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Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 02:59 AM · On: Clean Dean?

Vanessa,
great story.
Dean getting a sponge bath by Helbringer; too funny.
Loved Dean's reaction to the stool sample and his comment "No! No Freakin' way lady!" and "What's the D stand for, Devil?" i laughed out loud at that one.
keep up the great work with your stories so far i have liked everyone i have read.
Renee

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much, Renee. I cannot tell you how much your wonderfully kind words mean to me. I'm so glad I've been able to keep you entertained.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 07:26 PM · On: Clean Dean?

I liked it! Altho I kept waiting for nurse D. Monnick to turn evil or turn out to be an angel or something!

Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry for the bit of disappointment there. But, I guess, in her own way D. Monnick was a bit of an angel.
I was actually thinking of bringing her back in another story one day.

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 08:43 PM · On: Clean Dean?

LMAO!!!! LMAO!!!! A. Helbringer!!!! LOL!!! The hospital bill $2600... The Food at the diner $20... Dean's reaction to that last nurses name: PRICELESS!

Author's Response: hehehe Funny! Thank you so much, gypsy. It's really good to know that you liked this story and the humor.

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 01:21 AM · On: Clean Dean?

Oh goodness. It's late here and I've been trying so hard not to laugh loudly. Seriously, every chapter has been wonderfully hilarious. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 06:20 PM · On: Clean Dean?

Nice story, good job! And funny ending. Sam definitely owes Dean a milkshake for leaving him alone with A Helbringer. lol :D

Reviewer: Nana56 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:36 AM · On: Clean Dean?

This was hysterical. I especially liked the title of the second chapter - "A Tale of Two Pukings"...awesome.
Thanks for sharing this with us!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 05:31 AM · On: Clean Dean?

nice ending, cool reding.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 02:02 AM · On: Clean Dean?

This was a great ending. I really liked it! Poor Dean, nurse Helbringer is after him... :) Thanks for the good read!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 12:48 AM · On: Clean Dean?

interesting story...very graphic pukefest in the first few chappies...nice job! bambers;)

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 10:00 PM · On: Sorry, Sugar

Nice opening, moving on.. K

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 08:26 PM · On: Clean Dean?

Great Ending! Loved it!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 07:08 PM · On: Clean Dean?

Hilarious stuff about catheters and sponge baths and sasquatch skeletons! Nice work Vanessa, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response:
I had so much fun writing this story. From picking the odd names to fit the hospital--D. Monnick, Dr. Su, and A. Helbringer--right down to making Dean (and Sam!) so sick.
It really does my heart good to hear you liked it (to be honest, it's the balm I need right now) and keeps me motivated to write more.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 07:05 PM · On: All is Revealed

All the medical stuff sounds completely plausible to me!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 07:04 PM · On: Asleep and Awake

Seeing and hearing his brother had the desired effect, and Dean calmed
It's wonderful how they can do that for each other....

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 07:01 PM · On: On the Move, Sort Of

Love it that Sam set off around the hospital to find Dean! Awwww. And I think Delilah may turn out to be a friend in need...

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 06:58 PM · On: I Can't Breathe

I knew it!!!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 06:56 PM · On: D. Monnick, R.N.

I love Delilah! And I'm guessing that Dean's double vision is a bad sign....hmmmm....

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 06:53 PM · On: The Right Decision

You've been posting so fast I'm struggling to catch up with you, but that means the story is complete and I can read it in one sitting! YAY! This is an intense chapter, great dialogue, I'm off to the hospital now!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 05:46 PM · On: Clean Dean?

Ha ha! That's great! Oh man. I love where this ended! Great story, V, awesome job!

Author's Response:
Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it. I was a little worried about the ending but it seems to have been the right choice.
Did I mention that your lovely comment encourages me reason to write more??

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 04:36 PM · On: Clean Dean?

heya.
Great story. Had me worried there for a bit....but I liked the funny side of it too.
Bxxx

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 12:16 PM · On: Sorry, Sugar

At first when I started reading this story, I thought do I really want to read about Sam and Dean getting sick? This story has turned out to be very entertaining. I guess I must be sicker than I thought. I am glad that you keep your chapters short. That makes it a good quick read.

Author's Response: I'm glad you stuck with it. It's good to know that you ended up enjoying it. :-)

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 04:57 AM · On: On the Move, Sort Of

First I only looked briefly at this story but now you made me curious. Poor boys and what's happening with Dean??? Breathing trouble because of food poisoning? Or something supernatural on top of everything? Winchester luck once more :) Ok, keep it coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 05:15 PM · On: D. Monnick, R.N.

AWWWW sick Winchesters....
I like it...really good

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 11:25 PM · On: A Tale of Two Pukings

oh man, poor boys...

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 09:25 PM · On: A Tale of Two Pukings

Good start! Patiently waiting for more.

Author's Response: More soon, I promise.

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