Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 05:44 AM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Wow, this story is amazing! You guys do an awesome job! I love how the tension is rising. You are taking us on a thrillride and spoil us with long, very detailed and very well written chapters. Thank you and keep up the great work. I look forward to "Thursday".
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the "spoil us" comment -- we were a bit worried about the length, but it was just what we felt was needed to tell this chapter of the story. So glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for reviewing. Hope you like what's to come... next few "days" are going to be tough for our boys... GS and SJ
Reviewer: star76 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 09:47 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Hey guys, saw the new chapter posted this morning, but didn't have time to read it before going to work. Now I've finally had time to sit and put my thoughts together!!
As usual, great work. I am a literary idiot, so apart from the obvious seven sins, I have no idea where this story is going..... looking forward to finding out though! Here are some bits I particularly liked.
The whole dream sequence at the opening of the chapter was great, Sam trying to rememeber how his Dad talked Dean around, and him actually seeing Dean beyond the usual cocky facade.
"I'm gonna burn Sam". Absolutely heartbreaking. I just wanted to take Dean in my arms and hug him and tell him everything will be ok
...... It will be ok..... won't it??
Dean throwing the baseball. After the tension of the chapter opening, it was nice to see Dean relax and do something for the sake of it, not because it was related to demons or saving lives.
All the way through the descriptiveness, as usual, allowed me to see everything in my minds eye. I don't know why, but particularly in this chapter the descriptions of facial expressions was really vivid for me.
Boston and 'Peace of Mind'. I love that song! I began downloading music to create my own Supernatural soundtrack, and that is one song I find myself listening to over and over again. That, and Kansas 'Wayward Son' - who doesn't love that song?!!
Dean leaving the coffee shop "still got it Winchester". Typical Dean!
Looking forward to reading more. You know I love long chapters, they are well worth the wait.
Have a great weekend,
Stella
Author's Response: Stella! Hey, there are no literary idiots, just the less informed. And I'm actually with you there on many things. SJ is the brains of this outfit; I just tell stories. Thanks so much for calling out the parts that worked for you -- this was a fulfilling chapter for both of us and it's excited for us to watch the story we've plotted come to life, and see ya'll react to it. Balancing the dark (waking nightmare) with the light (baseball) is something we both admire in good TV/Movies/Books and so it's fantastic to see that you're enjoying our attempt at that balance. :) CONGRATS on the pending nuptials!! If we don't see you for the next couple of chapters, we'll know why -- can't wait until you're back and can let us know what you think. Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 09:00 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
I bet I can make another list of 7 things I loved about this chapter. Here goes: 1. “I’m gonna burn, Sam,” Dean whispered, his wide eyes steady, raw. “They’re waiting for me." Holy freakin' hell. Love is the wrong word. You are twisting my heart so HARD with that. 2. The whole baseball scene, and the fact that Dean has an arm on him ..of course he does! 3. The fact that the baseball scene led to Sam questioning his "rightness" - and Dean being the most awesome big brother in the world when he sets him straight. it’s part of the job description. *sigh* 4. Dean's complete aversion to any form of abstinence. heehee. 5. Have to just quote this. Can't make a comment. Dean blinked, then grinned, expertly masking the sudden, fierce ache in his heart, preventing it from settling in his eyes like a beacon. “Where else am I gonna go?” I can’t breathe without you around, Sammy. 6. It always came back to time. Time and Sammy. He wasn’t allowed to have both. Again with the heart twisting. Aaaargh! 7. The macaw. Enough said. The challenge of course, is to stop at 7! Awesome job ladies. See you again soon! P.S.. I took so long reading and re-reading and commenting that I was thrown off, and logged out, and it wouldn't let me submit …but I copied and pasted my original review! Now that's persistence for you …gotta count that as a virtue, right?
