Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter. The plot thickens... Mutiny and thief had me thinking a pirate's ghost, but indolent doesn't seem to fit....hmmmm. Love Sam's worry over Dean's deal. I love the threads you are weaving here, I'm loving trying to piece it together....
Author's Response: hmm....we shall see. Glad you're digging it lam. I'll get an update going soon- Thanks K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
And the intrigue continues....could this angry spirit nbe the spirit of a pirate who's treasure was disturbed...or maybe even stolen by Michael? It's my theory...but maybe I've just been watching too much Pirates of the Carribean! Nice job on Sam's angst and worry very Samish! (is that a word? Maybe Bambers could use that in her next installment of Nonsense!) As always the banter between the boys is on par! I really like how you close the curtain on scenes and just give us the info...I'm jealous of your ability to do that I compulsively feel the need to include every detail of every possible scene...LOL very OCD of me! So I now have 3 Obiwons who are going to teach me the art of writing better action scenes and the art of subtlety! Okay enough babbling...can you tell I liked this chapter? BTW I don't know if I ever told you this but the first story I ever read on this site was "Thank you" and I thought you were an awesome writer then and I continue to be in awe of your talent from that little family to Catherine Chase and Grace and Faith and all the other amazingly well written characters in superbly written stories...you are totally and completely my idol! I aspire to be as good a writer as you... So DON"T let ANYONE tell you any different! Love ya hon!
Author's Response: Gen, are you trying to make me cry...lol. Who else would be sweet enough to mention some of my favorite characters. Thanks so much for the boost, and I will continue to try and improve my skills, after all with people like you in my corner how could I not.- K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Captivating story so far. Can't wait to know what Dean and Sam'll find through the investigation. Great work K.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying. Things should be heating up shortly...K
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is a very interesting story so far. I liked the mention of Nurse Glockner from Folsom Prison Blues. I can't wait to see what the creature is that Sam and Dean are hunting.
Author's Response: Thanks so glad you're enjoying, Hope to update soon - K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
Thanks for this new chapter. Oops, the aunt story almost backfired. I really like this story and I am curious as to where you will take us. I can so understand Sam's fears about leaving his brother alone, but he has to give him some space or Dean will break out. Let's see how much more on that we are going to read from you. More please soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks as always for your kind words, I'm glad you're enjoying.. Hope to update soon -Kell
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 3
grreat job, kel!! i love this story!! love the words the creature leaves behind with each killing, so very cool!! can't wait to read more!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, bambers. I'm glad you're enjoying. And thanks again for the beta'ing, I really appreciate you taking the time - K
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, this is exciting! I love how you keep going to different people's point-of-views as they become the creature's victim...it's a really cool back-and-forth thing going on...yeah, really great chapter!!! Hope you write more soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Shiny, love how you're always so enthusiastic...lol. Glad you're enjoying and I'll update soon -K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
lol, dictation the new code word for sex with my boss ?! Good chapter, waiting for more as always...
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed... going to have to wait a bit for an update, so sorry. I'll hurry as fast as I can.. - Kell
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chappy! I thought it was nice the way you switched things up and had the secretary hitting on Sam insteand of Dean...Interesting development...so "traitor" that should be a clue to us reading I guess!
Author's Response: Yeah, hey Sam walks through the door and I'm going to hit on him, Dean girl or not, the boy's hot!!!! - thanks as always for reading - Kell
Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
another awesome story!! i cant wait to read more =)
Author's Response: Thanks Katie, more's on the way. Thanks for taking the time to review I really appreciate it - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
So intriguing. This building is haunted or what. Now, I'm hooked and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: We shall see, thanks as always for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it - K
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oooh, this is very intriguing! Hope another chapter comes along soon! Waiting on edge to find out what's going on...
Author's Response: I'll update soon I promise...Glad you enjoyed the chapter.. K
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ha ha, I can just imagine Dean doing this: instead of trying to save himself, he's just going off to hunt stuff. Great! And I really liked the mood you created at the beginning of the story with Pete; creepy and a great hook!
Author's Response: Thanks Shiny, glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to review, I always appreciate hearing what people think. - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hhmmmm... Lots going on here - you are weaving quite a lot into this one... I'm thinking that there has to be something up with Mertz... For sure Carla has to be more than she seems - she sounds like she likes cylons...! - your wish is my command? very creepy..... Always waiting for more.....
Author's Response: Ah, lam. We're getting to the baddy, but the trip is half the fun.. so sit back and enjoy the ride...lol. thanks as always for the caring...K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yep, agree with gengen - this title sure caught my eye. I am curious as to where this will go Kell. Great start! Like that you mention Dean's "time frame". I am sure you will work on that a little more in the future. Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Well, here it goes next update. Glad you're enjoying so far, and thanks as always for letting me know that your thoughts. - Kell
Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh! I'm excited for this one! Great chapter, please continue soon!
Author's Response: Oh, I will. Thanks for taking the time to review it, makes me post faster...lol thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Terrific start K. Can't wait to know what's about. More soon please.
Author's Response: Planning on posting soon, though I'm not sure how many questions will get answered...lol thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
So far so good.
Author's Response: So glad I was able to keep you reading today - lol....I'll update soon - K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
*grins* The title peaked my interest...I had to see what this story was about...very criptic so far but I like criptic...am looking forward to the next installments...I'm SO breaking my rule not to read any in-progress stories while I'm writing! I have to stop looking at the most recent page! I've been sucked into this one and Bamber's newest one too...and that's just today! As always I am in awe of your imagination and finesse at weaving your tales! Oka enough babbling! you know it means I like it when my review is almost as long as your story! ;oP
Author's Response: Thanks so much Gen, you're always too sweet, I'll update soon.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn! You let them finish building the building - I was hoping for sweatyconstructionworker!Dean..... Cool start anyway! Have to settle for coolgambling!Dean.... So a "haunted" building perhaps? sounds too obvious though....
Author's Response: Yep can't have Dean get that close to Atlantic City and not do a bit of gambling....lol. Thanks for reading and the reviews
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
great start, Atlantic City, that could be fun... Gonna be there to see where this leads Kel...
Author's Response: As always Fredo, thanks hope you enjoy - Kell
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
can i tell you how excited i am about this story!! i just really love the idea of it, and can't wait to see where it leads!! you have captured my two favorite subjects in one story...so bring on the next chappy!!! great job, kel!! bambers;)
Author's Response: lol, thanks bambers, and I appreciate the excitment makes me really want to take it to the limit - Thanks for reading and the beta work...Kell
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