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Reviews For BROWN MOUNTAIN
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand

Can't wait for the next chapter of this, want to see the 'naughty' inside Dean's head. Great update Lorraine.

Author's Response: Hi Louy,  lol i think there is plenty of naughty inside of Deans head. Wait to you get m7 there is a good naughty bit in it. Thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand

Great job, Lorraine!  I can't believe you had trouble with this one.  It reads so nicely.

Can't wait for Dean to get to that mountain!



Author's Response: Hi Shannon, wonder what Dean will make of what he finds there. Could be very interesting. At least i hope it is.  Lorraine

Reviewer: nikki03 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

OOOOO cant wait to see where this is going:), keep it up its so good! :D 
    xo. nikki<3

Author's Response: Hi nikki thanks so much for the review. Am writing ch 4 now. Lorraine

Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

i love it its awsome

Author's Response: Hi Raven, thank you for your review they make my day. will try to update soon for you. Lorraine

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

LOVED IT!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next update....story is fab so far

sophxxxx



Author's Response: Hi Sophie, nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for the review i will try to update soon. Lorraine

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

Uh oh.  I feel some major Dean angst a-comin'.  Can't wait to see what happens. 



Author's Response: Hi vanessa, I think you are right. Dean is going to feel so bad. Thank you for the review . Lorraine

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

Another great chapter LK, Love this story, and the whole amulet thing especially. Post soon.



Author's Response:

Hi lou, thank you so much for leaving a review, as you know they mean a lot. Will try to post soon.

Lorraine

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

Love it!  Can't wait to read more.  I'm especially curious about the matching amulet.

Author's Response:

Hi Shannon, thanks so much my friend for all your help. Curious about the amulet? So am i! lol.

Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

Love it, l.k.! Once again you've got it all down wonderfully...great job! Looking forward to unraveling this mystery!

Author's Response: Hi Cat so glad you are still enjoying BM, will try to post next chapter soon. Many thanks for the review. Lorraine

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!

Hm....other complications huh, doesn't sound good.  Great update and I look forward to reading more - K

Author's Response:

Hi kelly, thank you so much for leaving a review.Complications? Oh God now i have to work out what they are! lol. 

Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE

Ahhhh, gotta LOVE anything to do with Dean's amulet.. Can't wait for more - K

Author's Response: Hi kelly, thankyou for reading and reviewing. Really means a lot when its your first story. Have not written since leaving school which was , put it this way a long time ago.  LOL Lorraine

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE

great job..i want more and cant wait to see how the amulet plays in

Author's Response: Hi Danielle, thanks for the review, can`t wait to see how it plays out myself lol  Lorraine

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE

This is great, love the teaser of a second amulet, looking forward to next chap. But two beds now?

Author's Response:

Hi Lou, yep two beds, Sam needs  to cut his toenails lol.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Lorraine

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE

Marvelous job LK!  You're doing so well, lots of humor and mystery!  

Who said Supernatural isn't educational?  I learned a lot about spook lights.  Lets see Bert & Ernie teach that!

LOL!  So glad John didn't offer proof.

WOW!  A matching amulet!  Can't wait to see where this goes!



Author's Response:

Hi Shannon, you did a great job with this chapter, the thing is you don`t spot the  mistakes no matter how many times you read it through.

John and his proof, put it this way if it had been Dean i would have written it in. Do they have an x rated category?

As for the amulet you will be the first to know. 

Lorraine

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE

Ahh, a great addition.  Will be interesting to see where this is going.  A twin to Dean's amulet, eh?

Author's Response:

Hi, Cat, thank you for reviewing. Hm... where is this going? Have to wait and see.

Lorraine



Author's Response:

Sorry having a blond moment , do know that you are  vanessa and not Cat lol

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE

Oooooh! Veeeeery interesting, l.k.!!!! I'm lovin' this more and more!!! Can't wait for another chapter...!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Cat thank you for reviewing,as you know it means a lot.  Am off to do some reading and reviewing of my own.

Lorraine

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

OOOh this is very good, love the bed scene, dont think Dean will live that down in a while, cant wait to see what you've got in mind.

Author's Response: Hi Lou , thank you so much for the kind review, hope to post in next couple of days  Lorraine

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

Nice start, never heard of Brown Mountain so it's cool to see something different - Look forward to more - K

Author's Response: Hi kelly,thank you for reviewing it means a lot esprecially when it`s your first story, many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

Oh, very good!  That little scene where they wake up in bed--priceless!!  Thank you so much for the laughs this morning!

Author's Response:

Hi Vanessa thank you so much for taking the time to review, as you know it means a lot. Glad you enjoyed, more fun and games in next ch.

Lorraine

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

great story keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks Danielle

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

A great start, nice to see a bit of humour for the boys, please post again soon.



Author's Response: Hi Elaine thank you so much for your review. I had not intended it to be humerous but it just seemed to turn out that way, am writing second chapter now.  Lorraine

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

Yay Lorraine!  You did it!!!

This is the second time I've read this chapter and I like it better than the first time.  It looks better posted!

I laugh everytime I read the words "wack jobs."  Hee!

Love the banter between the boys and the sibling rivlary!  Dean is pretty sneaky tricking Sam out of that last cookie.  Ahhh, poor Dean.  Sam gets the last laugh. 

I have a feeling this is the beginning of a beautiful story!  I'm excited to read chapter 2!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Shannon, once again thank you so much for your help.Yep Dean is sneaky, but Sam with his huge brain is more than a match for him. There was to be a picture but for some reason did not load. never mind. 

Lorrine

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY

Haha...this is awesome, L.K.! Totally LOVE the banter...and poor Dean and Sam...traumatized from sharing a bed...heehee...that made me laugh! Okay, so this mysterious Brown Mountain is giving people a Rip Van Winkle deal??? Hmmm...curious. Interesting story! Looking forward to reading many more chapters!!!! And the cookies...ohhhh, the cookies...can I bribe you with cookies for more???

Author's Response:

Hi Cat, i agree with you , the whole bed scene is my fav. Rip Van Winkle..... nope try again! Am writing ch 2 now . As for bribery try wine lol. Many, Many thanks for the review.

Lorraine

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