Finally getting a chance to catch up!!! Great action packed chapter! Loved the double save by the boys - it's always so awesome when they work together. Still hoping for Dean to pound out Steve....

You wrapped it up so well fredo! Loved it that Jane punched Steve, and that Dean woke up at nine o'clock. Very clever! Thanks for such an enjoyable read!

Great finish Fredo!  LOVED that Jane punched Steve!  That wa SWEET!  lol and nice open ending if you ever wanted to revisit this story you could!  Great job!  I hope you write something else soon!  Encore une fois tres fiere de toi ma Cocotte!

Author's Response: merci ma grande, tous tes mots gentils m'ont bien aidé. Et maintenant j'espère trouver un nouveau chapitre chez toi à mon retour...

lol...done with this little experience??? not gonna write another one, fredo?? great job!! very nicely done for your first story!! bambers;)

Author's Response: thanks, but naa, i think i'm really done. At least till next time...

lol, fredo...i love how you ended this. great job!

Author's Response: thanks Shiny!

Nice work fredo, great action and I love the punch at the end! I was so engrossed in the action that the ending semmed quite sudden.

Will look out for what you write next!

Author's Response: thanks for the support Bullet.

Ah! Another cliffhanger!!!! Fredo, you sly, sly author you...wonderful job! Love this chapter...poor Jane and Zoey... I'm glad that they were rescued...although, I have no idea what's coming up and if they will survive so...write another chapter soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: you should be happy Shiny, last chapter already posted, wanted to be done before i leave for my vaca. Thanks as always for taking the time to R&R, and by the way you're making a spectacular rise in the most prolific reviewers, bravo!

great action-packed chapter Fredo....Steve is just not the man Jane needs in her life, is he?

Glad the boys will save the day for little Zoey......... 

 

 

Author's Response:

well, Steve's not the man anybody needs! Why should we need men by the way? Lol, thanks Jude for the R&R.

Ah, love a woodpile chucking logs.. great.  Can't wait for more.. *Sigh* Dean rescuing the little girl, I'm always a sucker for that. - K

Author's Response: so am I, Kel, so am I... Thanks for reading, extra thanks for reviewing, and super thanks to be such a good friend!

Oh goodness - its about to get freaky. Nice job so far, hon - really reeling me in, here, like a fish on a hook.

And ooh, I've waited a long time to say this - hurry up and update! (hehehehehehehehehe)

When did you say the update was due?......Jul

Author's Response: hey Jules, nice to see you here! And thanks for reviewing every chapter. As for the next update, depends on my beta, i'm waiting to get it back.

Whoops - suppose the house isn't unoccupied after all. Oh, Sam is going to get hazed by his big brother about that one. Maybe Dean put the whammy on them for saying easy job....Jules

Once Sam figured out the pattern the chapter took off---great job!

A lot of thought went into figuring out this plot and the whole nine thing.  Incredible!

Ohhh!  I want to punch Steve!  How could he do that to a little girl, especially one he's supposed to love?  What a coward!

Author's Response: well, had to try to find something original, so many stories around. And something not necessitating too much details about the country, as i'm living far far away... Happy if it works.