Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/01/12 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
oh you are a great writer and you are pulling my leg i so do hope so she is after my boy toy.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/01/12 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
ahhh hell no ... this so called Vicky did not do enough reaserch ... and she is going all wrong but if she gets near my boys i will transform myself to a lycan or a vampire and chew her out. :) yes i do and am attracted to Sam sorry. but this is good. Love your techniques of your writeing.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 09:55 PM · On: Epilogue
i LOVE IT AND WILL BE JOTTING DOWN THAT CERIAL OF NUMBER AND LETTERS FOR A NEWER LAPTOP. SEE, i knew youd be able to pull that off. Now you along with MIZPAH are lagit WORRIER HUNTERS OF THE SCRIPTURES. . .MAKE THE WINCHESTERS PRIDE FLOW THROUGH YOUR MINDS AND LETS KICK SOME EVIL SON OF A BITCH SHALL WE . . . I THOUGHT SO. P.S. If you do not like my RATING. . .give me a line lamix1mana@yahoo.com Ask MIZPAH, she knows me and could tell you a little more of me. RATING:EXUBERATING ++++++2 MILLION ++++++ I LOVE IT AND IF POSSIBLE TO GET A COPY. This whould be a hell of a show for SUPERNATURAL. SO, i due believe that you are still in for more then Sam getting even with VICKY'S Score, which is three stories pluse one of BOBBY'S. I like that. Good luck love you, MEAN IT!!!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 30
AGHHH!!!! Vicky. . .you've got alot of explaining to do . . . AGHHHH!!!!! I think Dean and Vicky just got ENGAGED, while Sam is trying his new perkyness for Vicky. . . like always DEAN always gets his GAL in the most POETIC way he can. I do hope that VICKY, can take that type of vessel of a hunter. . .does that mean if there is true hopes between D and V, Where in the hell would that leave his TRUE HOME BABY and SAMMY? What is SAMMY going to say? Let me take that back. . .she is also a TEAM PLAYER to her own marks. I do think their would have to be a serious talk to BOBBY about this situation and see if he could scownger up something for the two LOVE BIRDS. I do think there shoule be a three more episode run in with VICKY here, i like her style of Dean Winchester; but only in the femal sense. REMEBER: SAM - 1 VICKY - 3 We do have to clear that up. SO, it may not have been a huge step for Sam nor Dean KIND; but a GIANT WORTH LEAP OF A GOOD FREINDSHIP.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 29
WOOOOWWWW!!!! did I hear that from Sammy, Dean better watch out for SW here may take DW's toy away. That is what I mean, you excalibrate the effective FULL MOON on not only the WINCHESTERS; but as well as VICKY and that is pertty cocky for Sam to even make a statement like that. After all he is only one kind of guy to one girl, on like Dean, he . . .he is realy a TEAM PLAYER.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 28
This almost closing, is like a sweet llullaby. A well nice touch to this story. The symbolic symphone between Dean and the 67, simply outragously funny. The only thing that scarde the hell out of me, was the character of the Wraith. The VISION that i percevid it to be was automaticly horrifying to me.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 27
this is an excelent portion of one hell story that if i could get a copy of i'd cherish it. thank you. here is my email lamix1mana@yahoo.com this is a true rollercoster that i'd like to read more from you if possible.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 26
well, i was some what correct. Though, to my understanding that that demon was some how a sister to Vicky is a form, but in reality they where best friends. WOW!!!! this is trully hot.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 25
wow, this is story is sculptured well like a Vango painting.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 24
with in the structure of the story, i do feel that Vicky and Jenny are siblings and their father has a huge opinion on Jenny. of not being able to do something correct, but when its Vicky she is like some sort of princess. i could be wrong, but this is so going so well.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 23
This is like a sick porn that Dean had actualy paid for . . . no realy i do love this and its protrayl of Jenny being the bitch and almost a ho ho is a good combination to a Winchester story like this. You do so have class. Thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 22
This Jenny "Bitch" is really going for a full throtel of some Winchester - V ASS KICKING along with her father. This is good, action packed like if i where to watching an out dated Godizlla movie which where cool . . . get it COOL at one time.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 21
I do hope that it was the voice or either Vicky or Dean. . .my ? to you is for this intreging story, why did you not use Bobby?
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 20
the character of vicky is starting to get a warmth with in my heart. the dilog of discription of these monsters are very chilling and eraticly awesome. the admiration of how well style of tatic the Winchesters use with what there own body is dealing with and knowing that they have to saveone at all cost. is very HERORIC to support with in your writing, you so rock and is now considered a ROYAL COMPOSER just like MIZPAH.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/03/10 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
That eternall chang of mind between the WINCHESTERS is typical, but te funny way you place a kick ass joke that is givien to Dean. He always knows how to corupt Sam to follow not that its bad its just simply funny. Even theatrical, nice touch to a good story like this.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/03/10 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 18
that strong adversity and advise that the character of vicky played amongest the Winchester was wise, but the character of Dean's persona may have made him feel weak. This is an action pact story, with many options that could be played. that is how a story should be writen. with someone in asset to analyz what road to take and what may be taken.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 31/03/10 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 17
? how do you establish such great work of art within scripture's to the simple touch of pen, paper, and mind. i always told my very good and important writer friend MIZPAH, that there can never be a kick ass styling writer as herself. I must say now there can only be two. Both of you have the maximum potential in creative writing and if there where a way that maybe one day. . .one of the writers from SUPERNATURAL could read dedicated material like this it could be plubished and that whould be realy cool for all of you SPECAILY GIFTED GHOST WRITERS. THANK YOU FOR YOUR KICK ASS STORY LOVE IT. would like to get or make a copy of this one. if you think that im crazy or weired then you can go ahead and ask MIZAPH. I do believe that she may say something that yo can trust me with. Thank you once again.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/10 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 16
thank you, but this is ultimatly exciting and the setting of how Sam was almost tirumphed to distroy the enemy. Just letting you know sweety, that no matter how short or long the chapters are. The dyer need for the conclustion . . . it just keeps drawing a reader like me to keep attentaive to each image that can be for seen in my mind thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/10 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 15
this is so not what is needed. Sam will be in danger unless bobby is with him. i do like the relationship between Dean and vicky and i think and hope you went to that direction. i love this story and i'd like to read another. thanks for this one.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 14
right at this chick-flick moment would be a ROMEO and JULIET. . .except its inserts would be of Demons . . .retc.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 13
It is gripping how you place the sense of humore to a total comedy line up with Dean antics and Vicky, but also include how he always shows his manly love and devotion towards the people that serround him. . .including his only brother. In which he would die for without ?. I do feel that although Dan a man jerk. . .his antics for amusing one is very healing, i guess. . .although i don't know from the stand point of Sam he may think other wise.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/03/10 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
well, thank you. This trip down Vicky's memory lane is by far tripy. i do like the adventure of how her freind Dillion decided to have her as a back up and its intensity of the fight between the suprise attack against the three wriths, as well as the off and on argument of whom is better side kick like the Winchesters and its conclusion was valiant.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 27/03/10 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
thanks for the notice. This is one damned hot story to re-read 20 times, but whos counting.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/03/10 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 10
this is . . . damn i am so speachless. . .for your first one you did an awsome job.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/03/10 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 9
wow, this has so changed her status. Though, still a bit of the rocker like Bella. well done on the performance of the best friends way of dealing with the two hunters.
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