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Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 16

Love it, I really want Dean to be okay.  I want him to be a good guy still.  I like that your story did that.

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 16

fantastic!

THANK YOU!

Dix 

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 16

AMAZING STORY....LOVED HOW SAM SAVED DEAN LIKE HE PROMISED (L)(L)

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 16

i have read most of your stuff and i like it all, but i have to say that was the most creative. I really liked the way Sam got Dean out of the deal and I also like that Dean never noticed Sam using his powers til the coffee thing, which was just funny. Totally had an Andy flashback.  This was a great story and I love the ending. Well done. You should definately keep on writing.

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

You really got into Dean's head, his thoughts, words & actions were really true to the character. It was a decent story & I enjoyed. 

I think there could have been more substance in the chapters, sometimes it felt a bit rushed. 

I love Sam angst (w/ Dean comfort/caring is a bonus) so this story gave me a needed fix. 

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 16

Sure as hell you should write another story!! This incredible.

So many stories have been written about Dean's death and final year - but this was truly original and unique!!!

Such a joy to read, thank you for putting a smile on my face today.

Bxxxx



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the great review.  I love writting this stuff... guess I am addicted to them boys!!

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!! I cant believe i let this story slip through my net.

Its sooo good!!! I cant wait to keep reading.

Bxxx

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 16

Yes keep up the good work.

Reviewer: snaturalfreak (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was amazing! I am so glad that the crossroad demon didn't take Deans soul!! Let's just hope it happens that way in the next season

Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 16

Brilliant. An amazing story and yes, you should definately keep writing.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

No not a cliffe.......waiting here...been with you all the way. Post soon!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 16

Yay! I'm so happy Sam ended up saving Dean...I knew he could do it! Great, wonderful, amazing, fabulous, superb, and fantastic story! :0)

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  I am new  to fanfiction.  It is just too fun to read and write this stuff.  Love it!!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 14

OMG this just keeps getting better with each chapter. My heart is breaking for both the boys. this is just so much pain for them-they never catch a break. Yet, Sam is finally using his true powers , getting the idea how to control it.

I hope this is the answer- because we all realize one cannot live  without the  other.

Your words are pictures -the video keeps playing in my mind.

AWSOME  and thanks for this treat.

Please post soon.  a fan

you are killing me -

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

The chapters keep getting better and better. When the bros were in the car and Dean put his hand on Sam's shoulder and the way Dean doesn't say anything after Sam says he is not ok was written really well. And I loved the way Dean saw Bobby hugging Sam and they both pretended they didn't see each other. The simple, understated way you write human interactions are awesome. Some writers "over write" but you were able to make it  realistic. Post Soon:)

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 13

Awesome, that was the best chapter yet! Good dialogue, lots of angst and a little chick flick moment. The last sentence was perfect:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the review.  I am new to this story writting, but sure  do love doing it.  

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 12

uh oh!!! What are they going to do now? Good update

~Kayla

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 12

Really liked the beginning of the chapter when the boys are thinking about what will happen.

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 12

Another good chapter, Sam is the only not tied on . Great place to stop looking forward to next chapter. Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great story so far! I couldn't stop reading it!.....now I'm going to be a bit late for work lol. See ya next chapter

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  This is my first mult-chapter fic.  Those Winchesters...gotta love um!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

Sam didn't tell Dean what RED wanted???????

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 10

 Fargo..ya, sorry just had to say it. At least Dean got his baby fixed. Will Dean risk the incantation, or trust Sam? Guess i`ll have to wait and see. Many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.  This is my first multichapter fic, so I appreciate the input. 

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 9

Brilliant, love it when Dean calls Sam kiddo,  so careing. Dean now realizes Sam can control people and hopefully demons. Great chapter, many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 10

"Fargo" its funny everytime I hear it--I Hated that movie.

I like how Dean is getting a little edgy even mad enough to yell at Sam. Much more realistic than all the stories that have him calmly "accepting" his fate.

"Yea, you do that, cause I'm scared to get out of the car"---Now THAT was a funny line!

Good work with the priestess' accent by the way.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 9

"Yep...that is the plan" woohoo!!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

Sam pulled an Ava--cool!

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