Author's Response: *CLAPS* I was so excited to not only see a review from you -- but another list!! Hooray -- and THANKS. First, yes, m'dear, you are truely one of the virtuous and I commend you for your persistence. Don't ever change. :) 1. Dean breaks our hearts in so many ways... I am so curious how they're going to play his "death sentence" in the show. 2. *grin* That was so freakin' fun to write. This is going to sound funny, but I have an alternate scene jotted down where he actually got to play ball with the kids for a bit just because. 3. Dean is the best big brother in the whole world. *hugs Dean* 4. SJ nailed his character with that quirk, didn't she? 5. Thanks for that. I just saw that 'I'm always alright' smile on his face and the pain in his eyes when he turned around... 6. *sniff* See #1 for similar musing. 7. *grin* I'm not a big fan of birds and SJ swears those things are evil. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for gifting us with one of MY favorite things -- a list! :) Hope to see you again and often. Slainte, GS and SJ
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 08:35 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Great chapter, guys! I don't mind the long chapters at all because it just means I get more to read! I am always sad when one of your chapters come to an end, so the longer ones make me very happy! I love Sam telling Dean "thank you." It was so spontaneous, it sent shivers down my spine. Sam going to the library made me feel like we were back a season one. I just love him there because it's so natural for him. I love the reference to Dante's Divine Comedy. I just read that last semester, so little parts are still familiar to me. Too bad Sam couldn't catch the guy who returned the book, but then again that would have been way too easy. And since when is it easy for these boys? I love Dean overhearing the conversation at the coffee shop. It helped him figure out what was next and even found out who the next victim was! Great job, Dean! As for the victim--I feel very sad for her. She was suffering from an illness and she had to die by the very thing that was destroying her life. Oh, and the way she died...damn freaky, but oh so good! Again, great chapter and I am so looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: How cool that you said that Sam in the library felt so natural -- it's exactly what SJ said as she wrote. That she loved writing them being "normal" -- they so rarely get normal, don't they? Good for you for picking up on the guy that left the book... :) And yep, gotta be careful what you say around our boy Dean. He doesn't miss a thing, does he? I'm glad you felt sorry for Sara. Her death made us sad as well. Thanks so much for reading and taking time to review. We hope to see you again and often! Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 08:11 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
This story is so captivating. I know a little about Dante's Divine Comedy and all and I can see that you two did an amazing research, it's so an interesting read. Loved the first part of the chapter, Dean's horrific nightmare, his vulnerability, Samnot knowing what to do to help his brother, it was a very intense and poignant scene. Fabulous work so far ladies, can't wait to know what you've in store for Thursday.
Author's Response: Thanks, oceane! So glad you're enjoying this. It's one of those stories that is actually more work than simply writing -- but that's good every once in awhile, yeah? Thanks for letting us know what spoke to you -- hope you enjoy what's to come! Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: britany k (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 10:12 AM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
I just wanted to say hello. I've been lurking this site for a while now but couldn't keep my joy to myself anymore. I've come to realize that reviews are like gold. I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy your stories and look forward to each new one/update. So far, I'm reallly enjoying the ride with this one. You have such a mastery of the boys. When I read, it's like watching an episode. I feel the angst and the heartbreak, the fear and anxiety. Wonderful job. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and I just have to say I loved Dean in the coffee shop. That was so classic. Keep up the good work. You guys rock!
