Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
WOW! Fantasitc bit there. AND you had to know the "I told you so" was coming from Sam. I loved how Dean knew that Robbie was purposely playing on the time they were apart and that no matter what he answered, he was screwed. Liked the poetic justice at the end too!
Author's Response: Thanks Tree! I am so happy that you loved this chapter...this one was so much fun to write! And yes, the "I told you so" is coming to bite Dean in the ass. And I had to let our boy figure it out...he's one smart cookie! Poetic justice...it was better than anything Dean could have physically done to the twerp.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
yes yes, bring the game! Man, this guy is really insane, "eventually Dean would see things his way", yeah, sure... About as many chance as make him paint the Impala in pink. Or read Harry Potter. "Okay, how the hell do I know the owl from Harry Potter?" Oops... Lol...
Author's Response: Thanks Fredo! The game is coming in the next chapter! Fun for all!!! Yeah, and you're right...Dean will see things Robbie's way as soon as he paints the Impala pink! *Gets picture in head* Oh, and thank you for my bribes...you made me *thud* four times!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 11
Why doesn't Dean listen to Sam- his gut feelings are always right. Robbie has been a creep for the get go. I really want Dean to kick his ass . you have written a compelling drama-your words have painted vivid pictures , and now we have psycho jeopardy. This is great!!!!!!! AWSOME story..AWSOME writing.. please , please, another chapter soon.... BRAVO!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Recca! I was starting to feel a little bad until I got your review. I tell you...it's better than any amount of Ibuprofen I can take! I know you want Dean to kick some ass...I think it's been the general consensus around here! I am so happy that you have been enjoying this story. I love that I am able to help you envision this as you are reading it, because it really is what I'm aiming for. So thank you for this review...it means the world to me that you feel the way about this you do. Another chapter coming real soon!
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hey! Seriously fallen behind in reading this and oh man - I've been missing a great read. I cheated a bit and read ahead but I'm gonna go back and read from where I got lost. :) Awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks Rae! Sorry that you fell behind, but I hope you get to go back and catch up! Thanks so much for picking it back up and letting me know what you think! Means a lot to me!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
Still hooked. Next chapter please?!
Author's Response: Thanks ciel! I am so happy I have you hooked still! Writing next chapter right now!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG! Robbie is a dangerous psychopath. What he has in store for Dean and Sam. Terrific chapter Stephanie, can't wait for the game to begin.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane! Yep, Robbie's definitely dangerous! We are gonna play his game in the next chapter...fun all around! *evil laugh*
Reviewer: carveybabe (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story! It is very detailed and descriptive. Great job with all of the twists to this story! Can't wait for more...I want to see Robbie get his behind kicked!!
Author's Response: Thanks carveybabe! I am so thrilled you love this story...I have to admit it's becoming my little baby! I love that you are enjoying the little twists because I am loving coming up with them! Another update as soon as I can get it up!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
*waves* Hello, girl! So, Robbie in his twistedness thinks he'll win by playing a game... *Shakes head* Poor little twisted Robbie. Dean and Sam are still gonna kick him so hard he might actually regain his sanity. Great work! More please. :) -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks SJ! *waves back* You know, I honestly think that no matter how hard Dean and Sam may kick Robbie, he'll never get his sanity back. He's just too far gone! Thanks again for your help!
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 11
I liked Chapter 11. I like Matchbox Twenty music too. Thank you for the update. This has been an interesting story so far. I liked how this chapter ended. From the sound of that last line, I think Robbie is going to be up to no good in the next chapter. Can't wait to find out. Post soon!
Author's Response: Thanks supernat! I'm so happy you liked this chapter! Robbie is definitely going to be up to no good...those poor brothers! Next update coming as soon as I can get it out!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love the unwritten code for brothers! I think it also applies to sisters. :) There's more twists in this than I imagined there would be. Yay!
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon! Yes, the code does apply for sisters as well--I have two of them along with two brothers and I feel the same way! I'm happy I could throw some twists your way!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
Psycho Jeopardy?? That sounds like what we played at KazCon. lol Just kidding. :-) A good and crrrreepy chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa! LOL...now if you say that, maybe it's a good thing I didn'y go! (Just kidding...I would have loved to go to it!) Glad you thought this chapter was creepy! It carries out through the next chapter as well!
