Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

Not a clue

Author's Response: he he goody.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

okay....so is it Heidi ????

That would be awful for poor Dean.....no one to trust anymore..

 



Author's Response: i guess you'll find out soon, hope you're not disappointed

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

very nice chapter.....poor Dean.....at least they're all trapped with our  hunters

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

Completely unexpected!  Good slight of hand---get us looking one whay then dazzle us with something else!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 7

Duuude, you really to throw in the twists, dontcha??? Love it, rholou!!!! Great job with this....it's really amusing and entertaining! hee...equal opportunity hunters...great line...

Author's Response:

glad to see you're still enjoying it, thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Good chapter and great cliffhanger! 

Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter has a cliff hanger too, in fact I'm not sure I can write a chapter without one. LOL

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

Never apologize for whumping Dean!!

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the reassurance!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 6

And I agree with Winchester07, Hurt!Dean is a sexy Dean.  VBG

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ooohhh, never apologize for a Dean head wound.  Or any Dean wound---I love 'em.  Guess I'm a little sick too. 

Another great chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review and anything Dean is sexy, right?

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 6

hurt!Dean is a sexy Dean...sick i know but damn the man is hot

Cant wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

I totally agree, nice to know you're all as warped as me. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh wow! Rholou, you are a master. (Actually I did think a Githra was real--no idea you made it up! Hey, it could happen...right....) So, what does Celia have on her wrists??? Symbols??? Cuts??? Bracelets that caught magpie Sam's attention??? Lol...

Author's Response: LMAO, you're funny and also right ha. I'll let you read and find out which guess is right, love the bracelets idea though LOL.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

don't apologize....not every second has to be action.....you have to set the plot and feel of the story...and you're doing that quite well

Author's Response:
thankyou for the reassurance

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

I enjoyed the change of feelings Sam had for the teens he sat with at lunch.  Perceptions of people change so easily in high school once you get to know someone.

I also loved that you referred to the Impala as a memeber of the family, especially the line: "they didn't really have many of them left to go around."  So true!



Author's Response:
thankyou for picking up on all the aspects of the  story, nice to know it's appreciated

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh well I hope you get to the next chapter soon, because this is just building up the anticipation...! Love how Jake put two and two together...Great job. Well, continue on, you crazy person who made Dean wash  toilets! I'm waiting!!!!!

Author's Response:
thanks for sticking with it, next chapter up soon

Reviewer: SamandDeanRock (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

Can't wait for more

Author's Response:
thanks, glad you're liking it

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

toilets, huh?? I'd pay to see that....

poor Dean, he always gets messy stuff while Sam gets prestigious stuff....so unfair........



Author's Response:
i know, i'm cruel

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

making Sammy walk....after claiming the Impala as his ??!! priceless........

Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great shower scene!  I especially liked Dean singing the high parts.  So funny!

I think sometimes less action punches up a story.  You're setting the stage and this is a fun chapter for that.



Author's Response:
got to have a shower scene, right?

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hee hee...love it, R! Great job with the boys and their banter...and okay, Dean? Singing Grease? HA! I would kill to see that on screen!!!! Poor guy, though...cleaning toilets...*evil grin*...can't wait for more!

Author's Response:
i can just picture dean doing it, can't you? haha

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

very nice. Good job.


Author's Response:
thanks for the support

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 3

Funny chapter.  Teenagers certainly know how to get right to the point.  I like that you put that into your story.

Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 3

Of course you'll get reviews! Fantastic chapter! I love Dean working as a janitor...and Sam as a poor T.A....that's just great!!!! hee hee...okay, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens and where this is going!

Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

ohhh and it gets better and better....

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, glad you're liking it.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

great start..........

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

can't wait to find out deans job at the school.

Author's Response: i'll post the nexr chapter friday so you don't have to wait too long

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