Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 4 Back in the fold
Forgot to say in last chappie review, My God Dean considered leaving John! How powerful must his sense of loss for Sam have been? And that 'life flashing before his eyes scene' - so evocative so brutal! Yeah, Sammy and Bobby to the rescue and our gorgeous boy beaten and bloody - you are too good to me Lout! Bev xx
Author's Response: Beaten and bloody but saved in the nick of time by brawny Bobby and salacious Sam...as always.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 3 Book of Revalations
This is scary, claustraphobic! 'He always did it when he was ovecome with concern for him; he always held him way too tight.' That is so heart wrenching. The fact that they go through stuff that regularly leaves them overcome with emotion, but you can also hear that, though he'd never admit it Dean doesn't hate the fact that Sam'll hold him tight. Breaks your heart, your wonderful writing is breaking my heart!
Author's Response: Its all about the brothers and their bond...well for me anyway, so glad you're an angst junkie too.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 2 Fire of known origin
Why does no one ever believe Dean can go do the stuff that needs a brain? He's so much brighter than he makes out, the dumb act is all artifice! oowh, pain! How delicious! And Bobby, God I love that scruffy guy, he so loves the boys and without John they need someone to love them. Love Dean talking to himself 'What are you now - afraid of the dark? Jeez' Why wouldn't he be he know's what's waiting in the shadows! And you turned his hair pink! heehee so sweet Bev xx
Author's Response: I agree completely, he's just as smart just lacks some confidence...I should talk to him about that...!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Show Must Go On
Lout. What can I say! 'It was pale gold,the colour of butter popcorn' You actually are trying to pleasure me to death aren't you? Bev xx
Author's Response: ...hehe..is it working for you...? lol
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
WOW!!!Lou, this was fabulous, once i started it, i couldn't stop til i finished. Bravo!!!! Crystal
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Crystal...this was my first ever attempt at writing anything so I'm always so pleased when people say they liked it - and thanks for the rating!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Excellent story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for that, and for the rating and I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much.
Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Hey I just read this story of yours before your new one. I really liked it ! I'm glad bobby was there to help the boys. They need him... And OMG, dean in blond hair, kinda hard to picture that ;o) Well, now I'm heading to read your new story !
Author's Response: Thanks for the review witchy, and hope you enjoy the sequel as much. Dean with bleach blond hair was pretty popular - might have to write him doing that again one day lol.
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
This is fab, this is like an episode! Loved it! Really well written, you've got the boys down to a tee!
Off to see if the sequel is about!! Hope so!!
LOL DIx Bucks
Author's Response: Thanks very much Di. Wow - you've been busy reading a lot of my stuff today and it's so nice of you to take the time to review! And thanks for the rating - those little stars are a great inspiration! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
I absolutely love the way you write, it’s so descriptive and I love your word choices. You really got into the brothers’ heads. Great descriptive paragraph (one of many): He saw his brother smile, and his lips move, but heard nothing. He was back swimming in the fire; feeling it undulate around him, soak through his clothes. The distant voice had returned, calling to him, beckoning him, but it only lasted a moment. Then he was back in the woods with Sam by his side, while memories of the last twenty-four hours exploded in a vivid display in his mind. "Bobby?" I really loved this story!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words - I'm always so thrilled to hear someone likes one of my stories, and to go to the trouble of quoting is always fantastic. If you have time, check out the sequel 'Better to burn out...' it follows a few weeks later, and I hope you'll enjoy that one too.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
awwwwwww, nice touch, Lou....loved the ending....loved your rendition of Bobby!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Jude. It's so nice to have someone go back over an older story and still enjoy. I had such a great time writing this one, and am starting to get that same buzz from the sequel. Thanks for the review and the stars, they mean a lot!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back in the fold
not over yet!!!!! Thank God Bobby is so awesome and learned when it comes to demons.......
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 Fire of known origin
somehow we knew picking up that book was a bad move!!!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Show Must Go On
off to a running start...........I'm really going to enjoy this one...Lou...bless your heart
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Please let there be a sequel!..this is so good I found myself dreading coming to the end of the page..although it was satisfying to see it through to the end, I am still sad its over. Great job bambers! -Bex
Author's Response: Thanks Bex, and Im very flattered to be mistaken for Bambers cos she rocks! Sequel is actually planned and half written but don't want to post till I can finish a few more 'Eye' and 'Rapture' chapters - but it will come!! Thanks for the shiny stars - I love me some of those!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Really enjoyed your story bulletbabe - thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks ciel4, means a lot coming from you, as I LOVED 'Empath', very deserving of feature story!
Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Great story, i really enjoyed it. looking forward to the sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks rholou, and thanks for the rating. I'm glad you enjoyed this one, hope you enjoy the sequel just as much!
Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Great story, i really enjoyed it. looking forward to the sequel.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
"If I pass out, feel free to keep on talking, Sammy" HAHA, good line, so Dean. Great job with this story, and a sequel, well, yeah, bring it on...
Author's Response: Thanks fredo, sequel is already all planned out - just need to write it now!
Reviewer: JMDoody (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
I really loved this and am very happy to hear there is a sequel. I'm loking forward to it. :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear that JM, and thanks for the review, very glad you liked it, and the sequel wont be long.
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Hey - was so excited to see this up! And if there is a sequel in the pipeline - hell yeah! Can't wait for it. Brilliant story and I wouldn't mind some more. :)
Author's Response: It won't be long Rae, I'm on it as we speak, and a huge thank you for the rating, and the review.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
"If I pass out, feel free to keep on talking, Sammy." - Love that. Great job bullet and if you write it I will read it..lol Thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Thanks K. I love it when readers pick out their fave. lines, sequel is well on the way.
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
I absolutely loved this story and it was amazing from start to finish. You really did an awesome job writing the boys and keeping them true to Kripke's vision. That was an intense roller coaster of a story line and I eagerly look forward to a sequel. Extra thanks for hurt Dean ! You rock!!
Author's Response: Wow Thanks Heather, both for the review and the rating! I've loved writing this one so a sequel will definately follow - I'll include lots of H/Dean just for you. lol
Reviewer: Vallana (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Really really enjoyed this story! Excited at the prospect of a sequel cause I bet you can make all sorts of new torment for the boys.
Author's Response: You'd better believe it Vallana, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Great ending! I so enjoyed this whole story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing V. Hope you enjoy the sequel just as much.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.
Oooh, I'd love a sequel, Lou!!!! Wonderful ending!
Author's Response: Thanks Shiny and thanks for the rating, you can look forward to many more cliffhangers in the future! lol
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