Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 08:41 PM · On: Succubus Revealed

Hurry up Sam!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 08:34 PM · On: Oh, Crap, This Can't Be Good

A succubus - or succubi I guess. Trust Dean.....it was hilarious that Bobby was bashful about telling Sam what they do!

Author's Response: It sure seemed like a Bobby type of reaction--at least to me.  VBG  I'm glad it worked.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 08:26 PM · On: You'll Scare the Fish

I ADORED the conversation about Dean, the worm and the bully - and the look Sam gets in his eye. Great dialogue in the whole chapter in fact!


Author's Response:

OH, I'm so glad you say that.  It was a little piece that I had to re-write a couple of times to get it to come out of Dean's mouth just right.

 

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 08:20 PM · On: You've Got to Be Kidding Me!

This is great Vanessa, I'm so hooked! You know what that means...I'm heading straight on!


Author's Response: I can't even begin to tell you how much fun I had writing this story!  And it's always a good sign when someone says they're hooked!  Thank you!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 08:16 PM · On: Naked

YED Inc lol! And a very early cliffhanger.....YAY!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 02:18 PM · On: Stitches in Time

This was so much fun to read. I'm glad you shared this with us. :0)

~Kayla

Author's Response: Oh, I'm always so eager to share my Supernatural fixation.  Thank you for reading.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 05:21 PM · On: Succubus Revealed

wishful thinking here vanessa ??!!

Author's Response: hehehe  I'll never tell . . . 

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 04:37 PM · On: Succubus Revealed

Ahhhh! Not Sam! Okay, I must know what happens next!!!! This is great story (super suspenseful and very intriguing...) and I can't wait!!! (Note the overexuberant exclamation marks...!!!!!!!!)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 04:34 PM · On: Prey

Oh my! Creeeeeepy. I'm interested to find out why the succubi are interested in Dean as prey (despite the fact that he's just so lovely, I wonder...) Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 10:56 AM · On: Oh, Crap, This Can't Be Good

Ahhh! CREEPY!!! Oh wow...hey, now I know how you got the title...oh goodness. PLEASE write more soon! Desperate to know what happens!!!! And that old lady is starting to give me the creeps...she's just too nice...

Author's Response:

I'm really glad to hear you're finding this creepy.  Just what I was going for!  Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 10:50 AM · On: You'll Scare the Fish

Wow, nice cliffhanger! I really like this. Rarely do we get to see Sam and Dean doing anything but hustling in bars and salt-and-burning. It's fun to see them do something so...ordinary! Now, if you'd only bring them to an amusement park...!!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:39 PM · On: You've Got to Be Kidding Me!

Heh heh. Too bad they don't have a steam shower...!!! Still loving this! I like how you have shorter chapters--it's a nice change from the really long ones. And you keep up the attention! Great job again! Hoping that Dean doesn't get molested again...