Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
Thought you were going one way, went completely in the other. Nice changeover.Surprised me. Congrats.
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is a really great read, but I want Sam to stop being hurt. :) I will, of course, keep reading, cause this is good stuff, well done. I appreciate the fact that with your other stuff, if it's death fic, you warn. I can't read that. It's just too freaking hard.
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Excellent!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 4
The passage about "the heart can only take so much" was beautiful! What's in the box that Sam opened to rid himself of the demon? And why was the demon able to use it to possess Sam in the first place? Even when I get answers I still have more questions. :) How can you work on more than one story at a time? You must be Bat Girl.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
It's been such a long time since I started reading this story that I didn't remember it and had to re-read the first two chapters. Wow! I must have been tired when I read them the first time because I still didn't remember them and they're very memorable. Also, my reviews were so generic and boring. Fabulous chapters! The suspense, the mystery, the drama--- intense! You described Dean's panic and helplessness exquisitely. Sam's condition in the first chapter gave me goosebumps. I could picture that scene in my head and it was creepy! I can't believe what's happening to Sam and that no one is able to figure out what it is. At first I thought voodoo doll then witch's curse but you already ruled both those out. then I thought maybe it was the hotel. but you made me think it was an extension of Sam's demonic powers or possession. Man, I can't wait to find out what's happening!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 5
"How do you feel about tattoos, Sammy?" Not funny . . . quit smirking Dean. Only complainment is the words are in type 9 or 8. Other then that it was a very classy one to even scare the living hell from me. Meaneeeeeeeeeeee. Rating:) 100++++ Kid if this is not good enough let e know lamix1mana@yahoo.com
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
I think another chapter or two would do.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
AAAAHHHH, shucks treat yourself to pizza and a cold drink. This was a bit knocked off, but I forgive you.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 2
big brown eyes (they are hazel dear.) Well, being that you have created a time bomb story . . . I promise to review, I promise. I like the face value of the story itself . . . my mentality thinks that it may be SAM that is doing this to himself its the damn freakish power. Probably a new one or their is a perverted demon that has not come out yet. What got me interested was the point of view between the first dr. and Dean how he himself thought his own brother was doing it some how. As well as the image to how he defended SAM's name . . . he never liked Samuel its SAM and not how he jokes around with SAMMY. A very good point of how triumphant he was with the second dr. s well as the first. Why has he not called BOBBY though.
Author's Response: hahahah about the eyes - im a total dope. yeah,back when i wrote this, i had this weird weird image in my head that sams eyes were brown brown borwn, whereas now that i've met the man in person, i know for a fact that his eyes are holyfrigginBLUE, bluer than the sky in june kind of blue, it's crazy. but yeah, thanks for reading past my obvious flub. i intend to go back over all of my old fics and edit them a bit soon, but i need to get back into the swing of fanfic, it's been a while. i've got some new ideas... thanks so much for the reviews tho, makes it all worthwhile. :]
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, now you are totaly scaring me. Your sense of humor is shocking. I know this is a story, but inside of me I can feel the sense that Dean is going through. This is an expetional and fantastic start for the story. ? why hasn't Dean called BOBBY for assistance to this and 2ndly I don't think SAM would try to do something like this. I bet that in your forat of writing that BOHEMITH DEMON will present itself. I a a true devoted fanatic to SAM, and like DEAN i'd like to know who or what is screwing with him.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 5
A perfect ending, thanks for writing.
Author's Response: you're very welcome
Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
ok, so i stumbled across this by chance and decided to read it. i thought it was really good. however, it did occur to me that there could somehow be a demon trying to possess him before it was actually revealed - but i was surprised i was right...and i loved the last line. this story fits perfectly between BUaBS and JiB...anyway, i really enjoyed it and i will probably be checking out some of your other stuff now, so you can look forward to more reviews from me...
