Supernaturalville
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 12

This was such a sweet chapter. I love the detail you go into over their first day at the new school. Wouldn't it be nice if Dean actually managed to have a postive experience at school? Somehow, though, I think things aren't going to continue going smoothly. Afterall, he has fallen back into hiding his diabetes again.... Always looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kate (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

I really love this story, it's so different but still real. You stay true to the characters and yet have changed them so much that it's almost like they're different people, but then again they're not. Brilliant!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hah! Dean In A Private School .. That Will Be Interesting!

Really Great Work :D

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 11

How funny---John and Bobby doing rock, paper, scissors!

I know creative license is given in stories and sometimes reality is suspended---just wasn't sure if you knew John's tombstone read Jonathan E. Winchester? 

Great reaction to Sam agreeing with his dad!  LOL!!



Author's Response: I started this story just before I found that out.  Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 11

I really enjoyed the last 2 chapters. As always very well written and very detailed. It is a great read all along! I am glad that Bobby's connections worked out but I am afraid Dean is going to get into trouble at his new school. I hope things will work out for him in the long run. Thanks for this wonderful story :)

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter. I really love the detail you are putting into this story. Poor Dean - can't imagine a worse school for him. I'm torn between wanting Dean to stick it to the head master by getting awesome grades and being a star athlete and just getting the heck out of that hell hole.... Looking forward, as always, to the next chapter!

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

Thankyou so much for continuing this fabulous story. looking forward to next chapter many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 11

this is a good intro into the school and getting them out of bobby's.  i'm curious to see what's gonna happen on their first day.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 10

The last 2 chapters were very good. I enjoyed the Father and Son moments in this chapter.

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 10

Rocking! Yes, This Story Is Very Cool!

KEEP UP THE FAB WORK! :D

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm willing to bet you got the weather in Kansas in January pretty accurate.... Poor Dean! Loved your explanation for why Dean hates to be left in the hospital. Glad to see Dean is finally coming to terms with his condition, but I get the feeling that he's not out of the woods yet.... I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to where you go from here. I love the way you portray John - he's not perfect, but he is certainly not a monster as so many authors seem to like to portray him....

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 10

Another good chapter.  I like that you mix educational information with the emotions, and difficulties recently diagnosed diabetics face.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 9

Lots of good information and especially expression of feelings.  Keep it up!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

Poor Dean---struggling with himself.  I hate it that he won't tqake care of himself, but I actually know young diabetics who behave in this same manner.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 9

Aw, another cliffhanger. Just when we thought the hospital stay had brought Dean back on his feet and he had a chance to spill his guts to his Dad. What's happening to him now? Setback or emotional outburst because John is not at his side? I really love how detailed you describe each Winchesters thoughts and feelings. Very well done! Thank you :)

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 9

these cliff hanger endings are killing me! i can't wait to find out what happens.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 9

Really good so far.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good imagery. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

You explain how long-term illnesses affect the entire family in a manner that illustrates their difficulties and also evokes our compassion.  Good job!

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! Poor Dean, Never Seems To Have Enough Time For The insulin..

Keep It Coming, Im Really Enjoying This!

Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

Let me say just one thing ! I really love your story so far and you can't leave us without the end of it ! it's not fair !! Also I wanna say that I don't often read wee!chesters story 'cause they are not my favorites. So when I picked up yours I knew I was not gonna read it all, but here I am, waiting nervously for the end ! You made a great job with it. How many chapters are left ? and when are you gonna leave them on the site ?

(sorry if my message is not very clear but I'm french and I try to do my best !)

thanks again for that story.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you are ejoying the story.  As to how many chapters are left, I can't say for sure but there will  probably be a lot more.    I have many things planned and it just depends on how long winded I get. 

I have up to chapter 10 written and hope to post them within the next couple of days.  After that it may take me a little longer to update depending on schedule. 

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

This is really good.


Author's Response: Thanks you for the review. 

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

Thanks for spoiling us with another long and detailed chapter. Very well written. I love how Bobby tries to connect with Dean. Poor boy, he gets to go to the carnival and screws up once more just because he can't bring himself to admit his diabetes to the others and take care of himself on time. I feel so sorry for him. Hope he is going to be ok. More please soon :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I hope to post the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

good chapter. totally knew dean wasn't going to be responsible at the carnival. Plus i like the way you described bobby and his attatchment to the boys.  Good job. can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad your enjoying Bobby in this story.  I just love his character.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Sam, no wonder he feels pissed to leave his friends, everything seems to be revoling around Dean. But he loves his brother enough to realize that John had to make them move. I loved how you described John's struggle and the way he confessed his financial problems to the boys. I hope Dean will get over his feelings of guilt soon, it's tearing him apart. Aw, my heart goes out to him. More please soon. Thank you.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great new chapter! Looking forward for there arrival at Bobby's and to see where you are going to go from there.

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