:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Once again, another beautiful story, I love the way you think, and how it all comes down on paper, er...computer. :P And mmmmm, peanut M&Ms. :D So at the end, he didnt put up the salt right?

Author's Response:
That's right, he didn't. It's one reason (of several, I think, but that's another story :D) that the YED was able to get in and kill Jess.
Thanks, again, for the great review!
My muse has taken an extended vacation (dammit), and I have three or four uncompleted stories sitting on my computer, one of which is another Sam at Stanford story.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great read, I really enjoyed thanks - K

Author's Response: *blushing* Aw, thanks! I can't believe all the great feedback I've recevied from people who write such great stories. Thank you!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great peek into the lives of Sam and Jess, including Sam's secrecy about his family.

Author's Response:
Thank you! This idea just wouldn't leave me alone. I've wondered how Sam's silence about his family would have affected his relationship with Jess. We don't really know much about her, but she didn't seem the type to let Sam get away with silence without a good reason. :)

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Many M&Ms coming your way! That was really original and lovely, because it said as much about Sam and Dean as it said about Sam and Jess. Excellent work, thanks so much for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the M&Ms!! I've loved how Kripke and crew have given (and hinted at) a lot of complexity in the boys and their lives. Gives us a lot to work with. :)

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good.

Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh wow. that last part of the story was the perfect ending. You did a wonderful job!
~Kayla

Author's Response:
Thank you! In retrospect, I wonder if that's what planted the seed for the story - that part where Dean and Sam are in the car, there is obviously a LOT going on in Sam's head that he isn't admitting to...

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful, sad, painfull, and loving-
your words invoke all this to your reader. We all feel Sam's paim and are torn with him because of his desire to be "normal".
You have captured the tone and temper that is all things Winchester-
Bravo!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good insight. It does sort of tie in the question? How did the demon get in to their apartment? + How easy could Sam go from being a Hunter to being a Student... reaching normal. Its short and sweet... so to speak. I've read Jess by Maya Perez and I could see your story answering some of the questions hers had. Both very good... thanks

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I haven't yet had a chance to read Maya's story, but I will. I think 'normal" for Sam would have come a lot harder than he would have expected - and it's always the little things that get you when you least expect it.

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

nicely done...loved this little insight into Sam's time with Jessica...thanks for posting!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I've always thought that things with Sam and Jess had to be a lot more complex than the little that Kripke has shown us. :)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ah, well then. Peanut M&Ms to you! Many giant bags! This is excellent, and I'm wondering if there's more coming...??? Yes, the lyrics are creepily related to the story...anyway. I really like your unique ideas about Jessica. Not too many have written about her, especially not with salt. I really liked the salt! Ahhh, salt. And it was really sad when you tied it all back to after she died, when Dean and Sam were arguing about it. Really good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the M&Ms!! More coming? There are some ideas tickling the back of my head that follow on from this one. And I have been working a multichapter about why Sam and Dean didn't talk for two years until Dean came to get Sam. It's been slow going, though.

Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was really good, an original concept and I usually don't read Jess stories.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I don't know what put the idea in my head, but it would _not_ leave me alone.

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