Author's Response: Definitely looking forward to it, thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you suspected the demon as the culprit - I was dropping lil hints, and I was hoping people would be wondering, but the element of surprise at the reveal was still important to me, so I'm glad I succeeded at that. Thanks for reviewing - means a lot.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
Love it! Be rewarded, 'cause that was a great ending and although it is abrupt, it's a perfect way to finish the story. Really liked the stream of conciousness section - poor Dean, sitting there so alone... It really highlighted the solitude around him, the feeling that he just can't function without Sam there. Andthen they find a kind of resolution - though I'd love to see your take on them actually getting the tattoos as a sequel - loaded with all the added guilt from this story! Thank you for writing! Cal
Author's Response: Hm, perhaps an epiloguish sequel? The idea of them being angsty and possibly arguing while getting tats appeals to me..... Perhaps I'll do it. Lemme think about it. If I do, it will be dedicated to you ^_^
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
I liked Dean's monologue while he was in the hospital.
Author's Response: Yay. I often say I believe people think in run-on sentences and dramatic conclusions. Dean is the apex of this in my writing.
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse (Signed) · Date: 26/10/08 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 4
it needs an ending. i'm a glutton for hurt!sam and maybe a joke or something between the brothers to finish with but this ending doesn't really sate me. and after the heartattack or whatever it is that sam had how does SAm come out of it? totally up to you but i would give an ending to this kiara
Reviewer: icidar (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
Utterly gripping story! Please one more chapter :)
Reviewer: sandy (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
great story but come on you know we want to see sam recover
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
Thanks for updating this story. Excellent job writing Sam being possessed. Very exciting chapter. There definitely needs to be another chapter to conclude this story.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
omg.... this story has been so powerful from the beginning!!!! each chapter just added to the suspense and angst and terror for the boys!!!!AWESOME writing!!!!!!!!!! you have an amazing way of setting up your stories and keeping your readers hanging on each word!!!OUTSTANDING job!!!!!!!!! you know the boys well and it shows in all of your stories. I would go with another chapter to give us an idea how Sam dealt with this- you are an amazing storyteller and writer. Your vivid verbage and sense of the dramatic is beyond words. I look for your stories every time I am on the site. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great story!! I'm glad to see it back as I've been waiting for it a long time. I really think you should do at least one more chapter. We really need more chick-flick from the boys. You know us girls can't do without it. Give us more!!!
Reviewer: hgarf (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
Because you write so well and because I've really enjoyed this story and because I am a complete sap and love all the brotherly "chick-flick" moments I think you should write another chapter even if its short. We could have emotional girlie weeping and guilt from Sam and Dean pretending to be tough and cool and failing miserably at both cos he doesn't fool Sam or us! Go for it!!!
Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
Either is fine with me--great story!!just enough of everything I like about the boys in this. You did a great job with the dialogue between the boys---loved it!!!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
It's a good ending, but one more chapter would be nice. just so they could have a little talk about things, but only if you have time.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
omg - you're killing me with this one! incredibly powerful writing - the line: 'Dean wasn't surprised in the slightest not to find a pulse coming from his bab brother, but that didn't stop him from trying to persuade it to come back. Breathe, compressions, breathe compressions. It came back eventually.' is just stunning - you can see them there so clearly, Dean desperately working on Sam, dislocated shoulder and all (and oh, we do love a good dislocatin here, don't we?), begging him to come back, and the relief when he does, tempered by the fear... *shivers* beautiful! And loved the ending! it is a nice place to leave it, although there is still the potential for a bit of angst and a chick-flick moment, trying to come to terms with what happened to them both. Great job, whatever you decide to do!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
wow - missed the updates on this, but i'm glad i finally found it again! and yeah "Wait...what?" in the last chapter, and yeah, "WHAT?!" in this one - but in a very, very good way! You got us so focussed on Sam's psychic powers that the idea of a demon just came out of nowhere... now i'm gonna find out what the hell happens next!
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