Author's Response: britany -- so great to see you! Thanks for letting us know you're reading and what you think of the stories. Lurkers are readers and so you're much loved, but reviews are better than chocolate (and I LOVE chocolate), so your comments are appreciated more than you know. Love that you feel like you're watching an episode -- it plays like a movie in our minds and that's what we're going for when we write, so that comment makes us VERY happy. Hope to see you again and that you enjoy what's to come! Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: LovinJackson (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 12:51 AM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Hello :D time for my second review hehe. hmmmm well i think this story just keeps getting better and better ... i wont go into everything like i did in my review at ff(dot)net but i have to say the bird part was a classic .... i loved it and as i said in my other review i love it when sam sees that his brother is distburbed and takes control of the situation like leading him away from the body ... I really love the way u write that stuff. And i had to mention it ... well just because its made me smile everytime lol in recent stories whenever u have mentioned Dean playing/liking baseball it makes me smile because in the brotherhood he is really big on baseball. Totally irrelevent piece of info for u but i just had to say it lol. Anyways i loved this chapter even more than the last so keep up the amazing work :) Luv Tara x0x
Author's Response: Tara! Thanks so much for leaving us reviews in multiple places! That is much appreciated. I'm glad you're enjoying this -- and that you're liking the baseball stuff. I didn't know the Brotherhood had a thing for baseball (as you know), but I haven't been able to get the idea of Dean and baseball out of my head since he did that kick-ass slide into the grave to spear the zombie in CSPWDT... Can't wait to see what you think of the next parts! Best,
GS and SJ PS I put the stickers on my laptop today! *HUGS Tara*
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 11:42 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Wow...you guys are good! Who is messin' with the boys? *buckles seatbelt* Oh I'm on for the ride alright. :) Keep up all the awesome work!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) As for who is messin' with the boys... stay tuned. Glad to see you wearing a seatbelt, because it's gonna get a little bumpy in a couple of chapters... GS and SJ
Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 11:18 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Wow, what a fabulously long chapter - I almost went through a bottle of wine reading it ;) Oh, and chocolate! Well, I guess you know what sin I'm guilty of now. Speaking of sins, I read some of the reviews/replies and laughed out loud when you said that Dean could be guilty of just about all of them - so true, so true - except the next one. Dean never is still, much less lazy. Wonderful chapter! I loved the tone, the feel of this one. The opening that dealt with the loss that both boys are feeling; the devastating nightmares that they both are having because of Sam's death and the deal Dean made. What horrible fears lie beneath their facades - Sam's fear for Dean's life and that he came back "wrong"; Dean's fear of burning in hell and how he's failed everyone he loves and how disappointed they are in him. Loved this line: "Dean's eyes were shadowed, secret, normal" Oh, our poor, poor Dean. I really enjoyed the hunt in this chapter as well - the boys separately putting clues together to figure out the next victim and what to look for next. What a horrific scene in that greenhouse - unfortunately, felt as if I were there. The humor to break the angst: "Been There, Drunk That"; "Freak-Takes one to know one"; "You couldn't take the heat, kid". Just loved it. So on to sloth, if the boys are right. Problem is that they're getting there with too little, too late. Loved the last lines in the chapter - Dean is taking this personally. Speaking of personally, whatever it is that you've done differently in this chapter, has made it my favorite so far. Three down, four to go. Just lovin' it. Until next time...
Author's Response: *grin* I love the last bit of your review. We really haven't done anything *differently* exactly... I think we're just getting into the rhythm of writing together. We have the story completely outlined and one might think it an easy task to then simply bring the story to life, but as we've discovered, it's a whole balancing act of time, beats, and styles. Kinda like... playing jazz with words. In any case, I'm glad that you've enjoyed this and hope to see more of you because it's only going to get darker from here. OH! And as far as Dean being guilty of just about each of the seven deadly sins -- I couldn't agree with you more. Sloth is decidedly *not* one I'd pin on our boy. Although... there are times when sitting on a bed eating cheese fries and watching TV appeals to him. *wink* And I have to say I laughed when you said you almost went through a bottle of wine while reading. Because I can't write until the baby is asleep, I often find myself doing so with a glass of wine nearby. As we were working on this last part, I kept shooting furtive glances at said glass and wondering if I should go exchange it for some water... But I didn't. Looking forward to seeing you again, Irish. Slainte, GS and SJ
Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 10:52 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
I'm looking forward to more! Great job, ladies!
Author's Response: Thanks, Katie! Hope you like what is to come. Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:45 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Wow, great chapter. I love the selection of songs you included! I love Jack Johnson! :0) You are doing such a wonderful job with this story! I'm exicted to read the next update....don't feel too pressured to finish it in a hurry though. We all can relate how life gets in the way. Take your time, and I know delayed gratification will kick in. :D ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Kayla. We're both excited to get to the next chapter -- mostly because we have the whole story outlined and we're dying to write Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. HA! :) Glad you liked the songs! SJ and I can see each other's play list on IM and often laugh when we find ourselves listening to the same thing. And Jack Johnson rocks. Well... he doesn't really *rock*, but he's very cool. I live in a college town and his music is very popular -- especially in the local coffee shops, of which there are many. So glad you're enjoying the story and we look forward to seeing you back! Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:42 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
You two are total evil geniuses!! I'm loving it!! I figured Wednesday was going to be gluttony...my research, like Sam's lead me to the Divine Comedy...which didn't surprise me since I know Gaelic has a penchant for Dante (Virgil the paramedic *winks*). Although the punishment for gluttony was slightly changed...the sinner tied between the trees wasn't able to reach any food or drink....thus teaching self-restraint. In this case, the victim was forced to over indulge in their vice...hmmm...what does it all mean! One more thing...that pendant is bugging me...I've done some digging on St.Patrick and his ridding Ireland of demons and came across something potentially interesting...I may have an idea about what's doing this. Oh and the bird chanting "Takes one to know one" I loved that! Of course all the victims are connected...takes one sinner to know another! This chapter was incredible! So much more I could go on about. The interaction between Sam and Dean was awesome as usual...witnessing Dean's raw fear at his impending trip to the inferno was heartbreaking! On the flip side, seeing him in some trendy coffee shop trying to order coffee was too funny! I'm excitedly awaiting Thursday and Sloth!
