Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
It's up! How FANTASTIC is that banner! Vanessa did a great job, it is perfect for your story. I just love it. All that geek talk across the ocean was sooo worth it. An awesome banner for an awesome fic. Hang on, is that lights I see up on that mountain... Lucky you, but really Lucky us!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
am dying to know what is gonna happen next. Raph and Mickey seem alright, I hope they stay like that...Hmm I can't wait to see the true power of the amulet, Raph and Mickey have some explaining to do. Lovin it Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
Oh wa...Sam's in the mountain. Dean warning Heather about his x-rated mind is hilarious! Well...she was warned. Lol Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!
Poor Sammy! Dean and that temper. Lol Now he's gonna feel worse than he already did. Lovin it Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE
This is really gripping...brown mountain miracles? I can't wait to read the next chappy! Love Schelz...
Author's Response: HI Schelz, miracles and so much more. Thank you Lorraine
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY
I really like this chapter! It was funny and I can't wait to read the next. Love Schelz
Author's Response: Hi Schells, thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it Lorraine
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
Amazing! Lorraine this is incredible! I love it so much! Two hot angels or gods or whatever---too funny! Where can I get one of those amulets? The chapter title is brilliant!! "That sucked---out freakin' loud---with bells on" LOL! Love it!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
I've been waiting quite a while for this chapter and it didn't disapoint. I do love your style and I have loved this story from the start. Great work, but don't leave me waiting too long for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi Louy, sorry it took so long i will consider myself told off. Lorraine
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
I have to admit, Lorraine...the title of your tale just had no attraction for me ...but i knew your writing style would....so here I am and very happily so....... Dean and his high def comments are so true to character as are his actions when he meets Raph (think it was anyway)....so well written
Author's Response: Hi Jude, so glad you overlooked the title, huge reveal in next chapter so stick with it Lorraine
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh. Lorraine, you are amazing. Crazy twisty plotty things....you get more than cookies, my friend. Cake!!!! Chocolate chocolate chip cake with some kind of sugary frosting. And strawberries Romanov.
Author's Response: Hi Cat, your reviews make me feel good, cakes, cookies, chocolate chip and strawberries, mmmmmm nice. Thank you so much Lorraine
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
Great update Lorraine, gotta tell you I can't wait for the explainer. Thanks for a great read - K
Author's Response: Hi Kel, Thanks for sticking with it next ch all will probably be explained. [ OH GOD NOW I HAVE TO SIT DOWN AND WORK IT OUT DAMN ] Many thanks Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
What a thrilling turn your story has taken. This story is already intriguing and exciting but this chapter is different, unusual. I actually think I like your strangers...are you taking us for a ride here?? Am I not being careful enough? Have you sucked me in with their good looks... So many exciting aspects of this fantastic story and your artistic writing caught my attention. I loved how Dean was "comforted by the metallic clank of every conceivable weapon in their arsenal" - the equivalent of a Dean security blankie!! Your words "he was unaware he had given his memories voice" - beautifully said, you show Sam's confusion clearly as well as our understanding of Sam's need to articulate his thoughts to establish his mental ground. Dean's reaction to the vision - "Is that what it’s like for you all the time? Or did I just get lucky with the High Def Surround Sound version? Because I gotta tell you, that sucked—out freakin’ loud— with bells on!” was an awesome piece of expression, so descriptive, so Dean. Can't get any louder or clearer than that. Turn the speakers down!!!! The whole amulet, healing, serene environment, Dean's here thing has me a faithful follower... oh, and before I go.."as the glazed far away look settled on her face" when she held Dean's hand...are you kiddin' me? what other reaction is there?? Sammy had a broken arm AND a fractured skull AND internal bleeding?!? Dean's guilt trip's gunna be bigger than that Brown Mountain when he finds out!
Author's Response: Hi Petra, Wow, I so look forward to your reviews they are really something. A FABULOUS REWARD FOR WRITING. Hi def visions really suck! lol! The glazed far away look, I have to be honest that was vanessa. God I HATE BEING HONEST. As always thanks for the awesome review Lorraine
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION
I didn't mention when I beta'd that I loved this chapter. I loved the section where Dean has a bloody nose and then the excruciating pain in his head, and then collapses. I'm a sucker for any story that has Dean having some sort of vision(s).
