Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/04/10 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 13
Man, are you spycic. . .you know what i mean. how did you know i was thinking of freaken GORDEN WALKER. I want more. NO!!!! shut up. . .readers read the lyrics and you as the composer will enjoy the critics. You are deffenitly another part of my great collection of soul seeking kick ass writer but with ROYALTY at that. It can't get better then that. Can wait for more of your scary, demented, awesome brand of brain writing. . .thank you all that have helped this stud muffin. here is my email lamix1mana@yahoo.com for the title and copy of not only this one but the sequal. Thanks. you are so HOT!!!!, do you think id be charged by using Paris Hilton's quote "Your so HOT!!!!"? Rating: Imensly and intens. if you have any ? here is my email lamix1mana@yahoo.com
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 12
Thank you Sam for makeing sure that your brother did not kill him just yet only to humilate his doing with mathew. i do know one thing that at least he will have great company with mathew. Dean is just an idgit picking and gambeling with a jackass guy like him towards his own brother. Dean needs to trust, sam more.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 11
its like playing a game of LIFE from HASBRO, but the only rules where that it was only one rule not many. what a sycotic ass.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 10
Now this last part sweety, i can understand where it will lead; but he did forget of that mersiless idiot of a DR. Eli. I think. You are anawesome writer.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 9
your character of Robbie is seriously going to get an ass whippen from me and the character of Dean. you are a third writer that has been able to whirl me into the creativity of the story. like me being a third or forth person but not haveing any dialog. This material is the best and you are now considered part of the ROYALTY WRITERS CLUB. Thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/04/10 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 8
damn this kid is seriously off the rocker. This is brillent stuff in this story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/04/10 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 7
? is this Robbie related to Johnny from the coocos nest? he is really pissing me off, and maybe just maybe scaring me.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/04/10 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
This spirit is like a HANABLE LECTER or a being of plain rudness of not understanding what the word meaning "NO" "WE/I AM LEAVING". . .this is one hell of a story. Thank you. I do like the manipulation of the clerk towards Dean. . .very clever.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/04/10 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
OKAY, now you have freak out. This is by far better then Hichcock "Birds" "spycho" & "Here is Johnny".
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/04/10 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
This story is as if you where to be writing it for me. . .the characters of Robbie and James are like me. I'm the oldest and have three brother's, but only grew up with two of them. . .long story on that end. Anyways, im the oldest then come the other two brothers of mine. Only one that im real close to and always took care of him. so im almost like James and Dean, being older. I know what they have to do. I like more same. I can relate a lot more to him. Thanks for this and if there is a way to get a copy of this story i leave you my email. . . lamix1mana@yahoo.com
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
If only that would be that simple. This is one ride i so would think a second about. i do like the way you set it up as a 6 play event. . .what i mean is that the character of Dean played in 4 different ways 1.being not only rude to secretary and the kid a bit (2) 2.is using as always his bottom head (no offense) to Sam, and then being a total bon head when it came to inteogating. i so do love this one very much.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
There is truth to that saying, but becarefull on how one play's that GAME.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is one reason and every reason why i never trusted a medic.
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
Hey, I sent you an email about the banner. Sorry about that! Moving around stuff in photobucket. If the new link doesn't work, let me know and I'll send you the jpeg. -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks, Sj! I got it!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 13
I feel a story is really called awesome when it Involves thereaders emotions into it. This story was just that. I could'ny help my rage take over me when I read about that stupidfreaking Robbie. I would sat if I wash there in Dean's place, I would not have left Robbie at the eclipse, rather I would have left him at the Roosevelt asylum! He seriously needs to be in the asylum.......he is seriously freakysonofabitch!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks again, Pranami3! Rage is a good feeling when you're reading Robbie so I'm happy I could let you feel that. He was never supposed to be likeable so I guess it was mission accomplished. Your review makes me very happy because of its passion. Thanks again!
