Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 18
LOL! That was awesome! Brilliant bringing Walker and Meg back for revenge. I liked Wandell too. She was nice. Great stuff!
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 18
Nice premise, Gordon & Wandell's daughter teaming up to get revenge on Sam. Nice twist w/ Wandell being possessed! By Meg! Good, solid, clear writing. Good descriptions of events, thoughts and emotions. Also, you stayed true to the characters and did them justice and you really seemed to capture the rapport between Dean & Sam, both in serious and playful moments. I like how even though Sam was kidnapped, he wasn't helpless once he was. He fought his way out the situation (injured no less) & didn't have to completely rely on Dean to save him. There's just not enough of that in my opinion. I love Sam angst – so this story was a real treat for me! Overall it was a very good, solid story.
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 18
A Nice ending to a nice story! Good one!!! Cheers!
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 18
I was a little confused during the fight – the energy part & Sam facing off against Meg. Others times were a bit rushed, but it might have just been me. Overall, good story – I always enjoy Meg return stories, I especially like the idea of her returning in Wandell's daughter – original & creative. Love Sam angst so this was right up my alley!
Author's Response: hi thanks for taking the time to review- i really appreciate the comments and pointers lol.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great way to end the story! I couldn't stop laughing!
Author's Response: hey lol glad you enjoyed it! thanks for all your support throughout this story I really apprecitae it! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 18
hilarious ending....wraps the story up perfectly. i totally enjoyed this whole thing.
Author's Response: hiya lol glad you liked the humour! and thanks so much for al your lovely comments! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great angst! Oh how I love drama. You did a wonderful capturing sams emotions in this chapter. I'm sad that this is nearing the end! ~Kayla
Author's Response: aww thanks! that means so much to me honestly. One more to go-dont be too sad yet lol and I'm sure I'll think of something to write soon-there are a few ideas floating about in my head that well, you never know, might turn into something! ;) Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 17
i loved it angst and all. Especially the end. that was just adorable. And total shocker when sam said he was sorry that he was dean's brother. broke my heart a little with that one, but the cuteness of the ending mended the crack. I'm excited to see how you end this and i've thoroughly enjoyed the ride so far.
Author's Response: aww thanks! delighted you've enjoyed the story and thanks for droppin' me a line to let me know what you liked in particular-it awlways helps for future stories etc lol! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 17
Very good job! I always enjoy the playful banter between the brothers.
Author's Response: hey thanks yet again for taking the time to review for me-glad you're still enjoying the story even if it will finally start winding down now lol ;) i love the banter too-more of that on the way! I think you'll like it...:D
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 16
Liking it? I'm loving it! Those boys are just crazy when it comes to protecting one another.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 15
Wow! Great chapter! That Gordon is a persistent devil. Normally, the story would be winding down about now, but I think you have more surprises in store.
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 15
Poor Dean! Well at least they are really sure that Gordon is gone for good! Update again soon! Kudos!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
Wow. both brothers hurt and only Bobby and Wandell to take care of them...they have a lot on their hands. We all know how stubborn Sam and Dean can be ;0) Nice update! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh Wow!! You turned the tables on us! Now Dean is the one in trouble! Another excellent chapter! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
Uh oh! Now what happened? It was a simple salt and burn---oh yeah, I almost forgot. Nothing's ever simple with a Winchester. Eager tosee what happened!
Author's Response: hahah just when you thought I was being nice by having Wandell be all understanding there is a problem with Dean...more on the way soon and thanks so much for reviewing again! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
So glad Wandell was possessed so she knows what it's like to act against your will.
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 14
Good cliff!!! Awaiting the next chapters! Cheers!
Author's Response: hey glad you're still enjoying it! Thanks for letting me know as always! Muchos appreciated lol :P more soon-Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
Waaahhhh!! We were just gettin' to the good stuff. What's up with Dean?? You know I love my hurt!Dean fixes. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: lol Vanessa yup i know you love hurt dean hehe...dont we all! i reckon us supernatural fans are a bunch of latent (cough) sadists ;) glad you're enjoying it and thanks for dropping me a line! will update soon! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 12
lol. It was weird to read this without a cliffie. Interesting! lol. Nicely done! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
I hope Sam is okay! I hate when Sam can be so stubborn! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 12
I liked the part where Dean mimic Sam's puppy eyes. Funny idea.
Author's Response: hehehe lol glad you liked it-thanks so much for all your encouaragement-it really makes me smile :D! more on the way! x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm glad you killed Gordon off and that he died due to an 'act of God.' At first I was surprised Wandell was with Bobby, then I remembered she had been possessed. I guess they need to debrief her. Maybe now she'll understand why Sam killed her father and be able to get the other hunters off his tail. I'm ready for more!
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
The extra symbols, nice idea! Poor Sam! Good thing Dean is always there.... Other than Gordon, and Wandell, I forgot to add that you were able to connect Meg as well! Nicely done. Write again soon!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow! That was a rollercoaster of a ride! Kudos!!
Author's Response: hey wow thank you so so much for all your lovely reviews! haha glad you like Bobby's remarks etc too cause I wouldn't want his character to suffer just cause I'm concentrating on the Winchester's. I really don't know what to say cause I'm astounded by the response apart from thanks. It really does mean everything! -Aliyssa x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
I wondered why they hadn't found something different to trap Meg since she escaped from the last ring fo Solomon. Glad Bobby's on the case!
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