Author's Response: thanks vanessa, yep hurt Dean and vision Dean, works for me. Thanks so much v
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
Awesome opening paragraph - Dean's regret, anguish, grief was intense, just leapt out the page at me. Heather articulating the night Sam died felt all wrong, to Dean, to us. Felt like she was invading Dean's privacy. As you spelled out so clearly, Dean struggles to share his feelings with Sam, yet here's this stranger blabbing his most anguished misery in a short abrreviated horro movie scene. Your concluding paragraph matched your intro paragraph in grabbing my attention, but from a completely different angle - "...my mind has a triplex rating.There's some pretty naughty..." hee, hee, how Dean, how you. I'm really into your mystery, I'm always into the boys so looks like I'm here for the duration of your journey. Well done.
Author's Response: Hi Petra, Can`t have a SN story without, regret anguish and grief lol You are right Heathers snooping into Deans private thoughts was wrong but accidental and useful. Well you know me can`t have a sorry without a few naughty thoughts and lets face it Dean would certainly have his fair share lol Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!
Amazing ch, you're well and truly in your groove here. Very descriptive, your story was a living animated movie in my head. "His fathers lies and half truths had worked their insidious magic eating away at his trust and self-worth until Sam had borne the brunt of Deans accumulated anger and frustration." - very impressive: the historical cloud hanging around that gives us readers an absolute understanding to explain Dean's extreme reaction. The mystery and danger has hotted up well and truly. I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Hi Petra, wow don`t know what to say, except thanks. I must admit I did try hard with this chapter and it needed somthing pretty strong to make Dean to hit his brother. Thanks Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE
Very intriguing! Absolutely loved the twin-banter! What a cack! So happy for John that our ever sensitive Sammy responded before a Dean-snark popped out. Absolutely loved your line "Lady, if we were any more forward thinking we'd be in the next century" -funny but so true!! And speaking of twins - twin amulet...
Author's Response: Hi Petra, the twins, well we all know how much Dean likes his twins lolSensitive Sammy saves the day, could have been very Awkward! So glad you enjoyed. Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY
PS: heat seeking missile!?!?! hee, hee!! Too cute.
Author's Response: fancy being a heat seeking missile or the meat in the sandwich Petra? lol Naughty but oh so nice. Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY
Yeah you know I'd be here!! What a cool chapter - loved the brotherly play, loved the writing style. And this was your first one? Congrats on the great work. I had a ball reading this one. It was extremely well written as well as entertaining: fluent, cohesive and descriptive, not to mention true to our boys characters - and that's the draw card! The spooning, the cookies...so good!!I do, however, have a feeling that this is a light hearted beginning to lull us into a flase sense of security before some series SN and angst... Fingers heading for the"next" button...
Author's Response: Hi Petra, i get such a thrill when i read your reviews, they are excellent. They are a writers dream.The spooning , i had this fun image in my head and just had to use it. thank you so much Lorraine
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
I like it..lol. Great update and I can't wait to find out where Sam dissapeared to -K
Author's Response: Hi kelly, thamk you for reading and leaving a review. Hopefully next chapter up soon. Lorraine
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
I love it. Please keep going, I need to know sam's alright.
Author's Response: Hi Nikki, next chapter is on its way, i`m sure Sam will be fine, don`t forget the others came back healed. Lorraine
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
Great chapter! Just what is happening up on that mountain? Where's Sam and just what triple x thoughts are going through that head? Please update soon!! Thanks J.
Author's Response: lol as i said to shiny i don`t think even triple x covers Dean. Next ch sam on the mountain. Lorraine
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 3 PUSHING!
The story is great, lots of intrigue with the 'light beings' and the two amulets, I,m dying to find out where you're going with that! Nice tension between the two boys, poor Sam, Dean is going to feel so bad. Off to the next chapter. Thanks J.
Author's Response: Hi Jane, so glad you are still enjoying it. Thanks for the review means a lot. Lorraine
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
Lol, Lorraine...triple x rating...hee... can't wait to see what's going on with this crazy Brown Mountain!!!! Get another chapter up sooooooon!!!! Cooookies...
Author's Response: Hi shiny, get to meet the beings in next ch. Triple x rating don`t think even that covers Dean lol Many thanks for the review Lorraine
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY
Great first chapter, I love Dean when he's bored and winding Sam up. The characterisation and dialogue are spot on and the bed scene made me laugh out loud. Can't wait to read more. Thanks J.
Author's Response: Hi Jane, thank you so much for reviewing. The bed scene still makes me laugh and i wrote it lol So glad you enjoyed it. Lorraine
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 4 take my hand
Ooohh, I like where this is going. I like it that she's going to have to read Dean in order to find Sam. That ought to be interesting. Very nice update, Lorraine.
Author's Response: Hi vanessa, thanks so much for the review. All those naughty little thoughts in Deans mind. eg the doublemint twins lol Thanks Lorraine
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