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Reviewer: SNholic (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 12

SAY WHAT???? they have a sister??????????????????????

Author's Response: Yeah, well...first fanfic, they only get better from here, I promise.

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 14

I loved this! Looking forward to a possible sequel.

--c 



Author's Response: Wow, I didn't think anyone was still reading this one!  Thanks for the read and reviews, it makes me happy to know that there's still a little interest here.

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ooooo, I was starting to suspect Iris was up to no good! I love the way this story is going!

--c 

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

oooo, goody. i was hoping there'd be some significant backstory on Lou.

 

--c 

Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

wow really great so far . lots of drama . cant wait to read more .

Author's Response:

Wow, didn't think anyone was still reading this one. Thanks for dropping the dime!

Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

Thanks for not killing Lou, she needs to hang around and give then shit, someone's got to.  Great story!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 14

YAY! thank you for not killing lou... although i noticed the sequel so i might be a little worried now... awesome story though i really enjoyed it and i TOTALLY loved the ending...that's gotta be the most ironic song you could choose... absolutely loved it

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 13

Another Fine Chapter! But, Don't be cruel and take her life. She's cool let her live.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 13

Beautiful job! What an exciting twist...you're still in a toss-up??? Um...I like alive...it's good...to be alive...lol... anyway, keep up the great work! (Alive!!!! :D)

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

good chapter...i like that you had sam and dean hash everything out. and i totally think you should NOT kill her coz that'd just be cruel. Although in the Winchester world, all they know is cruel but come on, someone's gotta give the boys a happy ending just once. and i really like lou. she's a cool chick.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 12

OK... I never saw that coming. I liked her take no crap attitude from Dean.

Since she is a Winchester, she needs to live so Sam can give her a piece of his mind.

Ok .. and we all need to know why the separation...I have my own ideas on that, but I'll wait and see.

Superb crafting of the story-master storytelling- excellent  manipulation of the characters-GREAT!!!!!!!!

SO... please don't wait tooo long for the update.

 

BRAVO!!!!!!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 12

live she should totally live just so sam can kick her ass for not telling her! OMG i can't believe she's their sister! never EVER would have expected that kind of twist! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 11

Please don't kill Lou, Anyone that can tell Dean off is my hero

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

That figures, Dean thinking about the hot nurse while Sam and Lou are in trouble. But dang, Lou sure kicked some ass. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

Iris is one sick puppy! I wounder what she is doing with the blood she pocketed.. Sam should stay on him about his feelings towards Lou once Dean is feeling better. Great chapter!

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just wanted to say that I've been enjoying this -- when I see a chapter waiting to be validated, I pounce first so that I can see where you're taking it. The nurse hurting Dean further is an interesting twist, and I like Lou and Dean's past and present. Keep it up.

Author's Response:

Thank-you.  It means a lot to know that you really like it.  I hope not to disapoint



Author's Response: oops, typo/disappoint

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 10

this iris chick is one seriously messed up bitch. sam needs to beat her up! can't wait to see if he does or not.

Author's Response: She'll get what's coming to her, i promise

Reviewer: NativeStar (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is an interesting story and I look forward to reading more.  :)  It's well written but can I suggest you might want to correct your title if possible (I'm a little new to this site, I'm not sure what editing features there are).  In your title you've used "you're" where it should be "your".  Unless you've done that on purpose?

Author's Response: Good catch on the typo. Thanks

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 8

very interesting. I'm really curious to see what Dean's side is coz he seems to have been an absolute ass for no reason...can't wait for the next installment. This story is totally kicking butt by the way.  I have loved it so far.

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this chapter, and the banter between the boys  :)

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

I can't wait to hear the story behind the fall out between Dean and Lou. I like the character of Lou so far ordering Sam to leave the hospital to rest.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

Nice Job! I have liked all the chapters so far but this one is my fav. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

oooo that's so awesome!! absolutely love it that you made lou the doctor! Totally can't wait for the next chapter...more to see what happens with Lou than with Dean.

Author's Response: Thank's for the review.  I've really enjoyed all your stories, and it means a lot that you like this one.

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Whew! I have been following and shame on me for not reviewing, but I wanted to get it validated and posted and then I forget to go back, but this chapter compelled me... nicely done and TENSE. I liked the doctor and the hand squeezing bit.

Keep it up.



Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review.  I've really enjoyed all you've written so far, and it means a lot that you like the story.  Please continue to review, it's my first work of fiction, and I need to know if i'm doing it right.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great Chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep it going!

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