Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 11:47 PM · On: Carpe Diem
this chapter was awesome! love that you brought his mom into it and i'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter. And i TOTALLY think you should do a prequel, even if it's just a one-chapter deal coz i have been so curious about what happened in Kentucky. You should totally write it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the Mary addition. I was ehh at first about it, but it turned out really nicely. Lots of people want to see the Kentucky hunt, so I will probably write that. It won't be a one-shot deal though. I don't have a rough outline yet, but I'm thinking a 5-9 chapter deal. Glad you're liking this story.
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 08:10 PM · On: The Rabbit's Hole
Great update!! I like this story and glad Dean finally got his memories back. I for one would like to see the prequel on the Kentucky hunt. Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the update. I'm getting lots of reviews from various sites saying to do the Kentucky hunt, so it looks promising.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 03:22 PM · On: Up the Garden Path
Great job, Sam! Sooo glad Dean finally got his memories back...that was getting to be a bit of a hassle! Hey, just wanted to say I'm glad that whole plagiarism thing got sorted out--after reading your story again I did notice the similarity and I'm glad you took care of it. Well, looking forward to another chapter of this! Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm glad that the whole plagiarism thing is over and done with as well. I never really thought people copies before. I'm glad you like the original and are reading it. Thanks for the nice comments.
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 08:30 AM · On: Up the Garden Path
Gr8 job! Waiting for next chapter This is getting very interesting
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 05:02 PM · On: Up the Garden Path
YES!!! Woo Hoo!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 04:18 AM · On: Up the Garden Path
Now this is an interesting turn of events! I just hope that Dean will not loose the bit of happiness he enjoyed over the past weeks. I am curious as to where you will take us with the next update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the twist. You'll see Dean, hopefully, show himself more than in past chapters. The story is winding up - most likely only a couple more chapters - so I have to start wrapping up loose ends.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 11:27 PM · On: Up the Garden Path
I can't wait to see how you resolve this! I don't want Dean to lose anyone---not Sam, not Carmen and not their baby. Tthat would be so sad. But if it has to be then it has to be.
Author's Response: I, obviously, can't tell you how it will end so I'll just sit back mysteriously and let you figure out the massive clue I left in the last chapter. I believe I responded to all your reviews. Sorry if I missed one.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 11:11 PM · On: One Swallow Doesn't Make a Summer
Love the meaning behind the story title! Dean called his brother Samantha! yay! Can't wait to discover Dean's plan!
Author's Response: I introduced the meaning to the story a lot sooner than I planned to, but it fit so well in this chapter. I'm glad you like it. You'll see it cropping up again. Brotherly love, of course Dean would call him Samantha.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:58 PM · On: A Leopard's Spots
Still wonderful! It's wonderful that Carmen has the calming effect on Dean that he has on Sam. Nice touch!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying it. I'm so glad that Carmen is coming off right. I was worried I couldn't write her how I imagined her. She's like another Winchester already!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:43 PM · On: Way the Wind Blows
Love how you mention their mode of communication and how it's now undecipherable for Dean. Not certain of the timeline. Will Carmen have the baby by June? How sad that Dean realizes he's finally happy and has a lovely future with a family only to discover he's to die soon.
Author's Response: I really was excited to write that conversation between Sam and Dean as well as have Dean not understand his brother anymore. As close as they are, they would have a very close bond like that so I wanted to show it shattered. All right, timeline. Let me figure this out for you. Dean woke up in the hospital August 17, 2007. So this was after the season 2 finale. I believe, if my memory serves me right, that the date is at the end of September. So yes, the baby would be born in June sometime.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:22 PM · On: Hobson's Choice
So finally we know it's a demon working for the new head demon. I wonder if he asked to have his memory erased to protect Sam somehow. Yay Bobby! I love Bobby! He's such a calming, anchoring influence. Lots happening---amnesia, a demon, an angry spirit and a pregnant girlfriend. Busy life!
Author's Response: Everything in Supernatura comes back to demons. You'll find out in chapter ten how Dean exactly lost his memory. I'm glad you love Bobby too!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:10 PM · On: Battling Windmills
You've explained Carmen and Dean's frustrations and fears so well. It would be scary thinking you'd invited a crazy man into your home and your bed. Oh no! Missouri's dead! Renting Ghostbusters---hilarious. Was From Hell It Came playing in the background of the SN episode? If so, you're clever! Dean's going to be a daddy? How wonderful!
Author's Response: I'm glad I'm getting the emotions. It's so hard to write about something so foreign to you, you know? Missouri, big plot device. Haha. Yes, the movie 'From Hell It Came' was the movie playing in WIAWSNB. I love drawing parallels from the show into my stories. I think you're the first one to notice since no one commented on it.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:04 PM · On: The Centipede's Dilemma
Carmen is so good for Dean! I really enjoy the interaction between them. I think Dean is a very caring man at heart and would open up to the woman he loved while keeping his hard outer shell for other people.
