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Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 18

I read this in one go because I was rivetted. I just couldnt not...
Amazing, poignant, sensitive. I absolutely loved everything about Sam in your story - this is exactly as I would have imaged it going down. Sam as shy, gentle, protective. And all leading to that one night in their apartment which started it all for us. Just heartbreaking coz as I read your beautiful love story I knew of course that it was all gunna turn bad.
Your portrayal of Jess was awesone - the perfect girl for Sam. No wonder his grief knows no bounds.
Awesome story, beautifully written.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 18

An amazing ending! This chapter rocks! I didn't want to read it because I knew Jess was going to die, but it was so compelling. I
I love that you let us know what happened to Jess while Sam was gone, especially when the demon came.
Your ending was unexpected and incredible! I think Jess would choose to stay behind to protect Sam. This last bit really shows Jess' strength, her intelligence and her love for Sam.
Standing ovation!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 17

I like this version of the pilot episode through Jess' eyes. It's good to get a little more of her perspective.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 16

Love how you incorporated the pilot episode into this scene! It was flawless.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh no! The visions have started. I don't want this story to end. It's so good! I don't ususally read romances, but I love this! You've done a marvelous job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 14

I'm so glad Jess is giving Sam a taste of a homemade Christmas. He's been denied for so long. This is a vital chapter. It's portrayal of love and normalcy speak volumes. Jess is perfect for Sam---especially theJess you have created.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 13

Fabulous chapter! So much action and such a tremendous showcase of the depth and twists of personality that make up Sam Winchester---as a hunter and a man in love.
the line about this incident being a precurser of things to come is clever.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 12

It's fun to see Sam's confidence grow. This was a perfect time for him to make a move in directing their relationship.
I really love your writitng style! It's simple and easy to follw, yet expressive and descriptive. I can picture things in my mind so easily, like watching a movie in my head.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 11

What a very sweet chapter!
I like how you continually balance who Sam is with who he's trying to become.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 10

We see a little of Sam's performances. The many faces of Sam Winchester. Great!
I like the dialogue between Jess and ehr mom in the kitchen. It does a lot to portray the differences in the women and why Jess' goals are so important to her.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

Yahoo! the first kiss!
I'm glad Shirl and Roger are getting what they deserve. Cool that Jess is smart enough to figure it our and confront Sam.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

Jeff is hilarious! He's not a subtle matchmaker, but he's helping things along. I'm so glad Sam has him for a friend.
I liked Sam's little exhibition of acrobatics getting Jess' hat. His agility hasn't suffered much in college.
So far you've done such a great job developing the friendship and attraction between Sam and Jess. It all seem so natural and perfect.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

How incredibly sweet! I love Sam's vow to keep her safe.
Yay Jeff! He seemed fun in the pilot episode. I'm glad you've put him in your story!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

Poor Jess! It's apparent now that Roger is warped and isn't going to give up on Jess. It's also obvious that shirl is not really her friend and is totally being used by Roger.
What a tangled story. I love the drama!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

Has Sam been following her to make sure she gets home okay every night? How chivalrous!
Glad Jess was able to take care of Roger. Hopefully, he'll leave her alone now.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

They're so sweet together! I'm glad Jess has lofty goals.
I've noticed in this chapter and the previous chapter that Sam uses his keen senses to know when she's looking at him, or when she enters the room.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like that Jess calls Sam her scholar. How cute!
Smart girl, carrying a disguise and food with her.
So Jess is going to make the first move. This should be good.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 2

Shirl has a bug up her butt. Jealous much? I hope this predicament with Roger doesn't ruin their friendship. No man is worth losing friends over.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

So now we know how Jess and Sam met---or will meet. I'm so excited to read this! I'm certain it will have some very sweet parts and we'll see a different side of Sam.

Reviewer: pau (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 18

it was great really beautifulyou could honestly believe that that´s the way it happened. congrats

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

I am really liking this story. I normally don't read romance stories but this one is quite good. Your writing style allows me to picture everything as if I was there. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 18

Oh My god! that wad beautifully written i love it! ... The many faces of Sam .. id loved! Poor Jess .. :(

Totally AMAZING Story Well Done :)

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Read your story in Fan Fiction and absolutely loved it. It gave an inside into what made Jess so special to Sam. Its not something that has been done on the show obviously for time reasons... but I did see an edited clip of Sam and Jess and I always wondered about his time with her. I think you covered it very well in your story...
Great Job... as much as I want to write a story I honestly wouldn' t know where to start. Take Care... keep them coming...
aripage

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