Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/03/10 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
like i said before a bit of BELLA on VICKY with some old friends of hers. I do like the transition of how you placed the character of sam haveing a huge and painfull vision and have a bad side affect to it. He was able to sense Dean and Vicky. This is great, my rating for this one is 100+, for i can place myself in Sam's situation and feel it. . .wow this demon is powerfull but why more vicky then Winchesters?
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/03/10 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 7
this is hard cold story and it is so rocking.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/03/10 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 6
im beginnning to like VICKY for only a mer second and a half. i'd so kick her ass for putting SAM in that point of view. Although, tieing him up sounds to DIRTY. . .
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/03/10 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 5
i am a fantaic and friend to mizpha and if you are as good as her, then i appluade you. The character of Vicky is clever to be a brunet but her actions and way of the thinking is more of a blond. . .i do not mean any disrespect on that line. Could be that she may not be a hunter after all. She could be a shpeshifter or become the hunted? . . .LIKE BELLA. . . How am i doing so far. . .i real do enjoy this you have the same Characteristics of MIZPHA enchanting way of writing that does have a zing of class and it even sends chills and thrills down my spine. Very good.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/03/10 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
man this vicky chick is something else. . .as if she lost one to many chicken pieces out of her kitty chicken meal special. I do like the majestic side of her and how her movements of triing to go by her gut instinct could be wrong for the first time. just wait till Dean finds out.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/03/10 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is good. . .but she is so going to get an ass-whipen from Dean and he may like it. I like the lagit way she fights, a clever girl for her age. A good asset to the boy's as well; but i do think that her MAIN WEAKNESS is the PARENTS. . .I do hope oddly enough that Dean can sense that there is something wrong and head directly to Sam and pass GO, but not collect he 200 or 2000.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/03/10 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Now this Vicky should get her ass kicked by me. hurting poor sam. She is deffantly a vixen, and could be even fisty as dean would like them to be. so far so good. . .loving it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/03/10 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
this vicky remindes me of the character of bella. I do support the intro and enjoy it, thanks.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 08:17 AM · On: Epilogue
Cool ending! Thanks for sharing your advneture with us!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 30
Finally, she made her move! I was beginning to wonder if she or Sam were ever going to do anything.
Author's Response: Hah, well she was a tad slow on the uptake there but at least she got something before she left. Thanks so much for the comment!! :)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 06:02 PM · On: Epilogue
nice ending, i always enjoy it when it finishes quietly in the car. Good story, looking forward for your next work...
Author's Response: Thanks so much Fredo! You have been so encouraging through my whole story. It really means a lot and I am super happy that you enjoyed it so much. *Hugs*
Reviewer: WICKY987 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 30
THANKS FOR THE STORY ENJOYED KEEP WRITING MORE!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading Wicky987! Glad you found it enjoyable and I hope to keep up w/ the writing w/ a sequel!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 30
OUTSTANDING writing!!!!!!! this has been some ride all the way thru!!!! action, drama, suspense, brotherly love, twists and turns-AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! every chapter just built up to a cresendo .....you are a master writer.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vicky turned out to be OK- I don't blame her for having her eyes on Sam- what's not to like. everything was just perfect !!!! EXCELLENT timing and follow thru!!! sorry this ride is almost over- can't wait for the update. BRAVO!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much for the wonderful review ReccF! I am so thrilled that you have enjoyed the story so much. *blushes* You give me too much credit saying I am a master writer but thank you so much for saying that. Still have much to learn and only hope to improve on my next story! Hope you enjoy the epilogue!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 30
nice chapter, i'm gonna miss them together, they're so funny. Looking forward for the epilogue...
Author's Response: Aww I am going to miss writing them too. They made a fun trio to write, though I really enjoyed writing the interactions between Vicky and Dean. *sigh* oh the snark! Glad you are enjoying yourself so far!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 30
i was wondering when this will be updated hehehe. yay! great update!
Author's Response: Gosh I am so sorry for keeping you waiting so long *hangs her head in shame* I hope you like this ending!! Thanks so much!! :)
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 29
Totally love it, and it's nice to have you back Vallana. It's been a while but this chapter had been worth the wait. Danny xxxxx
Author's Response: Aww glad to be back. Nothing like not having the ability to access the internet. Oh the horror *shudders* Glad you loved the last update and I hope you enjoy the next one just as much! Thanks again Danny :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 29
So Vicky's smitten with Sammy while Dean is still hitting on her? Well, sooner or later she'll end up with one of them at least for one night.
Author's Response: Well you know Dean, he likes a challenge, though I do believe he won't win this one. But you never know, Sam seems to be a bit clueless. Thanks for the fun review!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 29
you're finally back! Bad bad computer... Nice update, i like the banter between these three. And i think Vicky will now take the first possible occasion to do that haircut...
Author's Response: Oh you know it! Though I wish I was the one helping him out *sighs* Glad you enjoyed the banter, it was fun having them all interact without them all trying to simply survive. And yes, bad computer *kicks her old broken computer and hugs her new one* At least things are running smooth now! Thanks again Fredo!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 29
hahahaha looks like sammy might get a wittle action this time =) great update! please do update soon!
Author's Response: Ahh your wish is my commmand *plops up an udate* I hope you like this next chapter. Never thought writing dialogue could take so long haha. Keep your fingers crossed for Sammy, poor kid needs some action with an older brother like Dean stealing all the fun. Thanks again for the comment!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 28
Sam couldn't help but give a small snort of mirth at her expression. "Gee, don't look like it's the end of the world to hang out in the back seat with me. Listening to you two bicker over who got to cuddle with me just left me feeling so warm and fuzzy," stated Sam sarcastically. hehehe... well, finally they're out of the caves. But all of them looking like crap... So next chapter is gonna be about showers right? Long, hot, detailed showers... ;)
Author's Response: Hmm *starts to daydream of long showers with the boys* Huh what? Oh sorry Fredo, you distracted me with that idea of showers. I hope you like the next update! Thanks again for the fun comments!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 28
I know I'd hate like hell to have to cuddle with Sam! How can you torture Vicky so? ;)
Author's Response: Oh because it is so much fun to torment her! Thanks again for the fun review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
Geez! Just when you think they're in the clear something else. You must love to torture them!
Author's Response: Me? Love to torture? Hmm yup! *grins* Thanks so much for the fun review!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 27
get out get out get out! Sure, no point in having a nice and easy escaping right?... Pretty quick my friend, it's written just there, i can see it, so... and "How unbelievably cliché...it was the freaking torch," HA!
Author's Response: Ha! A nice and easy escape? Moi do that? Hmm naw...have to go for that last bit of drama. Hee, I had to poke fun at all those old movies where the torch was the lever. On w/ the escape!! Thanks so much for the review Fredo :)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 26
finally on their way out huh... Hey i just came back from my ski vacas, and one day, while i was stucked on a chair lift since ten minutes and starting to get seriously cold, i thought to the ice wraiths and giggled stupidly behind my scarf untill it finally started again... See, the Winchesters are pursuing me even when i take a break from the site...
Author's Response: Welcome back from the ski trip Fredo! I am so envious, but I hope you had fun. :) Haha I think it wouldn't be bad to be pursured by the Winchesters *ponders it* yup..they could pursure me any day! Glad to see you back and thanks so much for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 26
Yay! The victory is within their grasp! That was a long, hard battle.
Author's Response: I shall cheer w/ ya! Yay! About time they had things kind of go their way huh? See? I can be kind of nice to them...erm kind of. Thanks so much for the fun review! :)
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