Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Rather amusing, altho FYI, sex stores hand you bags with their names proudly and colorfully written all over it (but don't ask me how I know this!). And yes, you left off a major portion of the last sentence, when Sam wonders if Dean is around, and if he is, "don't make of me" but nothing lost. And just how did our rough cut Bobby know where to find the game??? Hmmm....

Reviewer: NikkiCee (Signed) · Date: 28/03/07 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lmao, loved it. And can you seriously not get a Ouija board at Wal-Mart? Cause that sucks, lol. But great job, I was wondering why that bag was unmarked...

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/07 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was great fun, both hilarious and emotional! "Guns are in the constitution!" LOL!

Reviewer: Novembers_Guest (Signed) · Date: 04/01/07 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Bravo, guys, that was spectacular!  Yes, I did try to read the box and was just as confused by the name as well as the plain paper bag. 

I not only like your explanation, but also the reason you provide for why Sam never touches Dean the entire time they're in the hospital.  I mean, that's the only logical explanation I've heard as to why a brother wouldn't touch his dying brother...one I can understand better than the "hands-off because we're Winchesters" explanation.

I, too, would be afraid to touch a pale, dying sibling.  Good job!

Author's Response:

We started writing this the night we all saw the episode together and then rewatched it another 2 times...Picture 5 girls in a cabin on 3 different floors laughing between the walls...so, this fic will always be special.  And we did have a whole discussion of the lack of touching<G> Thanks!

Ti