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Reviews For Nine
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

No action necessary - awesome update Fredo - I love this story! Very cool with the numbers and the curse! However, I really want to see Dean punch Steve out.... Dean will be super pissed if anything happens to a kid!!!.... Waiting patiently for the next chapter.....

Author's Response: Oh yes, Dean will be super pissed. Trying not to make you wait for too long...

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

What are you talking about? No action? This one had me hooked! How could Steve do that to his own daughter? Seems pretty silly to me. Nice chapter fredo!

~Kayla



Author's Response: thanks Kayla! Yeah Steve is a bastard, even as she's only his girlfriend's daughter, do that to a kid... Although, kids are sometime real pain in the ass... No, kidding, he's the bastard!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

Fredo...drink enough coffee and you'll be bouncing off the walls enough to have both of our boys become hyperactive.......

Dragging Steve down the stairs was active!!!  Jane might have pounded the living daylights out of him, or she could do so after they save Zoey.......



Author's Response: hey Jude, thanks. I'm gonna try the coffee...

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very nice set up for next chapter!  You took the time to explain what was going on very good job honey! 

Serieusement, tres bien fait et tres bien ecrit nos deux frerots...Continue tu as tout mon attention cocotte!  Je suis tres fiere de toi!



Author's Response: merci ma poule! Ow, you're proud of me, now i'm a blushing hen!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ho, Ho, isnt' Steve just a bastard, giving up the kid like that.  Well no worries, Sam and Dean will save her.  Looking forward to more Fredo.  Great update - K

Author's Response: thanks Kel! Yes, a real bastard. But luckily a Sam and a Dean are passing by...

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like it.

 there doesnt always need to be action every second of a story. I like the build up. 



Author's Response: so cool if you like it!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

great job, fredo!! i love the numbers thing....so very cool!! interesting how steve figured it out...wondering how he did?? gonna explain that for us in upcoming chappies?? he into voodoo or something?? can't wait for more!! bambers;)

Author's Response: i know you're in blissfull admiration before Sam, but other people can get interested in a house's story too, and notice strange signs...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh no! Not the little girl! Wow, that was really evil of that character...great job again, fredo! This is really awesome!!!! ha.."geekboy here is usually right"...love that line!

Author's Response: thanks Shiny for still being with me on this.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ooooh. Evil cliffie fredo, a great place to end the chapter. I'm ready for more whenever you are!


Author's Response: will come soon, i promise, thanks for R&R.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this fredo, but here I am at last! Intriguing start, and I like the way they have their first surprise before the first chapter has even ended! Going straight on to the next chapter now! Well done!


Author's Response: hey, i'm so flattered you took the the time to read and review, thanks!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

Okay so there's something to do with the number 9?  Very good chapter Fredo!  I liked the interaction between Dean and Zoey very like Dean...and the tension between the boys was also well written...Are you sure you've never written before because you are doing a very good job of letting just enough out of the bag to keep your readers coming back for more!

Keep it up honey!  Je suis tres fiere de toi! ecrire dans une deuxieme langue!  Moi j'avais considere ecrirre un histoire enfrancais a un moment donner non-reliee a SN mais j'ai hesite...Continue ma cocotte tu as l'attention de tout le monde!  Et tu as une tonne de fans!



Author's Response: thanks Gen for the kind words. I wrote a lot of things before, but almost only french poetry, so english supernatural is a whole new experience ! But i learned a lot by lurking around you great authors during months... Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

oooh, interesting. What's going on in the house? I like Zoey, she seems like me when I was that age. lol.

~Kayla



Author's Response: happy if you like Zoey. There's just something about Dean and kids... Thanks for r&r !

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hey fredo  great 2nd chapter, looking forward to next one. Many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: many thanks to you Lorraine !

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

Very good fredo! More please :) Thanks!


Author's Response: doing my best, but have to get corrected first, that english language, not even the same punctuation rules than here...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great update, Fredo! The plot thickens.... I suck at math, so I'm still not getting the pattern Sammy's found - I'll just wait patiently (lol) for the next chappie!

Author's Response: thanks for still being here with me Lisa. Next chapter should give you the key of all this.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

Loving it so far, really great job.  As always waiting for more - K

Author's Response: you love to say waiting for more, don't you ?! Thanks Kelly.

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

hey, fredo!! glafd to see you got this done and posted so quickly!! i just love the whole numbers thing you have going on here!! keep up the awesome job!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Bambi, what would i do without you...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ooooh, this is getting very interesting...I'm liking this a lot! It's not just a haunting, is it...??? Hmmm...hope you write another chapter soon, I'm looking forward to it!!!

Author's Response: thanks for the comment Shiny !

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like its going to be a good one. Way to go posting! Now that you have a few good reviews can't you just breathe easier?:) Keep it up.

Author's Response: yeah, a few good reviews are like a big plate of chocolate cookies, always brings a smile !

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful first chapter fredo! Really great. But you kinda left us hanging there. Update soon please!

~Kayla



Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing, will do my best !

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

ooooo, so someone does live there.  great chapter, fredo, so happy to see you've decided to post!!!  looking forward to me. love the one-liners.  "please salt and burn me"  hehe

Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to leave a comment maggie. Hope you won't be desappointed with the following chapters !

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Eh bien...quel suprise!  C'est a mon tour de t'offrir mes commentaires!  Je vois que tu prennais des notes!  Je suis contente d'avoir tombe sur cette petite gemme!  Avec toute l'attention que tu portes aux petits details dans mes histoire ca ne m'etonne pas que tu sois une superbe ecrivaine!  J'ai bien aime les echanges entre les deux frerots... et un bon chapitre d'introduction avec une belle petite fin de suspense!  Bravo ma cocotte!  Bon debut continue!

Author's Response: et bien oui tu vois, je tente ma chance ! Merci d'avoir pris le temps d'un petit commentaire...

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fredo....you little minx...you've been holding out on us....Looks like all of our arm twisting has brought us another author.......

Good for you...Great start, my friend....



Author's Response: well, if being an author consists in putting some words together, looks like yes, i'm one now... As for the story, you may regret to get me started !

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Other than several spelling errors this is a good start to your story.  

Author's Response: gonna try to be even more careful in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh, fredo!!! you did it!! you posted!! so very awesome of you!! great job so far!!  i'd like to say i can't wait to see where this all leads, but as i already read it, i'll just once again say, awesome job!! great first story!! bambers;)

Author's Response: yeah, see, i did it... And gonna need you more than ever to go through it till the end !

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