Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 09:30 PM · On: Stitches in Time

I find it very hard to believe that a Stanford grad and hunter would not have known that a Lamia is a succubus, or that Lil doesn't stand for Lilith, the mother of demons and the very first succubus. And how is it Bobby didn't recognize the pattern immediately? However, I certainly had never heard of Cambion, or that incubi were supposed to outnumber succubi, (not in anything I've ever read!) so maybe I can forgive them.
Liked the fishing scenes, Dean is funny when he tries to be 'normal'. And I always like learning new tidbits about Jess. Nice that Sam can remember the good times now, and not just the bad. I've been in some really tight spaces in caves, so I shivered with Sam, especially since he didn't have anyone to back him up if he got in trouble. More scary than the monsters, to me. Enjoyed.

Author's Response:

Well, if parts of this story strained the imagination a bit, I apologize as it was my first ever Supernatural story.

I'm glad you at least enjoyed parts of it.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 08:19 PM · On: Stitches in Time

Okay, but what happened to the twins? They needed to be slayed, too, ya know. My poor Dean.

Author's Response: Others have said that too.  Maybe I should do a little sequel.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 05:50 AM · On: Stitches in Time

brilliant , loved every bit some great tension , funny bits and some ugh bits !

Author's Response: Thank you, kansasangel.  I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this story of mine.

Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 05:15 AM · On: Those Are Just Scratches

wow now im really wondering whats going on . who are they ? good suspense here great stuff

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 06:26 PM · On: Get the Hell Off My Brother!

fig leaves.....I'd pay to see that........Nice save here, Vee.....

Author's Response: hehehe  I'd PAY to say that tooooo!  Woooo weeeeee

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 06:15 PM · On: Succubus Revealed

poor Dean................yechhhh!!!!!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 06:00 PM · On: Oh, Crap, This Can't Be Good

oh crap this can't be good......a stark naked Dean....how could THAT be a bad thing I was thinking??.............then won't survive through the night??!!!!!!! omg.....quick next chapter.....!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hmmm-- I just love naked Dean so much.  Funny how often I manage to work that into a story.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 05:53 PM · On: You'll Scare the Fish

barney fife....too funny...loving this........ohmigosh and he's falling off a crumbling little cliff....giving us a big cliffie !!!

Author's Response:

Yep, I do love cliffhangers

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 05:48 PM · On: You've Got to Be Kidding Me!

you evil little wench....a succubus in possibly a past life were you????

Author's Response: For Dean, yeah, a succubus in a past life for sure.  hehe

Reviewer: sammarinade (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 12:19 AM · On: Stitches in Time

This was a good story...I actually read it all at the same time so sorry for not reviewing everytime!  But like I said it was good!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, sammarinade.  It's great to know you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 11:58 PM · On: Stitches in Time

Ha, great ending! Back to the lemonade muffins...great job! Awesome story!

Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm so happy to hear that you liked it so well.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 11:54 PM · On: Hang On, Dean

Oh scary...heh, love how Dean quips even in this kind of a situation...nice, creepy chapter!