Reviewer: lam (Signed)
15/08/07 09:58 AM · On:
Yipppeee!!!!! *HAPPY DANCE*
YOU POSTED A STORY!!!!!! This is totally cool! I can't believe you and Bambers kept this such a secret! Tell the truth, getting reviews is totally awesome, isn't it???
Great start. Can't wait to find out who is in the house. Loved the moment when Dean says the Impala would never run him over - could totally see/hear that - lol! Shower scence might have had a bit more detail though.....LOL
Author's Response: well, i admit, getting reviews is definitely not unpleasant ! Thanks for it then...
Reviewer: nicky199172 (Signed)
15/08/07 09:46 AM · On:
omg i cant wait for more lol great story so far
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
15/08/07 08:45 AM · On:
Wow, great first chapter of first story. Loved the 'epitaph' line. Looking forward to where your going with this, Im a push over for the classic haunted house plot.
Please post soon.
Author's Response: i'll do my best, promise, thanks for reading and reviewing !
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed)
15/08/07 08:44 AM · On:
Hey Fredo well done, takes guts to write and post a story for people to read and review, especially as its your second language.
Good start, waiting to see where next chapter takes us many thanks Lorraine
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing, yeah, thought to post in french but probably wouldn't have success !
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
15/08/07 08:38 AM · On:
Let me start off by saying you, evil, wicked woman. Your just full of secrets, her you are writing a story and you didn't tell me. Oh, well, I guess I'll learn to deal. Now about this story. VERY good job, everyone's got to love a good old fashion haunted house (at least I assume it's haunted....lol) Hmmm... Favorite line "stumble across a grave which epitaph reads, here lies the body belonging to an angry spirit, please salt and burn me !" cause come on that's what every episode of SPN needs. After all it would save the guys a lot of hassle, maybe then they could just stand around an look pretty. Well again, great job Fredo. And (and I love saying this) Update Soon - Kell
Author's Response: lol, stand around and look pretty is actually what they gonna do in the next four chapters ! Thanks for reading and reviewing Kel ! Really.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed)
15/08/07 08:24 AM · On:
AHHHH! You finally wrote a story!!!!!! And it's coooooool!!!! Also, great beta work, there are VERY few mistakes! Soooo wonderful!!!! Okay, yes...hey, this is kinda like Playthings...with the mansion, and the killing of people and such...okay, yes...but ANYWAY...nice job--I'm REALLY looking forward to reading the rest of this story!!!!
Author's Response: yeah i finally did it...
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
15/08/07 08:09 AM · On:
I'm glad you decided to give writing a try fredo. So far I have only seen you on a lot of reviews. Good start. I can't wait where you will be taking us next :)
Author's Response: thanks for giving the story a try.