Author's Response: Glee! I love seeing your reviews. And the fact that you were into the story enough to do research... GAH! Woman, you're amazing. You and SJ are like peas in a pod, I tell you. She's Sam to my Dean in plotting out the murders in this story. It's actually SJ that has a penchant for Dante... once we decided what we were going to do, she plotted out how each sinner would die based on the Divine Comedy and I was like, "cool, sounds creepy, let's do it." And I am SO flattered that you remember Virgil, but I have a confession. While it makes me look very much the literary-minded writer to have based him on Dante's companion... "Sinatra" aka Virgil the paramedic was actually inspired by Virgil "Bud" Brigman from the Abyss. *blushes* See what I mean? I got movies, SJ has World Lit. :) That's what has been so fantastic about writing with her -- we both bring our talents to the table and work to meld them in such a way that we hope results in a compelling story. She has talent to spare -- all I have is storytelling. :) So... she takes Sam to the library, and I take Dean to the coffee shop. *grin* You are sooo going to keep us on our toes, though -- I love that you're looking into the pendant. Hee. I'll say no more on that, however. And bang on with the bird! I wondered if anyone would pick up on that. Thanks so much for hanging with us and I know we're both looking forward to your thoughts on the next parts -- it only gets darker from here... Slainte, GS and SJ
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 07:09 PM · On: Wednesday: Gluttony
Oh jeez, you guys. You are freakin' geniuses of crime. I think you should collaborate and write a series of mystery/murder novels. You'd be great at it. This is just...too awesome...i don't even really have words for it...just...write more soon please!! And I'm beginning to think there's a supernatural serial killer loose on the world...oh yeah. I love the brothers and their Doublemint Twin moments...
Author's Response: *grins* Doublemint Twin moments... I'm gonna be chuckling about that for awhile. Thanks, Shiny. So glad you enjoyed this chapter. We've worked pretty hard to plot out the story and keep the pacing rhythmic, so thanks for your kind words. Much more to come -- still hoping to post a chapter a week if we can. Hang with us, because the boys only get in deeper from here... Slainte, GS and SJ
Reviewer: NovembersGuest (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 07:11 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Aww, I felt so sorry for Dean when Sam ruined his enjoyment of the pie. I love cherry pie, btw, and now my mouth is watering. Thanks guys, lol.
Oh, Dean. God didn't lock you out...you locked Him out. So sad.
Very good, girls. Banter from the boys was great, recognized lines from the show...still think it's uber eerie about the spoilers. You've set up a nice mystery here and I can tell that you've put a considerable amount of thought into it. Nice tension between the boys. All in all, this felt like an actual episode.
Bring on Wednesday! Yea!
Author's Response: That pie was all sj -- she made me actually consider baking. Note the "consider"... ;) I think you're dead-on with Dean and God... I think he's going to go through a bit of the valley of the shadow before he sees any light on the other side -- and I don't just mean in this story. I think that might be the case in the show, too. But I guess we'll have to wait and see! I'm glad you like the banter and can see this like an actual episode. We work hard to make the rhythm seem as natural as possible, so yay! Wednesday is coming soon... Can't wait to see what you think! Slainte, GS and SJ
Reviewer: freyja529 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 07:07 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
So good! Loved Dean's line about the fact that if God was listening they might be able to take a break now and then...such a Dean thing to say. You've both done a great job of building the suspense and of delving into the aftermath of Dean's deal. Can't wait for Wednesday!
