Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 7

aww poor dean..i know that had to have scared sam ive been there with a co worker so i know that helpless feeling

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is really good.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love this story! Can't believe Dean is risking his health to save his Dad money - but then again it's typical him, protective Dean. So glad John finally called Bobby for help. I really like the way you portray John, tough and rough on the outside yet so caring about his sons and his helpnessless is almost tearing him apart. More please soon. Thanks!  

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another excellent chapter, I look forward to an update!

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hiya

 The story sounds great so far, and just keeps getting better.

I've read loads of stories about teenage Sam and Dean and they ofen disappoint. This on the other hand is fantastic. You've really captured the essence of their relationship.

You've touched on such a sensitive issue with class and integrity!!

Well Done!!! Its fab

Bxxx

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 4

Aw, poor Dean! The other kids are picking on him but he wants to be tough. It seems like he still has a long way to go until he's getting adjusted to the new life style. My heart goes out to John who wants to do everything for his boy. And now Joshua is gone and John is running low on money. I am curious where you will take us next. Good read, more please!

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 4

poor dean other kids can be so cruel

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

What a different and interesting story! I really like it. I have two diabetic friends and watching them getting used to their new life style was an amazing learning experience. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

I was soooo glad to see that you had posted here! I've actually been following this story on the "other" site....

I love how you portray John - he may not be the best father, but he truly cares about the boys and does his best. You've portrayed him in a really realistic way.

I'm looking forward to having an excuse to re-read the chaps I've already read and they the new ones....

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.  I'm glad you think I portray John is a realistic way.  Its one of the things I try hard to do is keep everyone in character. 

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh No! Poor Dean,, :(

 Love The Story So Far :D

Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying the story. 

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG! ,,, I love the fact Dean's Junior,, Haha!

 Keep Up The GREAT Work!

 I wanna know what happens next :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start...I'm thinking this illness begins with the letter "D", but I could be way off! Get back soon and fill me in!


Author's Response: Yes Dean's illness begins with a d.