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Reviewer: Kiansie (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 5

When you use the word Loose, you are using the wrong form of the word. You are looking for "lose" Also, when Dean tells Sam "Tuff" that spelling is incorrect. The correct spelling in Tough.
Sorry, I always get a bit...when it comes to spelling. LOL, the Chik-fil-A commercials bug the crap out of me, even though I know that they are intentionally using the incorrect spelling for their advertisements.
Other than the spelling errors that I've caught I enjoy the story. I feel bad for Sam having to deal with such a painful concussion. Poor Dean too.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 17

Awwwwwww, I just love Dean's protectiveness, it's so adorable! ;D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh yeah! *snaps fingers* You work it Sam! ;D

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 17

Nice flashback to WeeChesters & Sam having appendicitis, it was true to the show and it didn’t portray John in an awful light, it was realistic. Actually, they all were good flashbacks. Well written story, I do think that it dragged on a bit, I found myself getting slightly bored around chapters 15 but I continued because it was still a good story.

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 17

Ah! Nice ending!
The punchline!!! You are always my shadow. NICE!!!
Kudos! Good writing!!!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 17

I liked the brother moment between Sam and Dean. It was very touching.

Author's Response:
What an awesome review. Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked my story. I like to put into words what I see in my head. It means alot to me that you can see it visually while you read it. Ah, the mind is a wonderful place.
I am working on a new story right now, should post the first chapter this week.
supernaturaldh

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 17

This was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I have re-read this story several times because I've enjoyed it so much.
You have captured the emotions and life force of the Winchesters.
AWSOME job!!!!
As a writer, you have conveyed the emotions so forcefully, that tears come easily throughout the chapters.
Since I "see" these stories as a video while I read, -just fantastic.
You are a master storyteller!!!!!
Bravo!!!!
a fan

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 17

Love it, especially the end when Dean pushes Sam back and reminds him that Sam is his shadow! Wonderful story!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 17

That was awesome!!!! Very good job.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 17

aww! that was the most adorably sweet ending ever! i loved this story. it was totally amazing and awesome insights into dean. it was great

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 16

Super big brother mode is pretty serious. Glad Dean's around to protect his little brother. Interested to see what's behind the haunted bridge.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

Boy, Sam is really stir crazy. Good transition chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 14

Nice chapter! I think I like the chapters that express character emotions more than action chapters. It's great getting into Sam's and Dean's heads.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 14

so sad and yet absolutely adorable

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 14

very nice

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13

Awwww ya just wanna hug 'em both

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 13

What a touching end to this chapter!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 12

Another good chapter. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

Chapter 13 is another good chapter. I am enjoying this story so much. I don't want it to end.

Author's Response:
Thanks, I love writing this stuff. I think a couple more chapters are in order.
supernaturaldh

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 12

Chapter 12 was another good chapter. Thank you for updating your story so fast. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 11

Good dream/flashback. Eager to see how it ties into this hunt.
Love the line "...his Sam was gone..."!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

I liked this chapter and I liked the flashback in this chapter. I am just wondering how you are going to wrap this story up but I will keep reading until the conclusion.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 10

Interesting idea to have the ghost of the child appear in the picture.
I like the background story about the love child.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh how sad. I hate her already!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 10

I missed not having any flashbacks in this chapter but I liked this chapter anyway.

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