Author's Response: Hi! It's you! Hooray! Yeah, Dean's issues with faith are really being tested in this fic... and I'm curious to see how/if they handle that in the show. Stay tuned... there is more mystery and angst in store! Always enjoy hearing from you, lady. GS and SJ
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 08:01 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Fan-freaking-tastic. I am totally in love with the writing styles and the suspense and everything. Amazing and I can't wait for the next one because it's so awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks, Rae! We're happy you're enjoying this. We're nearly complete with the next chapter and should have it up next week. Hope you enjoy! GS and SJ
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 03:13 AM · On: Tuesday: Greed
I found the moment with Dean standing outside the motel door, not wanting to cross back into his difficult 'world' really heartbreaking and slightly disturbing. Sometimes you just want to pluck the pair of them out of it all and into normality, don't you? (Heck, I am just way too involved in this tv series, LOL.) But now I'm worried because Lust is last and we all know Dean is a young healthy man who doesn't like to go without!! I do hope that one isn't going to be reserved for him?! Dean's reluctance to see it as a hunt has me on edge, I hope that a demon isn't laying a trail with a trap for our boys at the end. Did I mention I am loving this. And I keep on forgetting to rate! Jane :)
Author's Response: I think on some level we're all a bit too involved, but I'm enjoying the heck out of it. :) It's so great to see you react to this story -- worry for them, be on edge, etc. :) And honestly? I think our Dean could be guilty of a number of the deadly sins... but that's all I'll say. Sam's gonna figure out another thread that ties the murders together in the next chapter, so... stay tuned! Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 12:55 AM · On: Tuesday: Greed
What a wonderful update! Looking forward to the next installment :0) ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thank you!! Really appreciate your review and your taking time to read. :) Hope you enjoy the next part! GS and SJ
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 10:23 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Awesome update, guys! I am really loving the premise of this fic! You guys are totally cranking out the emotion and suspense in this and I am loving every bit of it! These deaths are certianly getting freakier with each one that passes. I am glad Sam finally figured out what was going on here because I know it was just eating at him. Great job so far and I anxiously await the next chapter!
Author's Response: *grin* Thanks so much. I know I grin a lot, but when I see reviews like this I can't help myself!! :) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. We're working on the next chapter now and hope to have it up by the end of this week, if all goes well. And if you think the deaths are freaky now... just wait. *insert evil laugh here* GS and SJ
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 09:56 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Okay, I have a list of things I loved about this chapter (I'm a bit of a demon about lists!) 1. Sam undersatnding a liitle bit about what Dean went through when Sam died > As long as he lived, Sam knew he'd never truly comprehend what that horror would have been like for his brother. He never wanted to experience it for himself. Deal or no deal. 2. The truly horrible countdown that's on both of their mids while they're trying to sort out this hunt. 3. The matching shower scenes. Yay! 4. This line: “’Cause I think that’s the first time in the history of Winchester hunts that you’ve said that,” Dean flicked a glance at Sam, the side of his mouth pulling up in a grin, his eyes crinkling. “I think we need to write it down.” 5. Their rather ungainly entrance to the basement. lol 6. Sam not forgetting about Dean's nightmares. 7. The way you plotted Sam's eventual reasoning - the seven virtues and the seven deadly sins. Phew! Of course this list is not exhaustive... I'm ready to add to it as soon as the next chapter goes up! Remember, sloth is a sin. (just kidding!)
