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Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:14 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

Wow, you really did a great job with this. Unexpectedly deep, nice perspective. Great choice of object to use, and you really did a lot with it. I especially liked the repetition of the line about marking the passage of time, but not controlling it. Very well done!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:30 AM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

Lam, this is poetry. Beautiful and very very original, loved it!

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 09:58 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

So, Tree told me I should read this -- it just took me a little bit. Then tonight I saw the movie "The Number 23" and in there is a phrase: time is just numbers with meaning attached to them...

And I thought of your story. So I read, and I admired. And I came away slightly sad. This was well done -- the whole "I mark the passing of time but I don't control it..."

Control is the grand illusion. And Dean is a master magician.

Well done, lam. I applaud you.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 04:40 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

nice little piece, lisa

Author's Response: Thanks Jude!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 10:30 AM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

Very cool.  I liked this a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review - and especially the stars!! Love me some stars.... It's fun to find a new way into the boys....

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 05:33 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

So poetic... And haunting... Gotta wish you could control time - makes those hours at work seem like seconds instead of days... and the hours at play like days. Ahhh. totally love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review! Yes, if we could control time, I can only imagine how much more time we could all spend with Dean....

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:38 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

"I mark the passing of time, but I don't control it" powerful statement. Beautifully done lam.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I can hardly believe that my first draft for this story didn't even include that line.....

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:59 AM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

I loved this!  " I've been getting a lot more attention than I'm used to lately. I mark the passage of time but I don't control it"  that is the truest statement! 

With Dean counting the days and maybe even the hours until the time is up and his deal is collected it is super fitting! 

Great Job neighbour!



Author's Response: Thanks Gen!!! I really wanted it to lead up to the end of the season and a hint of what might be to come this season.... If we could control time, think of how much more we could devote to Dean.....

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 09:00 AM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

Love it!  I especially like that you repeat "I mark the passing of time, but I don't control it."

Great concept to have the watch mark time in a different way!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! It's good to hear that the repetition worked - didn't want it to seem annoying or redundant or too heavy "handed"....

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 03:23 AM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

awesome ! wow, loved it Lisa.

Author's Response: Thanks Fredo - not as funny or as sexy as yours though!!!!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 03:00 AM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

Loved this lam, very poignant. It conjured up lots of great images and a final urgency which is very hard to ignore.

I mark the passing of time, but I don't control it. Too true. Well done!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad that what I was trying to say seems to have made it to the page. Would that any of us could control time....

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 11:48 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

love it lam.  Great job with the whole thing.  Especially love the 'I mark the passing of time, but I don't control it.  - Very nice - K

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Kell. It never would have gone in this direction without your valuable insights on the initial draft!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 11:43 PM · On: Time Flies When You Are Having Fun

great job, lam!! love the line...imark the passing of time, but i don't control it!! very nicely done!! bambers;)

Author's Response:

Thanks Bambers! It wouldn't have gotten here without your input! I really appreciated it...

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