Hi Lou, you can put me down for a sequel. I have really enjoyed this story. Like Deans idea of the book being a demon trashcan, very clever. Looking forward to the next part so hurry up and post. Lorraine

Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine, it's always great to get a review from you as I love your writing. Sequel is being planned as we speak!

Good description in chapter 2:The creature stood completely still and looked at Dean from inside Warminger’s ruined body. His blackened empty eye sockets contained only white phosphorous. The skin on his face was torn and ragged but there was no blood, only light. Hot blinding light that now spewed from every aperture into the darkness and dribbling like molten metal down the contours of his face. Slowly Warminger lifted twisted broken fingers towards the huddled figure in front of him.  Chapter 3Incredible description in chapter 3 – gave me the chills:  Clothes long since turned to ash, the surface of Warminger’s body couldn’t be called skin anymore. It pulsed and bubbled with energy, flaking and shedding as the demon surged through it. He went through the motions of placing one charred foot in front of the other, slowly inching back towards the smouldering chamber below the chapel. He’d been halted in his pursuit of the yellow haired man by invisible barriers, shields he was not yet strong enough to penetrate. He wanted freedom, had tasted it for the first time in nearly an age and was intoxicated by the power.  Chapter 4Good: Sam had no trouble following the tracks of scorch marks and broken, smouldering twigs that littered the path. He made no attempt at stealth; worried and anxious to find his brother. He jumped a felled log with ease then hesitated when he saw a sudden burst of light in the far distance. It had to be the demon. The knowledge of how close he was, spurred him on to greater speed as he pushed through the brambles, leading with the barrel of his shotgun.  I liked Bobby's involvement, you made him true to the show (when he didn't flinch when he was cut or when the demon showed up).  

Author's Response: This is another great review from you K. thank you. I love painting a mental picture, it's the part of writing I love the most and I'm very pleased you're enjoying it. Please keep reviewing.

I'm becoming so enthralled with this piece of writting!

Amazing

-Bex

Another great chapter, very well done!


Author's Response: Last chapter will be posted in the next few days, quite sad as writing this was a blast!

Terrific description, and I could really feel Sam's panic when he realised Dean was caught in the fire ... heading on!

That quite possibly had some of the best one liners I have ever read..at points I was just laughing out loud.

"'fraid I can't hear a word you are saying Samantha" perfect Dean and "Man you look like a german Librarian"..I can just see Sam saying that.

Totally great, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks Impala, Dean is king of the one liner! Thanks for the review, they are so important!

Really heartbreaking Deans last memories of his brother dying. you have captured them so well especially Bobby a much under used character well done Many thanks Lorraine

hi lou, really good start am going to rush on to next chapter thanks Lorraine

okay, you do know you don't need to use cliffhangers at the end of every chapter, right?! Thank god i can go to the next...

wow, very exciting first chapter, and great start at using the art of cliffhangers!!!

Ahhh! Poor Dean...great job, bullet!!!! That was definitely devious of Sam to do that...manipulate his poor, tortured brother like that...heehee, loved it...you've got the characters down so well here!!! I love Bobby in this too..."he was way too good to falter..." lol, he is...sorry, I'm rambling...okay. More!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Love it when you ramble Shiny, keep it up. Not much more to go now. Last chap and epilogue to follow soon. Thanks for reading!

That Dean is so tricky---and pig-headed.  You've done a wonderful job capturing that!

I guess if you have to wear someone's body, Dean's is as good as any.  I'd choose it!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's a demon with damn good taste. Thanks Shannon.