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
Seriously, Robbie is a pain in the ass.....he is such a freakingirritatinjerk. The way he thinks about Sam - "Why did Sam have to call and pull Dean away from him? Why did Dean have to drop everything and go back to Sam because he was stupid enough to get hurt? Why couldn’t Dean just let Sam take care of himself." Robbie is indeed a selfishBastard. I mean he is so possessive about Dean. Sam has every right on his brother but not as much as robbie.....C'mon Robbie hardly knows Dean. I swear if I were in Sams place......... god knows what I would have done with Robbie. Sorry but if i get such feelings about the character it surely means that the story has caugth me......It surely is awesome
Author's Response: Thanks pranami3! You are becoming one of my favroite reviewers because you always have so much to say! It thrills me you think Robbie is a pain in the ass...that's what I was going for! LOL I'm glad he's making you react like this. I wanted a character who would create a stir and one who you would absolutely loathe. Thanks again!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story. Robbie's character is very creepy.......and are you going to make him a recurring character???
Author's Response: Thanks mymuseandi! I am so happy you love this story! Robbie is a very creepy character and one that I am so very proud of. He's back for more fun with the boys in my sequel "A Rage for Revenge"! Thanks again!
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great characterization of both brothers, you really got into their heads. Nice descriptions that painted a clear and vivid portrait. Once again your original character of Robbie was very creepy & the way you wrote him was fantastic. You really brought him to life in his actions, thoughts & words, I thought this was one of the best paragraphs that really got into Robbie's psyche: Yep, Sam’s death was going to be Dean’s fault. It was the best punishment Robbie could inflict on the older man and it seemed fitting really. Besides that, it may even benefit Robbie in the long run. Maybe Dean would get so desperate for companionship that he would greet Robbie with open arms. The troubled young man knew it wouldn’t be immediate, but eventually Dean would see things his way. I've was hooked – very curious to see what was going to happen next & where it's leading. I loved the game, nice addition. Nice, realistic conversation at the end between Sam & Dean. It wasn’t too sappy, and it felt real. Do I smell a sequel? Would love to see Robbie & Gordon pairing off to get revenge on our boys. I really enjoyed this story. The idea was unique and you really made it work. You’re writing was very good, you really painted a great picture of everything that was going on and all the thoughts and feelings of all the characters.
Author's Response: Thanks Kumaproogey! Your review just really made my day! I am so thrilled that you were able to see this fic as believable and that the characters came to life for you. There is nothing I can't stand more is reading a story and not being able to believe that the characters are real even though they may be a work of complete fiction. I am really happy that you liked Robbie because he was just so much fun for me to create. He really took on a life of his own and became more than I thought he could. I am also really happy that paragraph stood out to you. I have to be honest and say when I write I never know what people are going to respond to and they always surprise me with what they come up with. As for the sequel, yes I am wanting to sink me teeth into one. It's still in the planning stages as of right now and when I do get it out it won't be until I've completed my current story. Thanks again for your review and I really look forward to hearing from you in the future!
Reviewer: greensheep8 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 13
wow! that was such an awesome ending, i cant wait until robbie comes back-providing he is coming back. Loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks greensheep8! I'm so happy you liked the ending! Robbie is going to come back in all his creepy glory...
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
"Once you learned about what existed in the dark, it was hard to ignore the shifting shadows." That is a great line, nice job - K
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly! I have to give thanks to Sojourner for that line...she saw it was missing something and really helped me with it! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great opening Steph, looking forward to the rest of the story - K
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly! I'm glad you liked the first chapter and I hope you like the rest!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great ending! Can't wait for the sequel! Who doesn't hate Gordon Walker?
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon! I am so happy you liked this! As for a sequel, it's still a good while away but please look out for it! And yes, I hate Gordon as well, but is it bad if I love him a little bit too?
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
Very exciting! That Russian roulette was tense! I wish Dean would have gotten to beat Robbie up a little more, though.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon! I have to thank a very special friend of mine for the Russian roulette game...it was her idea and I just went with it from there. I understand what you are saying, but I couldn't let Dean just go at Robbie like that...it would have been way too easy! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: brookewinchster (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 13
ch 14 pleeaaaseee
Author's Response: Sorry Brooke! Unhinged is now complete so there won't be any more chapters. I am planning on a sequel to this, but it's gonna be a while before I can get to it. Thanks for your enthusiasm!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG!Gordon found Robbie, what a cliffhanger, I didn't see this coming. And now, they're going after Dean and Sam, can't wait to know what'll happen next. That was an amazing story Stephanie, you did a terrific work with this one.Can't wait for the sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane! You know I had to put the two psychos together...it just had to be done! And I love the thought of the two of them on the same side...cruel, I know. I am so happy you liked this story and thank you so much for all of your warm words and compliments!
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