Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 16
Good story. Thanks!!
Author's Response: Yay glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 15
okay, you should have edited this story last july when it was hot and sunny. Cause i'm already cold, and reading about ice cold skin and shivers so doesn't help! But, great updates, really looking forward for the next chapter. But one last thing, how the hell can she think about Sam while kissing Dean?! The blood loss maybe...
Author's Response: Lol yes I should have planned bette huh... but I am the slacker of slackers!! Guess I should send over your favorite Winchester to keep you warm while you read the story. I must agree, it could be due to blood loss, poor girl is so confused. Thanks so much for the review!!
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15
Thank goodness sams arrived, I think they will need all the help they can get to beat the baddies and get out of there. More please, don't leave us waiting for too long.
Author's Response: Ooo I hope I didn't having you waiting to long. I agree, they definitely need all the help they can get to get out of this mess. Thanks so much for the comments!
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 15
Oh, noo Sammy's in trouble (or hopefully he just kicked bad-guy's ass:) Like your storyline here, and the person that Vicky is turning out to be. But how on earth someone can think of Sam while kissing Dean... that's... (sorry, no offence, Sam)
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story so far:) Hmm and for Vicky thinking of Sam , well it could be due to blood loss... Dean is hot I must agree! Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 12
Once again, I am enjoying the OC (which is unusual for me). She’s unique & adds a lot to the story but doesn’t take away from the boys; she’s there to advance their story. I liked her backstory, and the flashback to her & her friend. Her story & the character herself didn't overshadow the story (which can happen – often - when an author introduces an OC). You’re writing is strong and portrays a clear picture. Very realistic conversations. Nice twists that kept me interested & wanting more. Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Aww thank you for such a lovely review! I tend to stess about the OC and try hard to not have her dominate. Glad you have been enjoying her presence. Super happy that you are enjoying my writing, my first real go at writing a story. Hope you enjoy the rest!
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh thank god, for a minute I thought she was gonna take off her close and use her body warmth, although I can asure her that definatly would have brought some heat just not the kind she needed lol it would have got hot lol no jk but seriously you have me hooked can't wait to read what you got next. i really like how dean can fight to live for his brother, it's touching. and the whole realism and metal spin you have on these ice wraith, a person usually just drifts away when dying of cold and goes to sleep and as dean slowly turns you can see the physical and metal twist you have put on that;very cool.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful review! Lol ya no full nakedness here, though that would be hot :P. Super happy that you like all the twists, got a few more planned!
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
Wow, poor Vicky, she has no other option to warm him up, why I don't think this is an effort ???? Sam has to be there soon, things are getting worst. I also liked the explanation about the knives. Please keep writing I love this story. Excellent job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! Ya twist Vicky's rubber arm to help warm Dean up huh. Glad you liked the explanation, thought those were kind of fun.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yeah, I'd really worry about what Dean thought if I had to make love to him to keep him alive. what a tough job Vicky has. Great chapter! I'm glad Sam is on his way and his spidey senses are telling him there's more than ice wraiths in the cave.
Author's Response: Haha, ya Vicky had to get a few perks after the rough life she had. Glad you liked the chapter so much. Thanks so much for the comments!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 13
a'm a bit late in my readings, but great update! I'm up for some revenge too!...
Author's Response: Aww no worries about being late! I like to call it fashionably late ;). Yay for revenge and let the fun begin!! Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 13
Very entertaining...and slightly kinky. Not sure I'd want to keep a knife in my bra. Ingenious idea!
Author's Response: Lol kinky? Hmm I might have to agree. And ya, if I kept a knife in my bra I would definitely stab myself with it by accident. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
Geez, poor Vicky. Like her life didn't suck enough, now she has to kill the only friend she has left. She has such a wretched life.
Author's Response: I know! I soooo don't wish to be in her shoes, but she is a stubborn one that is for sure. Thanks so much for the review hun!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 13
Nice update! Dean and Vicky have got to get out of there before Sammy finds them! ~Kayla
Author's Response: I agree, they definitely need to high tail it out of there! Thanks so much for the review kayla. :)
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 13
This sounds like it could backfire....but also like it could be really really fun. Lol, can't wait for another chapter. Cookies and pie to you, Vallana! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Wheee I love cookies and pie! Thanks so much!! Yes revenge can be fun but ooo what twists may still exist.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great update! Oh yeah--time for some serious revenge!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Yup definitely time for some revenge!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow...lovely chapter, Vallana....hope you enjoy your out-of-townness...come back with moooooooooooore!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Shiny! Was fun to finally meet you and some others on the shout box :)
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 12
Please update as soon as you get back, I don't think I can take the suspense. Please let dean be ok.
Author's Response: Thank so much! I hope I didn't keep you in suspense too long, time seemed to run away with me after I got back into town.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 12
one week!! So not cool... Okay, i'll wait patiently then, cause ask Jules, that's just something i'm so good at... and when you're back, "Alrighty then, let's go kick some snow cone butt!"!!
Author's Response: LOL sorry for the wait Fredo, glad you are patient cause ooo I slacked and didn't post right when I got back into town. But here it is and I hope you enjoy it. Thanks so much for the comments!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
thanks to you i'm cold now. Seriously, my feet are frozen. And as i can't count on Sammy to come reheated me, i'm gonna go find my hubby... Oh and by the way, great update!
Author's Response: Aww, *hands you some fuzzy slippers* I hope those get your feet warmed up! Good think your hubby is around, I think the boys will be slighty out of commission for some time before they can come over to help warm you up. Thanks for the wonderful review!
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am really enjoying this. At first Viky had me really intrigued, now I just want to find out what those darned ice wraiths are doing to my boy Dean. Come on, Sam, don't dawdle! Please update soonest!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you are liking it so far. Well I don't think Sam shall be dawdling for too much longer.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh. My. God. O.O Woowwwww.
Write more soon please. WraithDean? Yeah, you better write more. *shakes fist*
Author's Response: *hides* oh oh shaking your fist? *gives you puppy eyes* um I hope this keeps you happy until i get back into town *quickly runs and puts up a new update* Thanks so much for the fun comments! :)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow....Sam to the rescue! Hope he picked the right cave lol ~Kayla
Author's Response: Lol ya that would suck if he went to the wrong one huh. Thanks so much for the review Kayla!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 11
Good update! I can't believe Dean is going to be an ice wraith. I have to see how they get out of this one!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I think they are going to have to scramble around to figure a way out of this mess.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
So my question is, does Vicky just instinctually know when someone is lying or is it something more than that...hm.. great story so far, - thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Hmm good question indeed! The answer to that one is in a few more chapters. :P Thanks so much for the review K!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Tell you what I have to respect a girl that can kick a little Winchester but, Great chapter - K
Author's Response: Haha ya, never underestimate a girl is rule number one the Winchesters need to learn. Thanks for the review K!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
hm.... So there's more to Vicky than simply a bounty hunter huh, glad she's at least going to confront Sam rather than simply shooting Dean outright. Good story and I look forward to reading more - K
Author's Response: Ya definitely more to Vicky than meets the eye. Glad you are liking it so far and thanks so much for the wonderful review!
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