Author's Response: Carmen is perfect for him. I loved her so much in WIAWSNB. I really want him to find her and for her to be as amazing as she was in the Djinn universe.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 10:00 PM · On: The Slippery Slope
Professional poker player and spy---Hee! It's so sad that he misses Sam. Speaking of Sam, where is he? He must be hurt pretty badly if he hasn't turned up at the hopsital looking for Dean.
Author's Response: Dean, of course, would think it would be awesome to be a celebrity or a top secret spy.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 09:54 PM · On: The Rabbit's Hole
First of all I want to say that I love your creative chapter titles! they make me want ot read the chapters! Did you change the banner? I thought it was Carmen and Dean facing one another. Cool that you took Carmen from WIAWSNB and developed a story for her! I think you captured the paranoia and fea of having amnesia very well. It's interesting the things he knows about himself that he believes are unimportant but we know are life preserving. Like your attentin to detail---the ring and the amulet.
Author's Response: I'm glad you appreciate the titles since people barely mention them. I'm an English major so of course I use metaphors and rhetoric devices in my writing. I'm glad you like Carmen - I haven't gotten one complaint about her yet. I was nervous about capturing the emotions of amnesia, so I'm glad you think I'm doing all right. I did change the banner. I thought if people knew Carmen was going to be in it, they might stray away from it so I quickly altered it in photoshop.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 08:51 PM · On: Up the Garden Path
Argh its heartbreaking how Dean remembers his dad giving him the car and then remembers the comment about "I never would have given it to you...". I'm assuming that it is the same restaurant from WIAWSNB? Subtleties like Sam's eyes down at the table during the conversation were awesome! So glad you decided to have Mr. Porter like Dean. The poor guy needs a little break.:)
Author's Response: Oh, Dean, and remembering both positive and negatives. Have to get his ego taken down. Yes, they were the same restaurant. I was going to say more about it, but I thought I'd let the clever reviewers figure it out. I'm glad you liked the subtle details as well as the story in general.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 08:45 PM · On: One Swallow Doesn't Make a Summer
Finally figured out where you got the title from. Most stories you are able to figure out the title fairly quick but I had forgotten about all about it by this chapter. A pleasant surprise. The whole bike riding concept is so sweet. Like how you bring a little of the ordinary into your story like the bike and "meeting the parents'. The looming death deadline with the baby on the way is just killing me. Tissue anyone?
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to keep the title a bit of a mystery and bring it in at the right time. I actually planned to bring in its meaning in a later chapter, but it fit in. I didn't want the whole story to be gloom and doom supernatural stuff, so I'm really glad you enjoyed the simplistic details.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 02:56 AM · On: A Leopard's Spots
This is getting better and better. So glad Sam and Bobby are there. But oh dear, the deal is catching up with Dean just when he is happy. What's happening with Carmen and the baby? Will Sam and Bobby find a way to save Dean? More please soon :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's getting better and better. You'll find out about all your questions in a couple chapters since there's less than five chapters left. I don't have an exact number since I haven't outlined everything, but I think I can tell it in five.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 06:38 PM · On: Way the Wind Blows
very nice
Author's Response: Glad you like it.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 10:34 AM · On: Way the Wind Blows
A lot of interesting twists in the last 2 chapters. I really liked it. I am curious as to where you will take us. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the twists. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 06:45 PM · On: Hobson's Choice
Loved it Plz update soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: moenick (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 06:30 PM · On: Battling Windmills
Interresting chapter. Not sure where things are going and that's great to keep us reading.
Author's Response: The story's about Dean's choices after having his memory swiped, about him balancing two lives at once - one he can remember and one he can't - and how his old life is interferring with his new life. That's where the story is going. Does that make sense? Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 01:30 AM · On: Hobson's Choice
This is good! Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 03:35 PM · On: Battling Windmills
I totally am loving this story. Really like that you added Carmen 'cause she was totally a cool character but I'm just curious as to where the heck Sam has been. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I love Carmen as well which is why I wrote this story to begin with. I wanted to write that relationship story between Dean and Carmen. The next chapter is submitted, but I'm waiting to get it approved. I hate not being a trusted author. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 01:44 PM · On: Battling Windmills
Keep posting!!! I'm enjoying your stories. I know you just started posting but I have read several of your stories and like them all. I read alot of these and have several favorites and you are fast becoming one of them. Keep it up! You show great insight into Sam and Dean's characters and your writing shows much maturity from some one your age. DON'T STOP! Grazed Knees is great. Can't wait to see what Sam's been up to.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying my stories, and thank you for the compliments. I'm still writing Grazed Knees, don't worry. Thanks for the review.
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