Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is really good this story descibes how much John cares for Sam and Dean.
Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed it, Sharky... I wrote it as a missing scene from the episode HOME... I think John really loved his sons... He just had problems expressing it with his Marine background...they are such tough guys. :0) jude
Reviewer: elprimouno (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great explanation to a back stage or deleted scene story!.... Can I have your Authograf now? dated!
Author's Response: El Primo....the more you review...the more I enjoy your wonderful sense of humor .... You are the BEST so you picked a great pen name!!!!!
Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was pretty damn good . would have made a great scene in the episode .
Author's Response: Thank you, Angel, I liked it but then I feel like poor John gets the short end of the stick quite often.....I believe he loved both the boys so very much
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awww...so beautfully written, Jude. Those last thought of John's really choked me up. Just simply amazing. You need to write faster so i can readmore of your brilliant work. Kari
Author's Response: Kari, Thank you for your kind comments.....much appreciated...... Didn't win the contest but I was pleased with it anyway...... :0) jude
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
You really know how to make someone say awww. I'm glad you did this scene coz u showed us that deep unconditional love John has for his boys, for Dean. It was great:)
Author's Response: Thanks for saying that, Schelz.....Laura dislikes John...thinks I give him too much credit but that smile in Shadows, that proud look and sadness in In My Time of Dying and in AHBL2 showed so much love...... I miss John
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
hey I really enjoyed the story-I like that you chose a John scene for the missing one cause it's a bit more unusual and you could have easily gone for writing about sam/dean and I think you made it a bit more tricky and interesting for yourself lol-great end result though so I'm glad you did!
Author's Response: Aliyssa, thank you for taking the time to read my little tale.......John intrigues me....having been a single parent there is a fierce need to protect the children... Too many people see John as only the BAD guy....I think he is so much more complex than that..... :0) jude
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was awsome. It fit so smoothly with the storyline. You give john more compassion then I- you see him duifferently It's a terrific work. Thanks for sharing .
Author's Response: We had a lot military friends.......John is typical Marine dad who has seen combat.......the compassion is there but sometimes deeply hidden thank you so very much for reading and reviewing......so appreciated
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. This was very impressive jude. I loved little Dean becoming aware so early of his dad's needs, and trying so hard - he always tries so hard!- to look after him and Sam. That phone call to his dad in the show really broke me up. Your story broke me up all over again. Well done!
Author's Response: Ciel, I'm impressed that you made the time to read my writings...I so enjoyed EMPATH and just started CRUX this a.m......it means a lot to me I knew a little boy(almost 5) who's mom drove off to work one day and never came home(Killed in an accident) and that little guy was so eager to keep to keep others in his life happy.......I wondered if he thought she left because of something he did......kids are so perceptive... When I saw the scene with brash, confident Dean so unsure of himself, almost frightened it actually made me tear up....
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
hey, very nice Jude ! Never thought about what John could have felt when receiving Dean's message. Glad you wrote it. Thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Fredo, Thanks so much for taking the time to read my little entry...Dean's uncertain, halting message really stuck in my head.....couldn't believe that John as a parent wouldn't have been just as emotional..
Reviewer: lonewolfzman (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
I liked this one a lot! Liked the picture of little Dean singing to Sammy and crawling in bed with him. maybe that is why JOHN never CRIES :) GOOD STORY
Author's Response: I like to think that Dean CHOSE to be the guardian of Sam rather than John forcing that role onto him.... Glad you liked it.....
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
A masterpiece! I love this story! Getting into the head and heart of John Winchester is not an easy feat! We all know that deep down he is a good man (or was) and that everything he did he felt was to protect his children and that's what any loving parent would do misguided as we may be sometimes! I really loved this story...deconstructing John Winchester! I can't wait to read something new keep it up Mom!
Author's Response: Thank you, Gen, for taking the time to read this.....it means so much to read your nice comments......I had a lot of fun.....The way they pictured John with Dean(& Sammy) in the pilot..I saw such a loving, happy proud father... YED drew out the fighter who felt a need to make"his boys" self-reliant in case they became orphans.....Sad but understandable.....
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay! It's here. :) I so enjoyed this, Jude. I approach John with so many mixed emotions -- and his seemingly unresponsiveness to Dean's plea on that voicemail always twisted me up. I liked your take on it. Thanks so much for sharing! GS
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking the time to read my little piece, Gaelic...your encouragement means so much to me.... .i think we all had our own thoughts on HOME...for me, it was the first real"chink" in Dean's "I'm so strong" armor and I was unnerved by John NOT wanting to interact with the boys at that time....
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
good job i like that you showed the real love and concern that john has for his boys
Author's Response: Danielle, thank you for the read and review...Always feel John gets short shrift when it comes to being judged as a GOOD Dad........ from what I've read of your work you seem to feel the same way.....thanks... :0) jude
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
Good job Jude. Glad to see another one of your shorts, Gotta love a oneshot..lol. Thanks as always for the read - K
Author's Response: Thanks, Kelly....appreciate you making time to read this ......thanks so very much for the review..... always enjoy your input
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey, this is great Jude!!! It's always nice to see the more concerned, fatherly side of John every once in a while, especially since he never really does do that "dad" thing...but anyway, great job!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shiny...I really think John loves those boys more than life......he showed that to Dean when he did the 'deal'.... glad you liked it
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh I'm so glad you posted this, I forgot to tell you it was okay to do that!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Terry .... Gaelic reminded me the other day.... I wasn't going to at first out of respect for her and that wonderful piece she wrote..but she said to do so..............
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