Supernaturalville
Reviewer: moonstone (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

ohhh!!!!!!!!!!!! please writye the rest...PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 16

So, write more!

Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Dean. But he's been working so hard lately, no wonder his body need a break.

It was pretty interesting to see how the competition when on, very good. I'm glad both boy's teams have won!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 16

of course dean can never catch a break because the universe seems to always be against one dean winchester. hope he doesn't get too much worse though. and i loved the whole sex section. it was interesting. and seriously, everyone needs a mother like kelsey.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 16

Another awesome chapter! I love how long and detailed they always are..... I hope that when and if Dean and Kelsey decide the time is right, poor Dean at least catches a break with that!!! I'm always on the lookout for your next chapter.....

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 15

Dean is so caring even at his own expence. Love this story update soon Lorraine

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great new chapter, I so love this story, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing ,I'll keep on reading.  Wonderfully thought out story can't wait  for it to continue.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 15

I so love this story! Things seemed to have improved for the Winchesters but more health troubles for Dean are obviously right around the corner. You did a wonderful job sharing the brothers thoughts and feelings with us. I am looking forward to more. Thanks for your continued great work :) 

Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 15

I'm so happy Dean made it through the tryout too! He's so smart and finally a teacher as seen that!

And Gray is such a good friend, he saw right away that Dean wasn't well and told Sam, who was too busy thinking about himself as usual.

Great new chapter, hope Dean gonna be ok.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 15

I just LOVE this story. You've done an awesome job creating a really believable AU for the boys. Love John in this 'verse. Gotta love Dean  --and what he'll do for his brother. Loved that we get to see Dean get a little recognition at school too. Will he still be facing that initiation you hinted at in the last chapter? Looks like he'll be dealing with a cold or the flu in the short term though....Love the nice, juicy long chapters - can't wait for the next one!!!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

Whew!  One more chapter of good luck for the Winchesters.  I was afraid it was going to end already.  I'm so tense waiting for th other shoe to drop.

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

Good chapter, i'm not liking those 3 lads, but good characters to have, always got to have the bad guy(s).

Keep it up, cant wait till th next chapter!

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

You could'nt take the smile off my face when I saw a new chapter up. I absolutely love this stoey. To see the family as normal and John being the caring father, it's great. So well written, really interesting, love it, love it.

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

Hi judy, i really love this story, looking forward to the next chapter. Lorraine

Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great new chapter!

I just hope Dean's suppose friends will change their minds through the months of waiting and not do anything.

Dean doesn't need or deserve what they are planning, whetever it is.

Great job! I love your story.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 14

really hope those jerks don't hurt our dean.  he's having a hard enough time as it is. and that whole eagle idea...i was totally expecting you to put that they wanted to tie him to a cross and paint an S on his chest. Totally had a flashback of clark kent stuck up there for a minute.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter - I just love this story.... Of course, I was enjoying things going well for the Winchesters for a change too - but I just know that the fact John just said it means that things are going to get really bad.....

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

So far things are working out well for the Winchesters.  But knowing their luck, that's about to change.  Interested to find out what happens.

Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great new chapter.

Nice touch about the bracelet. I'm wondering who's gonna find it.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one I'm so looking forward to it. Dean finaly made a friend at the dreaded school but what are the other boys going to do. Oh, and Dean's missing bracelet....Doesn't sound good!

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hi another great chapter. Dean has a friend at last, but am a bit worried about what Jamie and Cody have planned for him. Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 13

Another great chapter. I am so loving this story. I love the relationships you have between Bobby and the boys. It's awesome that you have Dean best friends with an "egghead" instead of a jock or a motorhead. Perfect - of course he would gravitate toward someone more like Sammy.... If he's luck, his bracelet is safe with Gray - 'cuz I just know that Gray is going to be totally cool with the whole diabetes thing - once he gets past Dean lying to him - that boy really does need to learn how to have friends....Can't wait for the next chappie.....

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 12

Love the way you split up the chaptter into time periods for sam and dean, looking forward to next chapter. Many thanks Lorriane

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 12

good chapter. I liked how you went back and forth between the boys' day. It was a really creative way to show what happened to each of them.  And i loved that you gave Dean's friend the last name of a shot gun too.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 12

I like the part where the boys are sleeping.  Sam is oblivious and feels safe and Dean is still vigilant in keeping his brother safe even in sleep.

I enjoyed the comparison between Sam and Dean's school day.  I'm glad Dean made some friends and didn't get expeeled on the first day.

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