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ok... Robbie is in for it but first... Dean and Sam have to get through a game of Psycho Jeprody... and survive. Great update... thanks
Author's Response: Thanks aripagetx_uk! Robbie is gonna be in for it, but first he's gonna play his twisted little game with the Winchesters!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
hurry up where's the next chapter..?? can't wait to see if Dean can answer any of those questions.....
Author's Response: Thanks Jude! You know, you can't rush perfection...heehee, just kidding! Next chapter will come as soon as I am able to get it finished!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 11
Robbie is such a creepy creep! Oh and he's nuts. Great chapter! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks Laura! I just love how much you hate Robbie...just like when I hate your villains! Thanks for your help!
Reviewer: Vallana (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
Okay, Robbie offically creeps me out. You made are very realistic character and I so want Dean to take him down. Or better yet, Sam gets to have some revenge. You have me a tad worried about Robbie's crazy plans for the boys though. I think I have an idea for the mental aspect but hmmm you planning for some physical torment too? Amazing work girl and no rush, I know RL is crazy! Niki
Author's Response: Thanks Niki! Robbie is enjoying the fact that he creeps you guys out so much...he told me so himself. You should be worried about the brothers, because things are about to get hot for them! I will update as soon as I can!!!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 11
GAH - its almost worse knowing where this is going than not knowing at all! Nice job Steph - it turned out great. And the questions- great job there too!
Author's Response: Thanks Tree! I love that my chapters are having this kind of effect on you! And I am so happy you liked the questions since you know how much I was worrying over them! Thanks again!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
oh wow! My heart is pounding so fast right now! Please tell me that you have the next chapter finished! I don't know how long I can wait! This was such a fabulous chapter! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla! Yay! It was heart-pounding! I hate to say that I don't have the next chapter written right now and I'm gonna have to leave you hanging for a while...but I'm hoping it will be worth it in the long run! Thanks again!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow. You write CREEPY. Creeeeeeeeeeeeepy.
Cookies! More please!
Author's Response: Thanks Shiny! I love when I'm told I write creepily because this is exactly what I am aiming for. Thanks for the cookies...I love me some cookies! More coming as soon as possible!
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 10
Hurry up dean, kick that scrawny little jerks ass. Take your time, I know life has a bad habit of getting in the way. Just not to long, ok, we need to know sammy's alright.
Author's Response: Thanks, reece! We've still got some trouble coming for the brothers, but we will see what happens as far as Robbie is concerned... Life is giving me a little bit of a fuss right now, but I am working on the next chapter! Thanks again!
Reviewer: rholou (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
Another great chapter. I went to school with a Matthew Grant (not that you care but it was still cool for me to see that name). Looking forward to see what happens to everyone in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks rholou! That's cool that you went to school with a guy by the same name. Let's just hope he never meets the same fate as my Matthew! Next chapter is coming as soon as I can get it up!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 10
O*M*G*That was a thrilling, suspenseful chapter. What an evil place to leave us Stephanie. What's going to happen, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane! I am certiainly happy you thought that! I'm sorry I have to leave it there, but I have to be a little evil! Next update coming as soon as I can get it out!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
Better hurry Dean! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Ciel! Dean is on his way to the rescue! Let's just hope he gets there in time... Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 10
So good! I can't wait for the next chapter...no seriously, I borrowed money so you could have Sam to look at for motivation. Loved the suspense of this chapter, my dear. Very well executed. Aaaand *rubs hands together*Since I know a little about what is coming up I am very anxious to see more in my inbox to beta. *laugh* Take care. -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks SJ! So happy I get to hold onto Sam for a while longer...you may have to rob a bank in order for him to stay with me even longer... You know how much I love my suspense...And you will have my next chapter as soon as schoolwork decides to give me a break and let me write... Ho hum
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
Yay! I love the love and protectiveness of the brothers. This was certainly a creepy chapter, especially the ending. What did Robbie to do Sam? The next update sounds promising! :0) ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla! I also love the love and protectiveness...makes my heart swoon! I'm happy you thought the chapter was creepy. As for Sam, we're gonna find out in the next chapter!
Reviewer: Vallana (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
Man, Robbie is one sick puppy! Frustating that Sam was able to get free but then only to get smashed by the door. That poor guy is just going to have a permanent headache isn't he. Yay! Dean to the rescue!! I hope he kicks Robbies freaky butt. Niki
Author's Response: Thanks Niki! Robbie is still creepy and Sam still couldn't get away from said creep. Dean is on his way so we will see what happens in the next chapter! Thanks again!
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