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Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 13

Terrific ending, I like the idea of a sequel. Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks ciel4!

I am thrilled you loved the ending and look forward to a sequel. Not sure when it will be out, but I do plan on it!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 13

nice opened ending. Nice story, really enjoyed it, thanks for the read Steph!

Author's Response:

Thanks fredo!

I am so happy you enjoyed this and I really have to thank your bribes....they were so inspiring!

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 13

oooo great ending i cant wait for that one! gordon always was a great evil dude and robbie had been great too! nice job!

Author's Response:

Thanks IHeartSam!

Glad you liked the ending! I love Gordon Walker so much and I just had to include him in this one!

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 13

WOW!! Absolutely loved that and can't wait for the sequel!!!!

you seem like a natural writer, AMAZING!!

Phoenix you rock tooif you helped to kick start this.

Loved it, pure and simple, esp adding Gordan in at the end-creepy!

soph xx



Author's Response:

Thanks buttercup!

Thanks for the compliment...that means so much to me and even made me blush!

I am so happy you loved this and especially Gordon at the end!

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great ending. Looking forward the next story with Robbie. I thought you were going to let us thinking if the help came from Gordon or not. Please don't take a long break I really want to read the sequel.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Dean494!

I am so happy you liked this! I was going to make you wonder until the sequel, but then again, I just couldn't do that to you guys! I left you with enough cliffies throughout this story!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

This was a excellent ending to an excellent story.  I definitely didn't see the ending coming.  I can't wait for the sequel.

Author's Response:

Thanks supernat!

So happy you liked this story and glad you didn't see my ending coming. That was what I was going for!

Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 13

Gasp!  Not Gordon!  A very interesting end.



Author's Response:

Thanks downbythebay!

Yep, it's Gordon...it had to be done...

Reviewer: carveybabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 13

I think that you did a wonderful job on this story.  It was one of those that keeps you craving more.  Oh and this ending is perfect for a sequel!  I will be waiting for it!  Great job!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks Sarah!

I am so happy you enjoyed this story because I enjoyed writing it! I love that you craved more because it makes it more exciting for me!

Thanks again!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 13

Argggghhh! As soon as I read - a man walks in - in that final paragraph I was praying it would be Walker. What a wild ride this was!!!

I think Robbie works so well as a bad guy because he is just so normal at the start, in fact I felt sorry and protective of him myself.

This is crying out for a sequel, and I hope Reader's choice or Sam's required reading, do a best villain cos I will be nominating Robbie in an instant!!!

 Awesome work supernaturalsam!!

Can't wait to read more from you!!



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

I had to add Gordon into it...it just called for it! I am so happy you like Robbie because I had so much fun creating him!

Thanks for saying you would nominate me...that means the absolute world to me!

I do want to do a sequel but as I said, I have to take a break from Robbie...he really wore me out!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 13

Ooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!!! What a wonderful ending! I love how you tied it into Folsom Prison Blues (LOVE that episode!) and added Gordon Walker...we need more of him! Can't wait to see him back on the show, and A SEQUEL??? YEESSSSS!!!!! Love that idea! Can't wait!

Author's Response:

Thanks Shiny!

I am so happy you loved this! I always try to tie in my fics to episodes and I am glad you liked that! Of course, I had to add Gordon to the mix because I am just so in love with that character, it's ridiculous!

 

Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 13

What an awesome story from start to finish. Robbie was just so creepy, you wrote him so well! And that cliffie at the end, whoa, you are good! Gordon, oh, I am so speechless! What a twist! I just never saw that coming. You are a master at suspense. I am just so thrilled there is going to be a sequel! Thanks for sharing this story, it was so completely awesome. Kari



Author's Response:

Thanks darthwriter!

Wow, you're review left me speechless!

I am so happy you liked this fic and Robbie. He was so much fun to create and I really wanted to make him as creepy and human as I could. I'm glad I could provide you with some suspense because I love psychological thrillers and I really wanted to deliver one to you guys!

Again, thank you so much!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 12

Ahw - pissed and protective Dean, the very best kind!

Absolutely loving this!!

Nearly done, next.....



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

That is the very best kind of Dean you can get!

So happy you are loving this!

Reviewer: brookewinchster (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 13

no f ing way. omg omg omg omg omg

Author's Response:

Thanks brooke!

Yep, I did it...I really did...

I love your reaction!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 11

OMG Can't wast time writing must read ending!!!

NEXT.......



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

Yes, keep reading!!!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

Don't want to be in Robbies shoes right about now!

Can't stop reading.

Next...



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

Yep, Robbie's gonna be in some trouble...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9

Oh boy, Sam in big trouble, Dean pisses as hell, what's not to love.

Next....



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

Yep, Sam in trouble...Dean pissed off...you really can't have anythng better than that!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

FRUIT CAKE WITH EXTRA RAISINS ALERT!

Certifiable!!!!

Next......



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

You just explained Robbie to a "T"!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thats what I like to see, all the main food groups covered!!

Another great cliffy, Sam's gotta be sore after this one!

Next....



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

Dean has a great grasp on the food groups! And yeah, I'm pretty bad about these cliffies as you will see...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 6

I do think Dean's behaviour is a little out of character, but that's also human nature, no one behaves the same 24-7 and you have already dealt with it in a way, by having Sam question it.

I'm finding this a very belivable story. Great work!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

Yes, his behavior is out of character, but I gave a reason for it and I am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 13

this was a fantastic chapter. It was good to hear Dean finally open up to Sam about how things really were in  his head.

Robbie is like a rabid dog- he needs to be put down.

OK  now to the twist at the end..GORDON WALKER...ugh.. I hate that dude- so now we have 2 psychotic sadistic humaniods to go after the Winchesters...AWSOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!

You are something else....great writing!!!!!!!!

OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!

BRAVO ....... a fan



Author's Response:

Thanks Recca!

I wanted Dean to open up a bit to Sam and let him know why he was acting the way he did.

Robbie does need to be put down but if he was then he wouldn't get to have Gordon to play with!

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and encouragement. Your reviews are some that I always looked forward to!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Creepy and creepier! This is going from great to even better. Must keep reading.

Next.....



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

Your reviews are absolutely making my Thursday even better...I didn't think Thursdays could get even better!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

Another awesome chapter, I actually feel sorry for Robbie at the moment.

Sure that won't last!!!

Next chap....



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

I wanted you to have a tiny bit of sympathy for out resident nut...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

Evil sun, love that.

This is getting real creepy and I'm loving every minute.

Great snark and beautifully writen. Moving on...



Author's Response:

Yes, the sun is evil. I totally back Dean up in that sentiment.

So happy you're still loving it!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

'...hold hands....' great dialogue in this chap!

'..freaky ass doctor..' - for a moment I thought I'd missed the proctology part of the plot. lol

I'm so glad I made myself wait to read this all the way through - now I can keep clicking the next button!

Fantastic start!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe!

So, happy you liked this chapter and the dialogue...I love creating great dialogue between the brothers!

I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great work! I really enjoyed this story. What a nice twist in the end - so Gordon is the one to team up with Robbie. Damn, now that calls for a sequel. Please don't let us wait too long! You did a wonderful job here and I can't wait where you will take this from here.

Author's Response:

Thanks Soennelchen!

I am so thrilled you liked this! Yes, I had to throw Gordon into the mix because he is someone I love and despise all at once!

I've gotta take a break from Robbie because he really just left me exhausted, but there will be a sequel!

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