Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

great read so far.

Sam as bait............Dean's plan better work.

i hate cliffhangers............hopefully chapter 8 will be along shortly.

rbliss 

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

LOL Dean is adorable! He's a civil war geek! LOVED the whole "head" pun thing! Very Dean! Great chappy!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

Another intense chapter! Sam is gonna kick Dean's ass for going there without him! So he's blinded the horse...but will it remained blinded? And it's running straight at Dean...so not good!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow that was intense! Sammy just got knocked out...Not Good!  Reading on to see what's next!

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love the idea of them hunting the headless horseman – classic mythology.  Good, real conversation between the two brothers. Can't wait to see what happens from here!

Good descriptions. Examples, these simple actions or events were vivid due to your writing: Following his brother, Dean perched on a long narrow bench against the wall, stretched and watched as Sam trailed his fingers across the wooden surface of one of the numerous arched windows. "So why do you think the Horseman can’t cross this bridge?"& Red lights flashed through the darkness, and both boys stared at the EMF clutched tightly in Dean’s hand. In the distance, they both heard the faint sounds of horse hooves cutting across the quiet of the night, mingling with the whistling sound of the reader.

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

oooo, what a cliffhanger. sorry it took me so long to finally read this, i have been crazy busy. great chapter. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm so glad you made George sharp-witted and technology savvy!  so many people stereotype the elderly into kinldy, dottering seniors. 

Is your information concerning the Van Tessel family accurate or created to improve the quality of the story?  It sounds very impressive either way.

I like that you presented the information on the weapons in w manner that was eduacational, but not tedious or boring.

Dean getting to fire a cannon!  He's died and gone to heaven!

Author's Response:

Yeah I really researched into the weapons and the family.  So glad to hear it's appreciated -thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

Interesting bit about not being able to consciously help who you were attracted to.  True 'dat!

Good thinking on Dean's part with the seeing eye horse.  I guess I don't think logic applies to spirits.  Good job!

Author's Response: Yeah, well hard to have much sympathy for a horse that keeps kicking the stuffing out of the boys - thanks

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

Clever using your penname in your story.

Lots of action in this chapter.  Very entertaining.  Eager to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi-love the way this story is shaping up-you've obviosuyl put a lot of work into the researching aspect too and it's really paying off! i love ti!-keep up the good work! -Aliyssa x

Author's Response:

I'm so glad people are appreciating the research, I really enjoyed doing - K

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

Well, then, you can have lots of M&Ms, 'cause this was an awesome chapter! I love Dean's enthusiasm with the guns and especially the cannons!!! It would be awesome if he shot a cannon off in the show, for some random reason...oh my gosh that would be hilarious...all right, I'm very interested to know what's coming up!!! You must have researched this very thoroughly...I love how it's still very mysterious even though this is a widely known legend!!!

Author's Response:

So glad you're having fun with the story, that's always great to hear

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6

so sorry i havnt been reviewing. i am loving this story, great job, and i loved your attention to detail in this chapter. it's obvious that you did your homework :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Devonshire, Yeah lots of research glad you noticed.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent job! Now if only we could get Kripke to make a Headless Horseman episode...!!! I like how you're keeping everything moving very swiftly...action-packed! Great job, waiting (im)patiently for more!!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, wouldn't it be great to see the boys in Sleepy Hollow.. Well who knows, maybe in the future.. Season six sounds good to me..lol