Author's Response: ciel -- you are a woman after my own heart. On my ff.net bio I put that one of my favorite things to do is plan things and make lists. Imagine my utter GLEE when I saw this review. :) 1. Just wait. It gets worse... or, better, depending on how you look at it. 2. See above. OH, and seriously? How are *we* going to survive S3 with that clock ticking in OUR heads? 3. Hmmm... yeah. :) Two boys, two authors, twice the shower magic. 4. Liked that line, too. One of the best things about writing with sj is that we can hear the boys as we're working on this -- hopefully, hopefully that translates on the page because it's been fun. 5. That was fun to write. :) I pulled inspiration from their graceful entrance to the sorority house in "Hookman" and a bit from Connor and Murphy in Boondock Saints... ;) 6. *pets Sam* good brother. See 1 and 2 above... 7. Gotta tell you, SJ is scary good with her knowledge about this stuff... she had the virtues/sins plotted out before she even realized it. Making that come to life has been a trip. Thanks soooo much for this! I hope we get more lists in the future. And don't worry... sloth is a sin and it shall be punished. ;) GS and SJ
Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 04:40 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Another engrossing chapter. Two gratuitous shower scenes - very nice and thank you. Interesting take on nightmares - Sam isn't having them and Dean is. No surprise there - who wouldn't be having nightmares in his precarious situation? Eleven months - gah! Enjoyed the banter about Dean's night out. He couldn't even remember her name... Oh, Dean. The hunt has turned out to be what I thought it was. Being one of those "girls with the Catholic uniform skirts and knee-high socks" (in days long past) that Dean was mmming about, it wasn't that hard for me to figure out. I also think I know what the next sin they will encounter is from the clue. We'll see. Glad to see that Sam is on the top of his game. Dean's heart just isn't in this hunt. Don't know whether that's important or not. And how about that maintenance guy? Mmm... Great story/mystery here. Enjoying the suspense, trying hard to figure it out and how it's going to affect our boys. So far they haven't been in too much peril on the hunt, but I know better than to think that will continue. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Until next time...
Author's Response: Irish, you are the best. I love how descerning you are in your reading, and in your reviews. I swear you miss *nothing*. *Grins big.* We had to spread out the shower scene love, yeah? Two writers, two boys... twice the magic. Hee. And I don't know where the show will go, but in our heads, Dean would try to soak up as much of the things he enjoys doing -- including frisky women -- as he can in this his last year. Possibly. Glad you liked that. So, since the hunt is what you had thought, my hope NOW is that you enjoy seeing them discover the clues and the ties that bind the clues together... as the week progresses, they'll have more and more to deal with and I very much look forward to your reactions. :) Slainte, GS (and SJ)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 03:29 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
I enjoy so much this story. Terrific plot, excellent writing. GS and sojourner, you rock. Can't wait for Wednesday.
Author's Response: Hooray! I'm so glad you're enjoying this. As we flesh out the outline I get more anxious than ever to see how people will react. Thanks for reading and for the review. MUCH appreciated. Best, GS and SJ
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 03:20 AM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Dean isn't going to be 'lust' is he? Lol...awesome job guys! Looking forward to more soon. :)
Author's Response: Honestly? Our boy Dean is probably guilty of each of the deadly sins in one way or another... but that's all I'll say. :) Thanks so much for reading and thanks VERY much for sending a review! We simply delight in these. :) Hope to see you again!! GS and SJ
Reviewer: LovinJackson (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 12:18 AM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Dude, that was awesome. So many classic Dean moments that had me smirking, smiling or laughing hehe. You had Dean stuffing his face which you know i love :P plus the whole background story of the boys dealing with Dean's deal which i am really loving especially after reading Rain Check hehe Loving it mate. You always blow me away with you writing talent :) Tara x0x Ps. I did leave a review with Sojourner too hehe and i would have reviewd this straight away but my granfather showed up ... and no-one else was here ... you'd understand if you knew him why that was a hassle lol cant wait for more :) x0x *HUGS*
Author's Response: I love how much Dean loves food. There are times that I literally forget to eat and I don't imagine he would ever suffer from that. :) Thanks so much for reviewing on both sites! That's awesome -- I know how busy you are. :) Mostly because I keep asking you to do things. Hee. Thanks, too, for the kudos on Rain Check. Much appreciated. Hope to see you again and often as this story plays out!! GS and SJ
Reviewer: star76 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 06:39 PM · On: Tuesday: Greed
Ooops, sorry - don't know why my review came out without paragraph breaks. Hope you can read it ok. Take care, Stella
Author's Response: Stteeeellllllaaaaa!!!! Heh. Sorry. I just couldn't resist. *shakes off image of young Marlon Brando in a tight, white T-shirt* No worries on the review format -- I could read it just fine and appreciate it all the more. :) GS
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