiction, but love doing it. Got to love them Winchesters.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Very nice - can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is a really good story - I love the peeks into their past. And you have their characters drawn so accurately. Loving this - moving on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

What a sweet moment between Dean and Sam. I'm so glad that John came to the pageant. I know he's obsessed with hunting, but he still loves his kids. Thank you for putting that bit in.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

It's funny how Dean has to zoom out of hospitals when he's hurt, but he practically ties Sam to the bed to make sure he's treated. Good job capturing that!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

A nice touching scene. sometimes I like the bonding scenes better than action.
Love the flashbacks!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

Good job, I really like it. I always enjoy flashbacks of the boys. Makes you understand their characters so much better.

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

Nice chapter

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

very nice job.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

This chapter featured another good flashback. It is always so touching to see how well Dean takes care of Sam when he is hurt.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting flashback. Once again we see how intertwined Sam and Dean are. I'm eager to read more!

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