Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
Bobby is so amusing! I love his mumbled remarks, his stoic devotion! He's the perfect straight man for the Winchesters. I especially like when he says "very original" in the face of Meg's hellfire and brimstone threats. Too good! Keep the cliffhangers coming!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 7
Another great chapter! Love the way you end it with "that was Meg." Simple, but it so sets the stage for Dean's reaction.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
Busy now..reading... Amazing! Marvelous! Incredible!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
This keeps getting better and better! Wonderful job!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
It woked great! Especially using the same song! It was only natural that Sam, in his dazed state, would revert back to that time in the Impala. Great tool!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great cliffhanger! I hope you explain later how Gordon got out of prison.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Yay! The suspense is heating up!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter! I loved the scene between Dean and Sam---angst never hurts anything. So your comibning Wandell and Walker? Oh, I can't wait for this!!!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
You and your cliffhangers...lol. Thanks for updating tomorrow...I couldn't stand waiting for a few days! You are too good at hooking people! ~Kayla
Author's Response: haha lol I know I bet you're reading it like...'we're due another cliffy-o there it is! lol as always thankyou for your support! Aliyssa x
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 8
Loving the story. Great idea using Wandell and Gordon. I was completely shocked to find she was possessed! Love the idea that you've picked up after AHBL and still managed to weave in elements from BUABS. Well written! Yay for hurt Dean, always appreciated! Awesomely evil cliffy!!
Author's Response: haha lol glad you like it! there will be a bit more hurt dean later on if you want to know ;). Thanks for reviewing! Aliyssa x
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 8
OK... you have my undivided attention. I truly hate Gordon. Wadell's daughter-well i feel sorry for her, but not at Sammy's expense. truly AWSOME having Meg kick the crap out of Gordon. He still needs to suffer after the problems he's caused the boys. Now, please do update tomorrow- the suspense is killing me. Great reading-a fan
Author's Response: aww sorry the suspense is cruel I know lol thanks so much for such an encouraging review! and yeh I felt it was approproiate Gordon got the carp kicked outta him by Meg. I will update tomorrow lol I promise! Aliyssa x
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh please do update tomorrow. This is a nice follow up story after Gordon, and after the killing of Steve Wandell. Thank you for connecting it! Ciao!
Author's Response: Hey-thanks so much for reviewing again :) Glad you like it! see ya! x
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
interesting ending...I totally can't wait for then next update. This was a killer chapter. And i have to say i love that Meg beat the crap out of gordon.
Author's Response: hey wow thanks again for reviewing-lol I did say gordon got what he deserved...thanks so much! Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, this was great. The tension is rising! Honestly I wasn't gonna check into this story at first as I have too many others I am currently reading (also, there is already a story called "Vengeance" out there, did you know that?). But now I got curious and sat down and read all the chapters posted so far in one piece. I have to admit I am hooked. Very well written. You got me along for the ride! Can't wait where you will take us next!
Author's Response: oh-wow thanks for a lovely review! lol no I didn't know there was already a story called Vengeance out there *shrugs*. I'm very glad you like it so far-more updated later today -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 7
Please write soon! Begging here!!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Lol thanks for letting me know you want more-it will be on the way today- Aliyssa x
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my! What a cliffhanger!!!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
:0) Great update! I'm glad that Sam got out of there! I just hope that Gordon doesn't come after him again! ~Kayla
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 6
What's not to love-Gordon getting fooled by a demon... that's priceless. He's such a psychotic dumb, sob .... this is too good. i still want him finished, but I was kinda hoping Bobby would take him out. You're good - I didn't see Her as a demon. Which begs the question- Sam's safety ???????? You have a great style-your words paint the pictures i see-just keep it coming. Another chapter...please????? AWSOME!!!!
Author's Response: Wow thanks for such a lovely review-I'm really glad you like the story so far! Glad that little twist wasn't anticipated too :)more chapters are on the way today! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
that really was a cruel cliff-hanger, but if the demon wandell kicks gordon's ass then i'm all for it coz in my opinion, gordon just doesn't get beat up enough.
Author's Response: Heheh no he doesn't but believe me Gordon gets what's coming to him! Thanks for reviewing!! more is on the way today -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
Aww, man! A cliffie? No fair. This story keeps pulling me in more and more. What's going to happen to Sam????
Author's Response: Hey Kayla-lol thanks for reviewing-glad you're liking this one...you'll just have to wait and see what happens to Sam-but don't worry I will be updating today! -Aliyssa xx
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
Whoa!!!!!! Dean better hurry up and help Sam. I don't think that Sam will hold up with Gordan Wandell!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh wow....I really, really hate that Gordon!!!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
ooooh! such suspense! Great first chapter! ~Kayla
Reviewer: carveybabe (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
Good story! I like the way you are building suspense! Keep posting!
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review-I will defo keep posting lol and am glad you're enjoying the suspense- Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 5
OH yeah....i do not like Gordon. Kick his ass DEAN!!! I like this story!!!
Author's Response: Hi again-thank you for another review-your encouragement makes me happy :) lol...Gordon gets what he deserves real soon...Aliyssa x
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